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Review of Sam  
Review by Kira
Rated: XGC | (4.0)
This was a very good piece of work! It was well written and very clever. I liked it a lot *Smile*

Well done,

Kira
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Review by Kira
Rated: E | (4.0)
I liked this, it reads well and your message is gwell stated *Smile*

Kira
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Review of Heaven and hell  
Review by Kira
Rated: E | (5.0)
I thought this raised some excellent issues and emotions, and was said in a wonderfully poetic, vibrant way. Well done *Bigsmile*

Kira
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Review of The Wooden Box  
Review by Kira
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I liked the idea behind this poem, I don't think it flows as nicely as it could, but I do like it. It raises issues in a neat and emotional way that seems to pick at your conscience. Well done *Smile*
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Review by Kira
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a very nice poem, with some very beautiful images, well done *Smile*

I especially like the ending, which says to me that even though we've done some things that are wrong, we can always fall back into those hands that have held us, I like this notion a lot and you captured it superbly.

So, altogether a wonderful poem, you should be proud *Smile*
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Review of Nocturnal Essence  
Review by Kira
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Ah, you're such a great poet *Smile*

There is definitely something magical in the way you write, always taking me off into some distant land of legends and myths.

This is definitely a wonderfully empowering piece, filling the reader with the urge to go out into the night and try to feel the same energy as you describe in this poem. Very peaceful, but very powerful, as if there is more to the speaker of the poem than meets the eye, maybe an inner strength that you cannot see from the outside. I don't know...that's the impression I get *Bigsmile*

Kira
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Review of Sorrow for Sale  
Review by Kira
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a very interesting, edgy poem. I like it *Smile*

The rhythm of the poem adds to the atmosphere, almost like a nightmarish drum rhythm at some points. Overall, I like this poem, yet the full meaning behind it is a bit lost to me *Pthb*

Well done,

Kira
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Review by Kira
Rated: E | (4.5)
I think this is a lovely poem, it certainly doesn't need to rhyme as it gives off a wonderful feeling. The place is very well described and takes the reader there almost immediately. Well done *Smile*

Kira
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Review of What I Need  
Review by Kira
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
This is almost a great poem, it's got the foundations of being very emotionally intense, but it's not quite there yet. I'm one of those useless reviewers who know what there is to fix, but can't suggest *how*.

There definitely needs to be more emotion, we need to feel how you're feeling, make your words more intense, dig deep inside yourself for them, I promise you'll find them.

It's a great start though, and a good poem as it is *Smile*

Kira
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Review by Kira
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This isn't a rating for your writing, but for the way it's set out. Seeing how long it is completely put me off, as I don't have the time today to sit and read 3 entire books. If this is to save portfolio space as you don't have any left, this is fine, otherwise I would advise that you split these books up, either in batches of chapters or one book per item, another option would be to use a "book" item. This would give you more coverage of your books and the feedback you want as I'm sure there are lots of members who feel this way. I will come back and re-rate this though for the actual writing if this happens *Smile*
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Review of Terrified  
Review by Kira
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
I liked this, but I'm not sure it had the spark it needs to make it a 5.0. I think it needs a little more Buffy crazy-speak, and a little bit more detail about the kiss with Angel as it took me a while to figure out. Otherwise it's good and definitely what she should have said *Smile*
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Review by Kira
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Obviously depending on which way you go, this interactive has been a wonderful read for me. I love Legolas. In the interactive and in real life lol.

Well done, you've created a solid story.

Kira
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Review by Kira
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I thought this was incredible, and winning that contest was well deserved. I wanna know what killed them! *G*

Congrats on an excellent piece

Kira
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Review of The Fading Light  
Review by Kira
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I liked this, but some lines don't completely fit the metre.

But it is a very strong poem, your emotions shine through very well and you have succeeded in every aspect with this poem *Smile*

Kira
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Review by Kira
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks for the info *Smile*

I was given an upgrade as a gift and I know I won't be able to keep up the repayments as I live in the UK and have no idea what it will cost me. Do you have any idea what that 3month upgrade of $15 would be in sterling?

Thankyou, you rock.

Kira
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Review of Amateur Magic  
Review by Kira
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This was really, really good. You have the characters down and the story was amazingly thought out. I only wish there was more! Well done,

Kira
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Review by Kira
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, thanks!

I used to write about magic all the time, and now I know why it didn't *feel* right. You're wonderful *Bigsmile*

Kira
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