Great piece is this one. You have added some pictures to the piece and it is for sure that you used the right colors to make it so special. YOu were speaking about a mountain is what I got from the message and it was a beautiful thing that you saw and where the footpritns left their imprint inthe snow. I hope that I am right about this and that I did get the message. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for there are no errors on the page. Keep writing.
this was a good piece of work. You took us from freshman year to senior year in your message. It was something else to see how well you did for there are no errors on the page. you did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did. Keep writing.
As you belong to the Lord of this world and of Heaven, He wil never leave you alone and you really dont' want to happen. I know I dont' want ot be left alone by the Lord up above. You wirte well for your knowledgable in the things to say in a poem. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a reviewe. You did a good job. You had no errors found on the page and it is wonderful to read your work. Thank you for sharing.
The first time I ever heard the word static used with life was this occurrance. you made it seem so simple and yet somewhat complicated to the natural eye. You mentioned in His eye referring to God's eye. I am glad that you are giving the Lord credit for the Lord is worthy of all praise. Keep writiing.
There is something to be said for a person in uniform Especiallly the dress blues that a Marine would wear. But you are talking about any uniform.. you have done well in writing this piece. It is a piece I am glad that I clicked. Keep on writing. There were no errors found on the page when I read it and it is good work.
What a beaugtiful picture this is! You have used your colors well in proclaiming the God of the Universe is there with the riches that man cannot buy. You are already rich and it shows so well. You did a good job with this piece and it is there for all of us to see that there are no erors on the page. Keep writing.
This was short and to the point. It was with color though and picturesque to the reader. It is something else for you to feel that this is the beginning nd the end of something that you know. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for there are no mistakes found on the page. Your workwas wel done. Keep writing..
This is a short piece of work. However the colors are there to paint the picture you wanted us to see. It was a beautiful piece of work. So many of us feel the same way as you do. About following it always is the thing I am referring to. You did a good job and it is clear how well you did for there are no errors found on the page.Keep writing.
You seem to be lost in your world and it isn t' a good one. There are many things you see but you cant see the sunlight or the sky. It is as if you are in a world to yourself an it is a lonely one. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did. Keep writing.
BRAVO! I loved the type you used in tis piece. It iwas so much easier to see than the one I am using now. I hate to use this type pf font but I dont' have any other choice. Itti s a good story. i m glad that you came up with it. I hope that youwill keep on writing. You did so well on this one.
PICTURESQUE! This was beautiful. There were no errors found on the page. you did it well done. You did a great job with this piece and made it look picturesque to me. talking about the Midwest is one of the things that I loved about it Not that I have ever been there but would love ot travel there someday. Keep writing.
i liked what you said here. It makes perfect sense ot me and it is a great way of looking at things. The Creator is right in everything He deos and making you was a great thing that happened. You did well in presenting the literiature for the porupose of a review. you did a good job and it shows how well you did. keep writing.
This is a grreat story. Brothers become big brorhers as you said. i am the younger brother of the two of us in our family but I am the bigger one of them too. So, you could say that I have reached my status in life. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpoes of a review. you did a good job and it shows how wel you did for there are no errors foun don the page page. Keep writing.
You're the second 5.0 sttars I have given today. You did a great job with this piece. You have had me lost in the feelnig or wanting to feel the muse too. he is there with you but you don't find him. he walks with you but you don't see him walking. This is what I got out of the piece. you did well in preenting this piec of literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job and it shows how well you did. Keep up the good work. Keep writing.
This is a short piece but a good one. you have painted the pictures well. You used the correct colors to paint this piece and get your point across. You did well in presenting this pieceof literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job and it shows how well you did for there are no errors on the page. Keep writing.
You have made a believer out of me with this piece. It is as if the man you loved is now in Heaven waiting for you to get there. It was evident that you loved him and he loved you. It is bittersweet thinking that the end iof a life is so near and that we cant' do anything about it. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job and it shows how well you did. Keep writing.
BEAUTIFUL! It is like when i was a band booster and the children were playing thier instruments and it was a great feeling to know the talent they had You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You id a good job and it shows how well you did. Keep writing.
Good piece but the colors were hard for me ot see through them. It is about love and the great things of love that can be done and said to a person. It is a piece that you did from the heart I can tell that. You should write like this all lthe time and I hope you do. Keep writing.
It is an interesting piece of work you have here. It is like one shoulder it telling you something youi should do and the other there is a little Satan sitting up on it. So, you are left with something to figure out and it is something that will make you happy or sad. This is what I am getting from the message here. I hope that I am right about this. I have to give it a good review and want to make sure that I do. Your work was excellent and I enjoyed the reading. Keep writiting..
This is a short piece but one that was with pictures. You used your colors well in painting this picture of being untrustworthy. It isn't a flattering thing ot be this way. You demand proof and lots of it for you to believe someone or something. Keep writing.
What an interesting story this is. I liked it and read every word. El beis is one of the terms I have never neard of before. But with you explaining it is a fun game. I am glad that you went to the side of the girls for they needed someone strong on their team. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did. For there were no errors on the page. Keep writing.
You made a believer out of me. I feel for the child that has lost her life through cancer. I know it isn't so that it really happened but one could imagine the hawfulnenss of losing a child through any disease. To hear the child want a second chance at something is far reaching and meaningful. You did a good job with this piece. Keep writing.
True love is what this is. The boy saw her nd thought to himself how beautiful she really was. It was regretable taht the end took place so quickly It was due to a fire that lelft him without his life. How regreatable this is. I lied the part where she went back to the pllace they had found together. That ws the romantic part of the ehole story. Keep writing.
BEAUTIFUL! This was a beautiful piece of work. i have to say that it was hard to read because of the color you chose. But i got through it okay. Your love was telling you that to not put off what you coulddo today and he was right. But it seems he died before it was known to you. That is a sad ending of a greatpiece. Keep writing.
How many times must a person use a cell phone ot get into a scrape. witih an oncoming car or truck. I think you are about to tell us that there was an acccident with the car you were driving and you were in a jam I feel whatever it is that it should be told and for us to know about it. I cant' help but think there is an accident that occurs and yo uare about tell us. Keep writing you have my full attention.
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