This is a great tribue to your grandmother. I got the sense of being at home with the things you said. You made it come alive for me to have known your grandmother. You called her name which was a great thing. You did well in presenting this piece of liteatuer for the purpose of a review. you did a good job. and it shows how well you did for there were no errors found in the page. Keep writing.
Oh the days of telemarketing and the things you went through. I remember the days well. For I did the same thing. I was hired as a telemarketer and it was something that I loved to do. You did well in presenting t his piece of liteature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job. Your work was done well. Keep writing.
It sounds as fi the highschool you went to was going to be done away with. It was a time of remembering the hallowed halls that you walked for years and it is something that yo uare going to miss. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for there are no mistakes found in the page. Keep writing.
This is a somber piece of work. You did everything well from the descriiptions of how light was stretched as far as it would go and the other things in this piece. You did well in prsenting this piece of literature for the purposeof a review. you did a good job and it was was well done. Keep writing.
Yes, and I am happy that you have had a full happy life, too. There is something to be said for older age and that it is a privilege denied to many. It dosn't matter that the names you try to remember doesnt' come ot you. You did well in preenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for there are no mistakes found in the page,. Keep writing.
This is close to perfect. You have captured the essense of what a true heart of love is and what matters the most in a relationship. You did well in preenting t his piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job and it shows with one tiny error in the piece you mispelled love by pputting the v in front of the o. But that was it. your work was well done. Keep writing.
Turns out to be the worst Halloween party ever. It was something for the man to call for Jayla. You did well in presenting this piece of literature fro the purpose of a review. You did a good job and I was spooked to say the least. Keep writing. I didnt' see any room for improvement in the piecel It was well done.
Bipolar is the subject of the piece. You are in a stand still situation and it is someting that makes you feel helpless. There are drugs that can help in a person being bipolar but it doesnt' always have to work. You hit the nail on the head so to speak with what you said. You did wel in prsenting this piece of literatue for the purposeof a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for there are no errors found on the page. Keep writing.
Thi is so sad.
The story line is what you would call a clincher for the believer who wanted it to be the way it should have been. You made it seem so final and so clear that he was gone. You made a believer out of me. You did well in presenting this pieceof iterature for the purporseo f a reveiw.. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for there were no errors on the page. Keep writing.
Usuallywith something this logn I bypass it. But i made an exception in your case. It was a great piece of work. You did it well in presentingthis piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did. I was tied to every word that was in the piece. keep writing.
This is some dream you had there. You were going to pull the trigger and get rid of your father figure. It was a hard one to face but you felt you had to do it. I am understanding this well. I just hope that you didn't really do it. You made a believer out of me with this story. I am happy that it was just your orange jumpsuit that you saw. I cant' believe that you were dolor conscious and nothing more. It was really something to read. Good job. Keep writing.
Horrors it is something that is there looking at you. But you begin to see the real you. It is as if time has been good to you and you look as well as you do in the mirror. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Your work was well done. Keep writing.
This is a sinister boy he wants to take everything. Even a person's life he wants to take. Well, there is away to stop him and that is call the police. You did well in preenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Your work well done keep writing.
Love was dripping off the page. it was such a romantic moment in time. you had given yourself to him and he had given himself to you.. True love is built this way. you did wel in presentnig this piece of literature for the purpose of reviewing. You did a good job. Your work was well done. Keep writing..
This is a cinquain and a short one for it is only a few lines. It is with pictures too that I didnt' see before but are there. One can be nauseous at what they see or smell. One would become dizzy in trying ot get control of the situation. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for there are no errors found in the page. Keep writing.
To some this would be a collection of words. But I can see the beauty in the pictures you have made for yourselff. The colors are there to show the broken bat and the other things you listed. You did well in preesnting this piece of literature for the purrpose of a review. Keep writing this was a good piece.
This was a short piece but the pictures where there to add to your words.It seems that you are choosing death over life and that it is somethingthat you have your mind set upon. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. Your work was well done. I didn't see any errors in the piece and it made it even better. Keep writing.
This is a great piece of work. You did everything you would be able to do in making it interesting. In fact it was a very ineresting piece of work. You did well lin presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of reviewing and your work was well done. Keep writing.
You hit the nail on the head so to speak. You were getting at the fact that he has many wives now and that you wanted it to be the two of you. You desiered to be the only one in his life. You gave all yo u could give and it wasnt' enough. You did a good job with this piece and in presenting this the same piece for literature for of a review you did it well. Keep writing.
One of the things that made this a pefect poem was the lowercase of the word His. You said that it was to brighten up his day. Any and all references to God is in uppercase. Or it should be. That is the only reason why this isnt' a perfect piece. I am stickler for that and have held unto it for a long time. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows with just one error. Keep writing.
Amen to this piece of work. You did a good job with this. Love is the key word in this piece. It is where you find it and do something with it that makes all lthe difference in the world. Keep writing. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job.
Love is the subject the piece. You had it started in the Atlantica and it went on there to another place. Africa was the place where it melted. It was a piece that was good to read and one that I am glad that I clicked. You did well in presentingthis piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for there are no errors found on the page. Keep writing.
For this to be a song it is reading more like a poem. There is no chorus or I dont' see one an there is no bridge that i could see. But the elements of a great poem os here in black and white. You did well in presenting this piece of lterature for the purpose of a reivew. You did a good job. and it was withiout errors found onthe page. keep writing.
One is required ot read this a second time to get the meaning of the work. It is a good piece that you have done and it is something I am glad that I clicked. You did well in presenting this piece of iterature for the purpose of a reivew. you did a good job. Your work was well done. Keep writing.
This is a somber piece of work. You were talking about a knife. Slicing through life as it were. There are questions at the end of the piece that made it come home to me. You did well in presentingthis piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did For there were no errors on the page. Keep writing. .
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