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Review of Unknown Mystery  
Review by Sasha Renee
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is very, very good! Has a good flow, good rhythm, good wording, its definitely right up there with some of the classics in my opinion. "I'm not trying to paint the villain on your reputation's face" best line ever!!
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Review of The Red Caravan  
Review by Sasha Renee
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This really peaked my interest, hoping there will be later instalments. I like it.
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Review of Need to Fight  
Review by Sasha Renee
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is fantastic! The portrait you paint with your lyrics is heart stopping. I would love to hear the music accompaniment to this and would think it is a message that needs to be heard on the airwaves. There is power to move the masses with lyrics that speak of truths overlooked by simpletons. I really dig it! In the words if Jerry Garcia "Far out man."
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Review of Protest Project  
Review by Sasha Renee
Rated: E | (4.0)
This resonates with the sadness our world has fallen to. Such a shame. I hear this with a wailing, lonesome guitar in the background.
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Review by Sasha Renee
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow! Amazing! I heard this with a rockin, heavy metal riff with a slow bridge peppered throughout! This blew me away for real! The word usage, the flow that just joins together with no ripples. Made me think of Metallica. I'd for sure crank it up on the radio, so if you ever make it big, I got dibs on a CD! Thanks for that b**tchin write!
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Review by Sasha Renee
Rated: E | (4.0)
I love how you use your words to show how musicians use their craft as an outlet for whatever they're feeling, whether it be rage, list, depression, anything and everyhing is game to a musician. And, its more than poetry, because then you have the aspect and flow of music along with the lyrics. I really like piece.
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Review of SHRED  
Review by Sasha Renee
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dude!! This is freakin bad a**! I love it! I could see this whole scenario in my minds eye! I dig the h**l, out of it! Sorry language, this story was just so good, I got excited!
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Review by Sasha Renee
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Wow! This mesmerized me! The way you wove the tapestry of same letter words together was amazing, and the whole moral to this piece is very tantalizing. Keep up the good work!
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Review of A MAZE IN POETRY  
Review by Sasha Renee
Rated: E | (3.5)
I really relate to the last four lines of this, but am kinda confused as to if you mean too many words or not enough words diminish the finish? And honestly, I need guidance in this area for real. Do tell....
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Review by Sasha Renee
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Wow! Awesome, I really like this, especially the dark twist at the ending! And posed some really valid questions of life. Also, the statement "We live to die." So true, plainly spoken, I dig this write. Keep up the good work!
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Review of Just a Dream  
Review by Sasha Renee
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wow! Brutal! Weird, but as soon as I started reading this violent trip through you mind, (and I say that with all due respect) it resonated with me. I knew before I read it, that you were either in current addiction or have struggled with addiction. We the struggle is real and you are not alone! This spoke to me on so many levels, thank you for sharing something so delicate and personal.
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Review of Listen To Me!  
Review by Sasha Renee
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I appreciate this article very much. I am a huge music buff, and I agree that what you take away from a song or poem is just as much of an impact as some of the personal aspect put into an original writing. I also thank you for turning me on to some new music, I'm definitely going to check him out. He sounds familiar so you never know, I may know the song you referenced. Personally, I think whenever original poetry has elements of real life experiences, it makes the piece more resonate to my spirit. Some of my writings consist of nothing more than major issues penned onto paper. Those pieces ended up being some of my best. If I were you, I'd inject some personal themes to give your writing a well rounded feel, because what better way to express a thought or feeling than by experience.
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Review by Sasha Renee
Rated: E | (3.5)
What these teens, who snuff out innocent fetuses, don't realize, is that someone out there would cherish those abandoned,murdered children. But how can you explain that to children having children?
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Review by Sasha Renee
Rated: E | (4.0)
Miraculous
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Review by Sasha Renee
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Enlightening words of wisdom
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Review by Sasha Renee
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
It's refreshing to see someone who sees the world as truth instead of lies, the is a fine line though between spiritual gifts and witchcraft...
Beware having traversed both sides.
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Review by Sasha Renee
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful
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Review by Sasha Renee
Rated: E | (4.5)
Words of wisdom
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Review by Sasha Renee
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Moving and knowledgeable
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Review of The Cheshire Cat  
Review by Sasha Renee
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love the last line
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Review by Sasha Renee
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
So awesome it flows freely, I love this
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Review by Sasha Renee
Rated: E | (3.5)
Dig the weaving of athstetic words
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Review by Sasha Renee
Rated: E | (3.0)
This is thought provoking
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Review by Sasha Renee
Rated: E | (3.5)
Even the Antichrist has a place in God's plan, may be doing evil in the name of good? Who knows?
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Review by Sasha Renee
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Sounds like a warning of the future to come, to me
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