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Hi Calvin, this review is for your shower.
Really creative and cute idea!
I love the way you throw in a little rhyme here and there. It really adds to the whole Fairytale!
I especially like the spell for the love potion. "Pumpkin seeds and bread of rye, pull the wool over his eyes!" Great line.
I thought it was a great touch to make her wear a black satin dress and her shoes to be darkened glass. Maybe the reflection of her heart.
Having the element of surprise by ending with Elizabetha as the Author was a nice touch.
No real problems. One suggestion would be to use the word steed for the carriage ride sentence, which would eliminate the spell to drive itself.
I really enjoyed the story!
My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .