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Review of Who am I ?  
Review by Motivated_Man
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Dear rising writer *Writing*,
I'm about to review your work titled "Who am I ?" *BookOpen*

*StarDavid*

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Welcome dear Newbie!

Yeah, as you were arguing into your poem, sometimes there are things that happening that make people a little bit confuse while watching them in real life and asking themselves if it's true or if it is just a dream. I found your work realistic and emotional too. But the emotional part, for my concern, was just seen at the end of the poem when you were talking about that dear person on the border you had to reach and also when you've mentioned the child case.

I think you have enough potential to make this poem a wonderful one while giving some touch on its format and look at on the punctuation side.

You did a good job on it. So, keep writing and consider yourself as at a second home with magnificent people ready to help you even if you're wearing a veil or not, it doesn't matter. In fact, your growth as an writer is the matter.

Good luck! *Delight*



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Review of The Door  
Review by Motivated_Man
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Dear rising writer *Writing*,
I'm about to review your work titled "The Door" *BookOpen*

*StarDavid*

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Well welcome between us dear Newbie. Consider yourself as being at a second home with wonderful people ready to help you grow.

Without looking at anything else than the text, I thought that your short poem was referring to two children preparing themselves for going to school. This was my first impression until I've noticed that one of the genre you chose to identify it was Death. So then, I understand that you were talking about something else than what was my first impression. That way, I found it really contrasted.

By curiosity
Question: Will you continue it?
Reason: It's kind like there's something you don't tell the reader yet.



Anyway, you did a good job. Keep writing.



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Review of A Haiku  
Review by Motivated_Man
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Dear rising writer *Writing*,
I'm about to review your work titled "A Haiku" *BookOpen*

*StarDavid*

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Well welcome dear Newbie!

I've counted a number of 17 syllables which is successively partitioned into 5, 7 and 5 syllables. Seeing that and from what I've read about a Haiku, yours reunites all the conditions to be considered as one.

Allusion and comparison can be noticed additionally related to the subject of nature.

You did a good job and don't forget to keep writing!



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Review of Grandma.  
Review by Motivated_Man
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Dear rising writer *Writing*,
I'm about to review your work titled "Grandma." *BookOpen*

*StarDavid*

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Well welcome dear Newbie.

What a coincidence! You know what, this year I've lost my Grandma and reading your work just remind me about her death. Don't worry, It's FINE!

So, regarding your poem, I found it simple, realistic and completely emotional even being related to death.

You did a good job on this. And, feel there (at WDC) as a second home!



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Review of What am I?  
Review by Motivated_Man
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Dear rising writer *Writing*,
I'm about to review your work titled "What am I?" *BookOpen*

*StarDavid*

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WOW!
Firstly, I have to say that you did a good job. I found it simple, contrasted enough to attract readers curiosity and attention.

Secondly, I love it definitely. The time passed reading it was like moving up and moving down referring to each separate part. My favorite part of it was:
"Something that cost greatly,
Yet is absolutely free"


Keep writing! And, feel comfortable as being at home here.


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Review of not sure.....  
Review by Motivated_Man
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Dear rising writer *Writing*,
I'm about to review your work titled "not sure....." *BookOpen*

*StarDavid*

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Well welcome between us dear Newbie!

About your work, I think that what you did on this brief prologue gained my appreciation (revealing the truth as superpower) *Whistle*. Although, I found it well written, even brief it's understandable and it was easy for me to pay close attention on the progression.

You did a good job. Keep writing and I'm sure that the upcoming will be great.



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Review of Chosen  
Review by Motivated_Man
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Dear rising writer *Writing*,
I'm about to review your work titled "Chosen" *BookOpen*



Fantastic for a fantasy piece of work.

It was well written; you provide enough information to the reader to easily follow the progression of the entire story. The characters seem to me believable and amazing while acting.

You did a good job and I enjoyed the time passing reading your work.

Keep writing




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Review of Clouds  
Review by Motivated_Man
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Dear rising writer *Writing*,
I'm about to review your work titled "Clouds" *BookOpen*

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I think you did well on this poem. It was easy for me to follow the ideas expressed through the verses. It appeared vivid, quite descriptive and well inspired.

