It is lovely prose about hope. It is meditating too.
Hope remains as a light within darkness indeed.
The metaphor is meant. The expressions are thoughtful. There is nice imagery too. The style is perfect. I like it. The rhythm fits the prose.
Greta brevity about the present, the future, and the past.
Great message savor and live the present moment only.
The expressions are meant and the style is good. It is a piece of good advice indeed but things remain relative overall.
Love is the Lord The Creator's path indeed. The prose is meant and teaches a lot about one human value that s love.
The expressions are meant. It is a sincere prayer. The style is perfect. The rhythm fits the prose.
These are complaints about love that is less perceived from the beloved.
Misunderstanding is frequent in any relationship. The dialogue allows reconcilliation.
The verses are meant. The expressions are spontaneous and simple. It is touching.
A short story that talks about an orphan.
The expressions are meant and lively. The style is perfect. There are lively scenes.
It is meaningful indeed. It teaches a lot about humanity.
You have based your story on two characters that incarnate very well their respective roles.
Diana is worried because she does not know the man he wants to marry her. She needs to know him.
The style is perfect. The expressions are meant.The characters incarnate very well their respective roles.
It is a family story that is very common.
It is a beautiful poetic piece about spring. It brings optimism within the morose autumnal season.
The expressions are meant. The description is lively. It might be a metaphor that signifies the arrival of the good moments.
Great imagery and style indeed.
It is a great story poem that teaches a lot about human misery and that inner courage to continue to live overall. Hope for a better tomorrow remains overall.
The style is elaborate. The expressions are spontaneous and meant. The description is lively. There is a vivid image. It seems that as if you saw this old man in reality.
Very good job!
This is cute prose about the cooking menu.
The style is perfect. The rhythm fits the prose. The expressions are meant and you have used key words. It is clear and attractive and it enhances the appetite.
Good job! You can write at ease in this genre. Keep on it!
A gift in a temple symbolizes someone wanderring searching for oneself or something that he cannot find in the reality.
The style is elaborate. The expressions are meant. There are suspense and intrigue. The reader wants to know what is that gift and it remains open end. It is an inner dialogue with the oneself and there are both doubt and fog.
Such strength that someone gets to fight against sorrow and goes forward is described here lively.
Great and amazing vivid image that releases lively these harsh moments that someone can live indeed.
It is both spontaneous and meant. It is full of symbols.
This is a meant haiku that juxtaposes two opposite images of an asphalted road and petals. I like the metaphor and the simile( petals are like dolphins). It is full of symbols and meanings. Great imagery and style indeed!
The prose expressed is an open letter to the beloved that left suddenly. The dialogue is the best for the reconciliation.
Every behavior is because of some reasons. Everything has a solution.
The expressions are meant and spontaneous. The style is good.
It shows an obsessional love.
It is so romantic prose. There is lively and beautiful imagery.
The style is perfect and the rhythm fits the prose.
I like the metaphor that presents the beloved as a rose that yields roses. There is a personification of the rose.It is subtle and lovely.
I like especially these verses:
" My sweet love, my darling Rose
pricked by a thorn from enchanted vine
shall forever scatter petals
but until forever, she is mine."
It is a good vignette that is full of featured advice.
The complexity of life and some people let someone be confronted constantly to analyze what's wrong and how to deal with these data to realize what he likes.
The expressions are thoughtful. The style is good. It is a featured philosophical issue that needs further debates.
These are some information about Jane Austin. She remains alive and present because of her original writing that had surpassed her time.
The expressions are meant. It is rich in information. It is clear that you are a fan of Jane Austin.
The style is perfect. I like it.
Still found love remains and someone wants to be in these places where he has lived such great love moments indeed.
The expressions are spontaneous and meant. There are an ordeal, suffering, and pain.It is romantic.
The style is good.
These are meant and sad expressions indeed. It is a complaint about the ignorance of the beloved for her lover who shows gratefulness and faithfulness. You have based your work on spontaneous, deep, and sincere feelings.
The style is perfect. It is very touching. It comes from the heart.
The stanzas get five verses. It is good.
Very good job!
It is a good article about Arizona locality. The dialogue makes it lively. It is easy to assimilate information like this.
Good style and expressions indeed.
It fits all people that get an average general culture level.
It is simple and understandable.
Tea yields pleasure and the impression of well being indeed
The expressions and style are good
● You have based your story on tea party mostly You might add some events or scenes around this same scheme
Keep on it
It is an interesting article about Pennsylvania. The clever thing is that the article is shaped into a dialogue. Like this someone can assimilate information.
The style is perfect. The expressions are meant with a lively description.
Yes, money tree is coveted especially by those who we think they are our friends and ask them for help naively.
The vignette story is written in humorous style. The expressions are meant. It is full of os symbols and reflects a certain reality. Many people become dishonest about money.
An ambivalent dialogue bears a big doubt about someone's identity and fear.
The expressions are spontaneous and meant. The style is good.
The stanzas get four verses and it is good.
It is a psychological issue that needs to be developed.