I enjoyed the concept behind the story. It seems like something that would make for a good book.
The item is well written and easy to read.
I don't feel that there was enough in this piece to feel like a complete story even for a short.
It feels like there is a looming darkness about what is going on around the character. Even with the very little we get to see as a reader, it is obvious there is a lot going on.
So far I like the main character and want to know more about here, why she is where she is and how the rules of the world work.
More or Less/Where:
More for sure. Even as a stand alone piece I want to know more about what she is/does. Why she forgets, why the soldiers don't. All around, more expansion on the story or more entries so that over the course of the stories we learn what is going on in bits and pieces.
I recommend this to people who enjoy war stories from the characters not directly involved.
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