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Review by gwell66
Rated: E | (4.0)
Sorry I missed a request to review this!

What a great metaphor for someone recognizing that a former loving partner has now become, cold, distant and loveless.

You can't force someone to love you no matter what you pour into them just as you cannot mold a hardened, lifeless husk of clay.

My only criticism (and it may have just been me but) something feels flat in the opening few lines.
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