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Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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A short story that talks about a saucer. The expressions are meant and the style is good. The dialogue makes the short story a lively one.
*The story might contain more adventures and events and be further developed.
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Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A little pumpkin is a symbol of both youth and thanksgiving as described here in this prose.
I like the meant expressions and the metaphors.
The style is perfect. The stanzas contain five free verses. It is a good length. It is deep and subtle emanating from an Anglophone culture.
Good!


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Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Sports competition is harsh and needs big efforts. The efforts are not always rewarded suitably.
The verses are eloquent and meant. The description is lively and seems to emanate from a baseball professional.
The stanzas contain four verses and it is a good length. The rhythm has added beauty to the poetic piece. The style is perfect.
Very good!





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Review of Black Lung  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Working should not kill indeed but working in the mines compromises the health and kills.
Great eloquent verses that show a harsh work experience. The style is perfect. It seems experienced and credible. It is touching.
There are live scenes.
Very good!


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Review of Black to Blue  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Someone needs to see his endeavors into progress and success indeed. This is the progressive itinerary of a moderator.
The expressions are meant and natural. The style is good. It releases vivid emotions of the joy of success.
It is good to share this with us.


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Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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It is a good grammar lesson. It is clear and the exercises allow the students to understand the noun in their different forms. The progressive information introduction is meant.
It constitutes a good revision reference indeed.
Good!


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Review of A bride to be  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Alison and Kat got married because of their strong friendship.
The narrative style is perfect. The expression are meant. The dialogue is vivid and bears a philosophical speech. It is an original way to show that true love is friendship first and it is like this that a communion gets the base to succeed.
I lost myself within this passionate story.
Very good!

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Review of Home Flight  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A nice poetic piece is here showing the immigrant birds searching in vain his land shore.
It is full of lively description and meant metaphors. There is a thoughtful imagery and a big meaning.
It releases vivid emotions of remorse upset and grief.
The style is perfect. The rhythm is nice.
Great job!


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Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)
It is a nessage addressed to a friend. Someone takes for true the prejudices said about his friend and that are hurting.
The expressions are meant and spontaneous. They release anger, hate and the will to avenge.
The style is good. The message
is clair indeed.
Good job!


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Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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This is an adventure story that is full of human values and it si philosophical too.
Trey is the superhero who has succeeded to defeat the mantid and his fear.
The style is sturdy and it reminds me of the writing style of Ernest Hemingway. The description is lively and there are many scenes. The expressions are meant and the dialogue is thoughtful too. It fits to be a scenario of a movie.
I lost myself within the story.
Very good literature piece!


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Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.5)


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A strong meditating moment that lets someone realize that he is one part of the whole world and especially nature. The almighty Creator who cares about nature will care about the human being indeed.
The style is perfect and the rhythm has added beauty to the wonderful piece.
The stanzas are made of three verses and the length is perfect. The expressions are meant and release vivid emotions of faith. There is a lively description that shows the close relationship between human beings and nature. Someone seems inside this beautiful area.
Great!



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Review of You Are Blind  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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It is a sturdy lamentation about a friend that is described as blind because he/she does not arrive to distinguish the feelings of the other part.
Vivid emotions are released made of upset anger and remorse.
The style is perfect. There is a refrain. The expressions are spontaneous and meant. You have used the figurative and the metaphors are meant. It is touching.
Good!


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Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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It is an interesting article about the E.learning application that gets many options and shortens both distances and time to someone who needs to learn a specific skill or knowledge.
The text is clear and the expressions are meant. The style is perfect. It is full of information and fits to be a good commercial for promoting the E.learning application too.
Good!


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Review by K.HBey
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
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A new student is lost in his new school environment.
The expressions are spontaneous. There are lively scenes. It seems experienced and credible. The style is good. There are vivid emotions made of upset and anger. It fits adolescent's literature.
Keep on it!

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Review of The Search  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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This is a great piece where there is a meant imagery and equity and peace meaning.
The expressions are meant and the style is perfect. I like the metaphors that offer lively meaningful images. It is a scream against badness and inequity. The brevity constitutes a clever oob.
Very good!


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Review of My Mother  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Simple expressions are here expressions big vivid emotions and love for the mother parent.
The verses are meant natural and spontaneous. IT seems credible and sincere.
The style is good. The stanzas contain three verses and it is good. This is breve prose that is meant.
I like especially these verses:
"My mother is my only friend,
She is my soul mate.
Without her, my world will be darker".


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Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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The teddy bear is finally saved after a human chain was built.

The narrative style is good. The expressions release lived scenes. The story is a stereotype and I read many stories of the same plot around the word stuck. It is funny too. It fits children's literature
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Good!


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Review of The Liminal Space  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Momma is described here as a mystical angelic personage that has let a deep impact on someone.
The piece shows the dependent; parental and spiritual relationship between that person and momma.
The narrative style is good and the expressions release vivid emotions. The piece is concentrated in the personage of momma.
*The script is condensed somehow. You might arrange it into paragraphs.
*The plot is very concentrated.
Keep on it!


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Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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It is a deep analysis of children's classical literature. The generation changes constantly and literature might be adopted for the contemporary one.

The expressions are meant and the message is clear. The style is perfect. It is a short dissertation indeed. You bring a new view and thoughts indeed. It is an interesting piece. Good!



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Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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It is a rich story about Ann; a young ballet dancer. She runs for transmitting a certain message and attacking media attention.
The narrative style is perfect and there are many lively scenes. The expressions are meant. IT seems credible indeed. The story is natural.
Good!


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Review of Fire of Spring  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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It is a fantastic poetic piece. Spring is the symbol of beauty; love; and wealth.
Someone should get the full profit from it before autumn will arrive.
It gets more than one meaning. Here spring might symbolizes youth too.
The style is perfect. The metaphors are meant and the description is lively.
Good!


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Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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This is a very meaningful story. The boss has chosen someone honest as a successor indeed.
The style is perfect and the expressions are thoughtful. The characters that are few incarnate well the roles. I like the personage of Jim.
There are lively scenes too.
Good!


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Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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The brevity is constituted with meant metaphors. The relationship between two friends should be in perfect equilibrium. Here it seems that someone is getting a full profit from his friend.
The metaphors are inspired by the archeology field. It is original and scientific but there is no romance. They show anger and upset.
The style is good. It is a message addressed to the friend.
Keep on it!


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Review of SAJ Signatures  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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These are lovely signatures. It fits children a lot of children happy evens. I like the concrete naive style and the colors. There is a reconstitution of ancient drawing canvas to pictures. It is thematic too.
There is humor too. It is a classic work.
Keep on it!


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Review of Fiat Lux  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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There is nice imagery that is made of meant metaphors and thoughtful similes. It shows a big and faithful love. The lover tries to attract his beloved by showing his virtues.
The style is perfect and I like your figurative choice.
It is a beautiful piece indeed.
Good!


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