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Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is an opinion about politicians. The interlocutor sees them as educated persons and some of them have a true vision of the country dilemmas and always find the pragmatic solutions. They are the technocrats. But when they are elected they earn an important surrounding and a worldly life. That is why, they loose honesty . Also they forget their main mission which is to serve the population, to the profit of their selfishness. That is why people lack confidence in their elects.
It is here revealed towards such eloquent verses. The expressing is both clear and sturdy.The style is perfect.
It is a featured issue that needs further debates.
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Review of Words  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A word brings a meaning, an emotion and a feeling. When someone reads it she/he can live the same emotions and feelings that a word can express.
It is here revealed towards such eloquent poetic piece. The style is perfect. The expressing is consistent and it is full of meaning.
Good job!
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Review of The decision  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a direct critic about social medias and their manipulations on the large public.
It is a prompt that puts finger on social medias and their policy manipulations. It consists on some pertinent open questions that let the reader thinks about it.
Both the expressing and the style are good. It is a featured issue that needs further debates.
Good job!
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Review of Never Too Old!  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Indeed it is never late to start learning an expertise. The interlocutor reveals his own drawing experience. The main message is that someone should try to learn and to go ahead even though difficulties.
It is here revealed in full spontaneity. The verses are rhythmical and sturdy. The style is perfect.
Good job!
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Review of The Interview  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Jack wants to hire Susan. However he wants to show discretion. Also he wants her to do the interview and to impress the head office.
It is a live story. There are three characters and a dialogue. The style is perfect. It is credible too . The expressing is good.
Good job!
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Review of My mother !  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Still my mother remains in my spirit and I remember each mo ment I spent with my dearest.
This poetic piece expresses your love for your dear mother. Indeed mothers do sacrifices and endeavors in order to grow their children. They never complain. Yes I have the same thought when you say:
"If I happen to born again,
I wish to be a mother to my mother"
It is written in full spontaneity. The style is perfect. The expressing is very both sturdy and eloquent. It is touching and full of emotions.
Very good job!
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Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The house lacks both electecity and water. You live a great harsh moment within a real mess. You cannot do coffee or meal. It is a big inconvenience at the toilet.
It is here revealed in full spontaneity. The expressions are strong and it seems live. The narrative style is perfect.
Good job!
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Review of The Mission  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)
General Zee leads an expedition in the space for exploring the black holes. But the crew was unable to finish the mission and arrive to a conclusion. They return to the planet earth then.
It is here expressed towards such short story. It is written in a sturdy language and narrative style. The description is live. The expressing is strong too.
Good job!
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Review of How are you?  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)
After a long silence, the lover sends to the beloved a message. She/He is distraught. The beloved lived loneliness and each moment she/he thought about the lover. The beloved suffered a lot because of the absence of the lover who showed doubts and lack of confidence. But the beloved regains happiness when she/he read the message and understands that her/his lover felt the same and that each one constitutes the ideal person for the other and they both never think to find another person like her/him.
It is written in full spontaneity and seems experienced. The style is simple and the expressing is romantic and very strong.It is touching!
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Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a legend about a dragon. A maiden asked for a protection from the dragon.But the dragon asked a price in return. The dragon wanted to marry the maiden but she refused.
The dragon was still searching for his love though and lived with such hope.
It is written in a very sturdy both language and style.The expressing is very strong. There is a great wonderful imagery.
It is a singular job.
Very good job!
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Review of I like you  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)
These are nice verses that express love of a sister to her brother. Such kind of family love which is innate is a feeling that stays forever.
It is here expressed in full spontaneity and in a simple style. The expressing is very sturdy. It is a writing that comes from the heart.
Good job!
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Review of Alone  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.5)
These are eloquent verses.They bear strong expressions full of sincere feelings and a faithful love. The lover still bears a strong hope.She/he is waiting with fervor the return of the beloved.
The style is sturdy.It is written in full spontaneity and bears vivid emotions.
Very good job!


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Review of Making Sense  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The interlocutor is complaining about his wife betrayal. She comes home when she has known that her husband is not there and Jack her husband's friend is there instead. She pretends to bring the dish casserole but she is wearing a nightgown.That is why the interlocutor decides to divorce her.
It is written in a strong narrative style. The expressing is strong. It is live.
Good job!
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Review of Mental Mess  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)
These are verses that express a lack of self confidence and which is pathological because it disturbs your life by being unable to take decisions. It emanates from your anxiety as you mention here. You feel phobia when doing anything.
It is written is full spontaneity. Both the style and the language are simple. You express very well your will to change yourself positively and I think you can easily do so.
Good job!
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Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is an entry to a long story probably. It describes one character who is Charlemagne. He is a brilliant informatics engineer who possesses other intellectual capabilities too.He writes novels too.His job as a detective has taught him how to be a strong observer. A thing which has helped him to evolve in writing art.
It is written in a sturdy narrative style. The description is rich and live. The story is interesting to read even though you put one character in this entry.
Very good job!

