WHEW! What a story line this is! You have done well to spook me here with what you said. It is as if you were in the house all to yourself and there was things in the house beside you that would devour you if you let them. It was a horriffying piece and one I will remember for a good time to come. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpos of a review. you did a good job and it was well done. You have a winner here in sparking someone's attention. I hope that you will keep on writing.
WHEW! What a piece of poetry this is. It seems that someone lied to you and you did away with the lies and got over the person in a hurry. You did well in presenting this piece of literature forr the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it was well done. Good read and one that I am glad that I clicked. Keep writing.
Seems like you are plagued with the name of Mary Ann in your relationships. It is a good thing to have a want to in loving that special person. I only wish you the best of everything. I would venture to say that once you get older that your love will be Sandy or Deliah. Someone that doesnt' have the nane of Mary Ann. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it was well done. Good going and I am glad that I clcked it. Keep writing.
It was a very good piece. It was a piece that I am glad that I clicked. You have the scope on love and what love is all about. you did well in presenting the piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it was well done. I don't see any need for improvemetn on this piece. It is a great one. keep writing.
This is a great tribute to the one of whom you are speaking. There are many things you have in common and agreement is there for you. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it was well done. Keep writing.
This was a great piece and one that should be told again and again. A person can do something so bad as to kill themselves and not think anything more about it. Well, there is other things that could help and would help if they were to just try it. Youdid well in presenting this piece of liteature for the purpose of a review. You did well and a good job. Keep writing.
This is such a sad piece. The person is talking about doing himself/herself in. It is really sad when people have to talk like that. It is regreatable and unwise for them to think about suicide for that is something if completed that you'd never come back from. You did well in presenting this piece of liteature for the purpose of a review. Well done and a great reading is this piece. Keep writing.
It was a good acrostic Don't you just love to do them They are some kind of great to do and they make something look pretty on the page. You did well in preenting this piece of lliteature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did with the no errors found in the piece. It was well done. keep writing.
It was a good piece you wrote. There are no errors found in the piece. You did well with it and a good job. You did well in presenting this piece of literaure for the purpose of a review. You did it well and a great reading was the result. Keep writing.
Well, I am wondering what you did to her other than kiss her. I am just kidding. There were no errors found in the piece. You did well in presenting this piece of lterature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did with no errors found as we said earlier. Good and well done. A great reading is this one.
This is a beautifuil story. You loved dancing with your dad. He loved it too and now through the separation of him passing or even not passing you want him near you. You carry on the tradition of dancing and feeling what he did when you were dancing with him. This is what I got from the message and hope that I right about it. You did well in presenting this piece of liteature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did. Keep writing.
It i ssomething else for you to have taken the boots and made them talk in personification. You had me going with you in your story. It was almost as if I were right there on the flight and the leaving of her mother toget on the plane. You did well in presenting this pieceof liteature for the purpose of areview. You did good and a good job for there were no errors found in the piece. Keep writing.
I can see where you want to add more to this piece. But it has a good beginning to it. Yes people love to gossip and dont' know when to not to. You did well in presenting this piece of litearature for the purpose of a review; You did a good job and it shows how well you did for there are no errors found in the piece. Good and well done. Keep writing.
This was a good piece of work. One could see the grand finale of the play and know that it was the ending. It was something nice to be a part. You did well in presenting this piece of liteature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for there are no errors found in the piece. Good and well done. Keep writing.
What a great story. you made it seem that I was there with them and I was watching Spot do his thing. Youi are a good writer to make a person to be able to do that. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did well and good going Keep on writing.
This is a good piece. It takes in the aspect of one being a ghost and that the aroma of the person's perfume is lingering in the air. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did with no errors found in the piece. Good and well done keep writing.
You won't trick me again for I know this is a prompt and you did well with it. You made it seem like that I was there though listening to the phone conversation. It was so believeable. You have a knack fof writing and it is a good one.You did well in presenting this piece of lilterature for the purpose of a reveiw. you did a good job and it shows how well you did. Keep writing.
Well, some poeple are allergic to things like the orange. It isn't no one's fault about it. You were very descriptive in the piece that I felt as if I were there. That is the sign of a good writer to make a person be able to do that. You did wel in presenting t his piece of litearture for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it was well done. Keep writing.
What a good piece this is! It is a romantic piece if I am not mistaken about two people who are out here in the world discovering the other. I hope that I am right about this. I have always hated to give a review that was wrong in nature. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did well and a good job. Keep writing.
BEAUTIFUL! this was a beautiful piece that really warmed my heart. It was a good read. There were so many tings in thi piece that was so true. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did with no errors found in the piece it made it much better. Keep writing.
PERFECT! This is a piece that is perfect of everything with no errors or anything that would take away from the piece. You have done well in presenting this pieceof literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job and it shows how well you did. Keep writing.
This is so true. YOU have hit the nail on the head so to speak about love and the actions of love. For some it is a great thing to have happen in a person's life. But then if your case is the what it is then it isn't the best thing for you. It is against you. You realize this in the piece and I am glad that you did it this way. Keep writing. YOU did well in presenting this pieceof literature for the purpose of a review. Good job and well done.
This is a wonderful piece you have here. The subject is Valentine's Day and the fact that we dont' need a Valentine's Day for us to show our love for another. It is inate for us to show our love at some point in time and it is a special thing and feelng associated with that.. You did well in prsenting this piece of literaure for the purpose of a review. you did a good job and it is well done. Keep writing.
I liked how you put things together for this piece. It was a great one. You dont feel that you are getting older but having passed the big B day as you put it is something of a mile stone. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for othe purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did to having no errors found in the piece was a great thing and you did it. Keep wroting.
BEAUTIFUL! This is a beautiful piece of work. You are speaking about love and lust being the same or close ot the same thing in a person's life. You havve hit the nail on the head so to speak witih this analogy. You have done wel in presentnig this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You have done well as we said and it was a good job well done. Keep writing.
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