Remark: In the first line of the second strophe you wrote:
"Clouds rise up a down"
I think you wanted to say
"Clouds rise up and down"
If it is not, that's OK. Just explain it to me.

After all, I appreciate it. Clouds it's also a source of inspiration for me while fixing them, specially, the moon night.

Keep writing!


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Review of Calamity  
Review by Motivated_Man
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Rated: E | (2.0)
Hello Dear rising writer *Writing*,
I'm about to review your work titled "Calamity" *BookOpen*

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A well welcome between us dear Newbie.

I have made the choice to review your work because it's quite related to what happened in my country about 5 years ago. An earthquake on a magnitude of 7.3 bring deaths, injuries into our society. Thanks God, I survived but not all of us did as some people was able to.

I don't know if you were inspired by someone's story or if you were living such bad situation, but I have to say that your work while reading it can bring people into it. Also, expressing the same feeling, well done.

Nevertheless, as a suggestion, I could advise you to work on punctuation(where to space or not wright after a punctuation sign), Capitalization.

Finally, it was a pleasure for me to read your work. Keep writing!


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Review of Help Us Help YOU!  
Review by Motivated_Man
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Dear rising writer *Writing*,
I'm about to review your work titled "Help Us Help YOU!" *BookOpen*

*FenceBr* ____*Leaf*__*Leaf2Br*__ *LeafBr*__*Leaf2G*__*LeafO*__*Leaf2R*__*LeafY*____
*VinylB*


Thank you for those informations. Of course "YES", they are really useful. I'll make a good use of them. *Wink*

*VinylR*
____*Grass* __*Tree*__ *Grass*__*TreePine*__ *Grass*__*TreeFall*__*Grass*____ *FenceBr*


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Review by Motivated_Man
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Dear rising writer *Writing*,
I'm about to review your work titled "What are you doing...David Liu? " *BookOpen*

*FenceBr* ____*Leaf*__*Leaf2Br*__ *LeafBr*__*Leaf2G*__*LeafO*__*Leaf2R*__*LeafY*____
*VinylB*


Well welcome between us dear Newbie.

I found interesting the time passed reading your work.

It seems like you find another place to show it to the public. And, I can assure you that here at writing.com, you're just like in a second home.

Nice job and keep writing!


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Review of Losers  
Review by Motivated_Man
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Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
Hello Dear rising writer *Writing*,
I'm about to review your work titled "Losers" *BookOpen*

*FenceBr* ____*Leaf*__*Leaf2Br*__ *LeafBr*__*Leaf2G*__*LeafO*__*Leaf2R*__*LeafY*____
*VinylB*


Well welcome between us dear Newbie. Consider this place(writing.com) as a second home.

This is an original way of writing, I have to say. I see that you use the "Â" character a lot in your fiction piece. Is it a code or a kind of alien communication used by them in your work.


*VinylR*
____*Grass* __*Tree*__ *Grass*__*TreePine*__ *Grass*__*TreeFall*__*Grass*____ *FenceBr*


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Review by Motivated_Man
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello Dear rising writer *Writing*,
I'm about to review your work titled "Family Drama, Angels, and Karma" *BookOpen*

*FenceBr* ____*Leaf*__*Leaf2Br*__ *LeafBr*__*Leaf2G*__*LeafO*__*Leaf2R*__*LeafY*____
*VinylB*


Thank you of making the choice of me as a reviewer of your work.

At the beginning, I have to say that it took me times before having a clear idea about the entire story but this doesn't mean you didn't do a good job! I had to read it more than three times *Reading*.
And from that, even if you don't want to give a lot of details about what was at the basis of this "Facebook war", personally I recommend you to do so. Somehow, there's a way you can try to incorporate "the main reason of that war" without impressing the private, personal and family side. It will help the reader a lot with understanding and being able to share the same feeling as it was for you.

Also, you can break the entire story into paragraphs. It will be beautiful for the eyes to admire.

Instead of placing the message sent by your sister and the lyrics to song at the end of the story, you could add them right after where you're referring to them but in a different format than the original story(maybe Italic, colored, different size).