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Review of Mayfly  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Each day is ephemeral and at the sun rise a new day comes for disappearing.
The mayfly flies in the sky within sunlight and disappears too.
It is a great metaphor indeed.
It is here expressed towards such haiku. The expressing is very strong. The style is sturdy. There is a great imagery.
Everything is ephemeral in life especially the good moments.

Very good job!
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Review of An Introduction  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The interlocutor who is the author, reveals some work conflicts. Indeed the coworkers try to maintain good relationship in order to work in a cool environment. But sometimes and as revealed here, things seem to be intolerable. You have seen you coworker in a bad situation. He drinks and does commercial on line. You notice this to your boss but things reverse on you. All your coworkers become against you. You feel yourself alone as if you were the incorrect one instead of your noticed colleague.
It is here expressed live and towards a perfect narrative style.This seems both credible and experienced.
It is a frequent issue in the work world.
Good job!
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Review of Creator  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A strong meditating poetic piece is here expressing faith. Lord The Creator is seen everywhere.Over the nature where his creation attests to his both power and uniqueness. The author is astonished how can someone ignore Lord The Creator.
It emanates from a strong faith. It is written in a strong expressing and a nice rhythmic. The style is sturdy. There is a great imagery.
Very good job!
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Review of Faith and Freedom  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Harriet Tubman is a hero indeed. She fought against slavery during all her life even though she had been a slave. She helped 700 salves to flee Pennsylvania. She was a religious with a strong faith and faithfulness. She was inspired from Bible that she followed scrupulously. Her sufferings, her responsibility as a mother and her disease had never stopped her to follow such glory path.
The big question remains open. Indeed nowadays and even though slavery has diminished considerably, new scourges emerge. The prison as a correctional institution, does not succeed in resolving them indeed. That is because only the consequences are treated and not the direct causes of the troubles.
Also people are not only less religious in general but have lost many human values as well. These latter constitute the basic concept of humanity whatever is someone's belief.
The fighting as one of these values, requires courage, will and most of all the conviction of the rightness of the cause.Harriet Tubman had all these qualities indeed.
This is a featured issue that has been debated towards such story. It bears an important meaning and tries to respond to the big question whether or not Harriet Tubman was proud to live in the 21st century in USA.The style is sturdy. The expressions are strong and convincing.
Very good job!
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Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a call to the faithful people who believe in the mercy of Lord The Creator. It emphasizes very well the need to pray Lord at any time and especially during harsh moments.
The expressing is very strong. The style is sturdy. It bears a holy meaning according to Christian faith.
Very good meditating poetic piece!
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Review of A Battle Begins  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The prompt contains strong expressions. One friend tries to ignore the other for unknown reason. It is another way of fighting indeed.
The style is perfect.It emphasizes a certain compromised relationship probably.
Good job!
I like especially this expression:

" A battle of wills,"
"a contest of wits;"

Good job!

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Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The short story talks about a person who gets a new job. It is more stressed than the previous one. Within a new environment she feels alone. That is because few coworkers have noticed her.
It is written in a perfect style. It seems live.
Good job!
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Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This wonderful poetic piece bears strong verses that express eloges. These latter are adressed to writing.com web site for its anniversary. The style is perfect. The expressing is strong.
Good job!

I like especially these verses:
"As precious (almost) as gold
So log on and enjoy the fun,
Say thanks and sing a song
To the work of dedicated folks,
Happy birthday, Writing.com"


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Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A memory about your grandma emerges from the sky when you are doing ski. Your grandma remains in your heart forever.
It is here revealed towards such free verses. It seems sincere and it is touching.
Good job!

I like especially these verses:
"I cherish your memory dearly and hold it close to my heart,
for I know you are always there for me even if you feel far apart."

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Review of The Process  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)
John has delayed the fixation of the washing machine for sweeping dust. There he is busy to fight against a raccoon . At this moment, his wife comes angry because of the machine. It is written in a good style. It is humorous. It seems both live an credible.
Good job!


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