I have read this so many times and each time I can feel your hurt but dont understand why or how snyone could hurt such a beautiful sweet person this way. I have read all your poems over and over and even seen your beautiful sweet face. Please trust me. Be proud of not only your writing but yourself. You are so sweet and kind and I am so proud to call you my friend. Scottie...
It has been awhile since I read any of your poems and this one touched me even more than the first. I read this over and over and closed my eyey and figured it out. If I knew this lucky person this was intended for I would tell him take the hand and hold on. You are about to be led right into Heaven. This is so beautiful ans so well written. When he reads it how coud he ever forget the end "I love you" It is beautiful. Scottie
I read every one and enjoyed each poem I read. You write from your heart every word. That is why it is so enjoyable to stay in your port. May your day be bright and God bless you.
This is so beautiful because it is written from your heart. Someone is very lucky and I hope they realize it before it is to late. Just don't give up on your dreams.
This is so special...Please be my friend...Just remember I am probable much older and I just want to be friends...Your poems are honest and from your heart..That is why they are so good...Your friend Scottie
You have a very special gift..If I read your stories or the e-mails you send to me, it is as if I have know you all my life. I have met so many at wdc that their heart over flows with love and some spilled on me. I want it to stay there for ever and never go away. Your friend forever Scottie
I think it is good... I will make some suggestions and mail them to you but the words are perfect in my opinion. We will put some white space in it and it will be easier readung but not take out or add one word..Then we will work on the next part...Scottie
It is beautiful. Why don't you make the nine month later edition into chapter two and you will get some reviews ands a lot of reads. It is a good ending. I bet you could dig a chapter three out of this. You are great...Scottie
Such a beautiful love story. I wish you would review one of mine. It is called Holly and Bailey. Give me your opinion. It is nothing as great as you write but tell me what you think. Scottie
I don't do many 5 ratings but I did this time because there was not a 8 to give you, I love this story. Guess What. I may have a dark side too. lol j/k
Thias was a great story and a great read. Waiting for more. Scottie
I love it...Sorta looks like my writing before I do spell check. I don't know why jeet is not in spell check. Cuz everybody eats and sometime you get asked if you eat or not.
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