Well, i honestly don't know what to say after reading this story....except that it was simply brilliant. I can say that i have never read anything like this before, although i will say that the closest thing i can remember reading that compares to it was a story by Ray Bradbury. I really, really understood the man's grief as he worked to go on with life without his wife. I understood his disgust at western marriage and how they seem to fall apart so easily, so frail, and without subject. Things like this when put on paper...well, what can i say but great writing? Brilliant writing. Very good idea. Nice, round end. Why are you not being published?
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