I didn't know which way this was going to go for you in doing this piece. I thought it was to a loved one or maybe God. Well, there is always the lie that God doesnt' care about someone when He does all the time care about you and the other people in this planet. He cares deeply and wil prove Himself to you as you allow Him to do so. Keep writing.
Sounds like an election went bad somewhere along the line. One with the fervor of a policitican and the other one for the people was pinted with the words you used that I got fromthe message. You did wel in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job and it shows how well you did for there are no errors on the page. Keep writing.
Well this is some piece of work. It is something that you are saying to the person you love that you want things to be better and for them to be what they should be. You painted a strong picture of what love is and how you are facing it on a daily basis. You don't love the person only for themselves but for who they are and what they are to you. Keep writing.
What a piece of literature this is! You are asking the person in the piece to think of you as being them and vice versa. That way there would be no incimination of the one who has done wrong for there is no wrong to be considered. Your work was done well. Keep on writing.
Yo8u have taken the simple person of a child and mde them the answer to the delimma of the Africian people. it is really great to know that the answers can be found in the children. You painted some mighty strong pictures here with what you said. Write on and keep on writing. You're good at it
You have taken the picture of a young lady and transported it on the page. it isn't the things that a woman normally would have but a soul that is a monster of one and that is ever so dear to your soul for yourself You painted some great pictures here within your words. One was able to see where you were going within this piece and it was a good one. Keep writing.
You have taken us on a journey of yourself. It is with the growing up that things were as you wanted them to be. Father Time was your natural enemy. There came a time for you to go to school and do the things that you didnt w ant to do. you did an excellent job with this piece and I am glad that I clicked it. Keep writing.
What a story this is! You had me fromthe beginnnig to the ending. I am sure that this is fictiionalized and that it isn't really real. I hope not anyway. It is such a sad thing to have cancer and having ot deal with it is a bad thing too. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did a goob job. Keep writing.
What a lovely thing to have the love of a grandmother.. You were taken from childhood to adulthood with the lessons that she taught you. You painted a bright picture of what a grandmother is and how special your's is to you. You did well in preeenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well yo udid for there are no errors found on the page. Keep writing.
This is a thought provoking poem. One has to have been there and done that to see the true impact upon the piece you did. You painted some mighty strong pictures that are etched in my mind now than what it was before I read the piece. You did wel in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. It shows how well you did and there are no errors found in the page. Keep writing.
But there must be something to help us to see that the world 's care would be abated. you did well in preenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job and it shows how well you did for there are no errors on the page, Keep writing.
This is a short piece but a good one. Time is used as a metaphor in this piece as I have gathered it to be. Counting down is one thing that always works well. You painted some pictures here that are great to see. fYou used your oolors well too. Keep on writing.
The heart is a tender part of the body. It must be cared for or else it will soon die. You have captured the essence of the heart within this piece. You have made yourself clear as to what is and waht isn't acceptable to you. You care a great deal about your heart and it is somethingthat is evidient. Keep writing.
I don't see how you can forgive someone for doing this to you. Your dreams are shattered and your life is put on hold as it is and there is no brigth hope for tomorrow., You painted a bleak picture of what it is like to be without someone close to you. Your colors were used very well. You did wel in presenting this piece of literature for othe purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did. Keep writing
What a great analogy of work is this piece. You care for sleep and arent' getting it at home so you go to your mother's home and get the needed sleep you seek. I think that this is a good idea and knowing how much you need to be rested if one thing that matters the most in the world to you. Keep writing.
what a splendid piece of work this is! You have hopes for the future of becoming someone's wife and it is clear that you wish for it to be him that yo8u love so very much. That your life would be full and free is one of the things that you seek . I wish you well in all you have to do and that you will keep on writing.
Love is dripping off the page here. I didn't know of such love existed but now i do for the two people that the lives are touched. You did a good job with this piece. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for othe purpose of areview. Your work was well done. Keep writing.
This is heart wrenching and pulls at our heart strings. it is sad for so many reasons and one of those is that the man of whom you loved or your character loved is now gone away from here to another place and time. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did. Keep writing.
This is really sad to read. You gave the person your heart and he took it for a while then let it go. This is what I am getting from the message here. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. and it shows how well you did for there are no mistakes found on the page. Keep writing.
Another piece about self cutting is one I hadn't imagined as being like this. But when chaos and anarchy come to mind then i can understand.
the mother wanted to cut and bleed herself and for her son to follow in her footsteps it seems to me she did. But that isn't what happened. I sure hope I got this right and that there is no mistaken notions about it. I hate having given a bad or non intelligent review. Keep writing.
It is something for youi to have cut yourself on something and not feel it or see it. Everything you touch has the markings of blood on them. your life is slipping away from you it seems and that is where it is coming from. I guess so anyway. Keep writing.
How true how true this piece is. You have your memories of the days gone by and they are like the things you mentioned in your piece. But then one day it all suddenly ends and there you are with the memories in your heart and your head. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job and it shows how well you did with no erors found on the page. Good and well done. Keep writing.
Well, I guess that is telling him off. You trusted him with your life and he respected it not. You gave him so much and he turned you away. it is hard when things like this happens in a person's life. you did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for there are no errors on the page. keep writing.
This is sad to read. It was a good reading though and I want to thank you for that. You have a lover that wants to be going somewhere without you. it seems to me that heshould take you along with him. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpoes of a review. you did a good job and it shows how well you did for there are no errors on the page. Keep writing
This was a grrat piece you have here. One could see the whole thing going on and that takes talent for one to help another see what was happenign and not telling it. Yoiu are a good writer and one that i am glad that I clicked to find out what you had ot say. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the pur pose of a review. you did a good job and it shows how well you did. There are no errors found on the page. Good going. Keep writing.
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