Twisted sort of a tale with a kinda morality to its ending. Fine writing, but would have liked a bit more characterization. Found it hard to love/hate the protagonist, he seemed shallow and undefined.
Interesting story, you got me hooked instantly. Would have liked to know more about the strange creatures, though. Very descriptive wordplay, I like this, give me more detail about the time traveler, the enigmatic Moonchild, what the world's like for our hero. Keep up the good work.
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