So as a resume, I enjoyed reading your work regarding your personal experience. In fact, it is not easy to convince people and more difficult it could be when you're trying to do it with beloved family members while they're doing it otherwise. I think your faith in God help you pass that situation ahead.

Be an angel for us too(members of WDC)


*VinylR*
____*Grass* __*Tree*__ *Grass*__*TreePine*__ *Grass*__*TreeFall*__*Grass*____ *FenceBr*


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Review by Motivated_Man
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Dear rising writer *Writing*,
I'm about to review your work titled "Saviors of the World" *BookOpen*

*FenceBr* ____*Leaf*__*Leaf2Br*__ *LeafBr*__*Leaf2G*__*LeafO*__*Leaf2R*__*LeafY*____
*VinylB*


Well welcome between us Zach Wong!

I just want to tell you that once you have decided to be part of Writing.com community consider that half of your concern(grammar mistakes and poor English writing) already solved. Because, there's too much things around the website that can help you improving them.

Then, I'm waiting to know the truth through your writing.

Keep writing dear Newbie!


*VinylR*
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Review of Fragmented Minds  
Review by Motivated_Man
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Dear rising writer *Writing*,
I'm about to review your work titled "Fragmented Minds" *BookOpen*


*FenceBr* ____*Leaf*__*Leaf2Br*__ *LeafBr*__*Leaf2G*__*LeafO*__*Leaf2R*__*LeafY*____
*VinylB*


That's a good work! From it I can understand how is the life of someone who's experiencing this kind of illness. Not only the words used have shown it well but also its organization(lines) which really kept my attention.

Thanks for sharing it!


*VinylR*
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Review by Motivated_Man
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Dear rising writer *Writing*,
I'm about to review your work titled "Read This; It's FREE!" *BookOpen*

*FenceBr* ____*Leaf*__*Leaf2Br*__ *LeafBr*__*Leaf2G*__*LeafO*__*Leaf2R*__*LeafY*____
*VinylB*


Ouch! An essay like that could break someone's heart.

Great article which deserves to be rated by 5 more stars. *Star* *Star* *Star* *Star* *Star*

Sometimes we encounter certain kind of situations that are designed to destroy us even though we know sincerely that what we are doing is good and just. This is life improvement, I have to say! But, it's all about you to know exactly what to do to overcome those negative thoughts that badly damaging your positive spirit. While reading this article, I think it's just the right choice that you have made.

What you're doing through Writing.com is AWESOME and it gives more than writing but also freedom. Freedom to growth as a writer whatever our level, experiences and even ages.

The work have just started and your mission hasn't done yet. So, stay strong and don't stop being ingenious too. *Wink*


*VinylR*
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Review of Relativity  
Review by Motivated_Man
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Dear rising writer *Writing*,
I'm about to review your work titled "Relativity" *BookOpen*


*FenceBr* ____*Leaf*__*Leaf2Br*__ *LeafBr*__*Leaf2G*__*LeafO*__*Leaf2R*__*LeafY*____
*VinylB*


That's a great work.

Understandable and quite related to the present reality of people's life. While someone can see life as Hell incarnated in earth, someone else can see it as Heaven. But, in a few words, this is all about how you interpret what you see and what's happening to you during a day.

I enjoyed the time passed reading your Short Story


*VinylR*
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Review by Motivated_Man
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Dear rising writer *Writing*,
I'm about to review your work titled "A Short Story: An Angel" *BookOpen*


*FenceBr* ____*Leaf*__*Leaf2Br*__ *LeafBr*__*Leaf2G*__*LeafO*__*Leaf2R*__*LeafY*____
*VinylB*


Welcome to WDC!

Well written because as the ideas flow, I didn't have problems to follow the entire short story. But, there's one question: "Why were the character looking for an angel?"
(Hmm, just by curiosity!)
*RollEyes*


*VinylR*
____*Grass* __*Tree*__ *Grass*__*TreePine*__ *Grass*__*TreeFall*__*Grass*____ *FenceBr*


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Review by Motivated_Man
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello Dear rising writer *Writing*,
I'm about to review your work titled "Your Champions Cry" *BookOpen*


*FenceBr* ____*Leaf*__*Leaf2Br*__ *LeafBr*__*Leaf2G*__*LeafO*__*Leaf2R*__*LeafY*____
*VinylB*


Your message is completely well received because you said it well.
Of course, once we have left the right way, God and the angels seem to be disappointed about our choice. But, God is full of love and always, whatever the bad things we have done, waiting for us with opened arms while making the right choice to join Him into the light.

I really appreciate it.


*VinylR*
____*Grass* __*Tree*__ *Grass*__*TreePine*__ *Grass*__*TreeFall*__*Grass*____ *FenceBr*


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Review of My Bio  
Review by Motivated_Man
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello Dear rising writer *Writing*,
I'm about to review your work titled "My Bio" *BookOpen*



*FenceBr* ____*Leaf*__*Leaf2Br*__ *LeafBr*__*Leaf2G*__*LeafO*__*Leaf2R*__*LeafY*____
*VinylB*


It was a pleasure for me to know about you from what I have read through those lines.

In fact, you're in the right place and with wonderful people in that Community to manifesting the kind of love you're expressing for WRITING.

You're just in a second home.


*VinylR*
____*Grass* __*Tree*__ *Grass*__*TreePine*__ *Grass*__*TreeFall*__*Grass*____ *FenceBr*


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Review of Space Holder  
Review by Motivated_Man
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Dear rising writer *Writing*,
I'm about to review your work titled "Space Holder" *BookOpen*

*FenceBr* ____*Leaf*__*Leaf2Br*__ *LeafBr*__*Leaf2G*__*LeafO*__*Leaf2R*__*LeafY*____
*VinylB*


That is true! (sentimental and ingenious too)


*VinylR*
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Review of New Today  
Review by Motivated_Man
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Dear rising writer,
*Geek*
I'm about to review your work titled "New Today" *PenB*--*PenG*--*PenR*--*PenY*--*Pencil*

*Web1*
*WitchHat*
*Web2*


Nothing to say as criticism (as a negative one). I found your work well written; simple; easy to understand. In return, I just want to share this with you, maybe it could be a piece of inspirations also.
“The past was but will never be again; the future will be but is not already; Only the present is. Only in the present you’ll be able to determine how wonderful you want your past to be after seeing the future you wish to hold”

Good work and keep writing!


*Web3*
*Witchlegs1* *Witchlegs2*
*Web4*


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Review of Thank You  
Review by Motivated_Man
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Dear rising writer,
*Geek*
I'm about to review your work titled "__________" *PenB*--*PenG*--*PenR*--*PenY*--*Pencil*

*Web1*
*WitchHat*
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Yeah, you're right!
Until now, no one and nothing can replace what a mother means to his children. Why is that? Because, nothing on earth is able to give birth as she can do it with all the pains she have to endure that day.
The words you have used to write this piece make it wonderful, vivid and emotionally reflects the kind of message you want to share with your readers; also it expresses the perfect link between a MOM and DAUGHTER.

You did a good work. She cannot be dead if you still have a place on your memory for her.

So keep writing! And be strong as she wanted you to be.

*Web3*
*Witchlegs1* *Witchlegs2*
*Web4*


This is just one point of view towards a lot you can find in this community.
Wish this help you to fulfill your writing journey.


Motivated_Man
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Review of VIGNETTE  
Review by Motivated_Man
Rated: E | (2.0)
Hi Massimo,
Well welcome to the community of WDC. I appreciate your work. It was interesting, absolutely vivid and it provided me amusement also.
Hope to see more works from you!

-By the way, are those people keep waiting for that day to come? (LOL)
-I wish the bird keeps it promise!


Best regards!


Motivated_Man


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Review of Cheerleader  
Review by Motivated_Man
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi doc15,
To be honest, I've read your piece of work more than once. And, this is not because it was difficult for me to understand or to freely express my thoughts on it. I was impress about how you manage your abilities to find the right words to use and suprisingly come-up with an emotional and positive work like that.

You made a wonderful one! I really love it. If it's not life experience maybe it can be someone's situation or the future of someone. Fortunately, the end helps having hope by the way.

Remark: you missed something in this sentence, (Lexi had always looked out for me, showed me what do; my own personal cheerleader.)



Good JOB and WELCOME TO WDC!!!



Motivated_Man


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