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Review of Angels Among Us  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)

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*The principal meaning:
Angels can be human beings too. These ones have a golden heart, they like to help and to bring happiness to others. They can be family's members,friends or the spouse.
*The style:
It is a free sturdy style that is very expressive.
*The expressions:
They are sturdy, thoughtful, and full of meaning.
*Vocabulary/language:
The language used here is sturdy. The vocabulary is rich.
*Notifications:
*Conclusion:
Good job!


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Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)

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*The principal meaning:
The wild animal concept is based on a predator that catches its prey and kills it in order to respond to his hunger.
*The style:
It is sturdy and there are a metaphor and lively imagery. I like the rhythm.
*The expressions:
The description is lively. The reader can see the scene towards this poetic piece. They are thought too.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is a study language.
*Notifications:
It might be developed.
*Conclusion:
Good jo!


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Review of Friends  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)

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*The principal meaning:
The friendship is very important as it lets someone never alone and allows him to share all his life with her.(Good or bad)
*The style:
It is romantic and sturdy.
*The expressions:
They are sturdy, spontaneous, and full of emotions.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is fluent.
*Notifications:
*Conclusion:
Good job!


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Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*The principal meaning:
Lord the Creator always assesses our faith by putting us as human beings within hardships.
*The style:
Clever pearls of wisdom.
*The expressions:
They are thoughtful and full of meaning.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is good.
*Notifications:
*Conclusion:
Good job!


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Review of Sunday Friends  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.5)

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*The principal meaning:
No one thinks about a sad clown. However, a man saw one and talked with him for finding him unsatisfied about his job. He was very clumsy as he thought. But the man showed compassion and succeeded to let him smile again like all clowns.
*The style:
It is sturdy. I like the lively and meant dialogue. It is original
*The expressions:
They are sturdy and lively.
*Vocabulary/language:
*Notifications:
It suits children a lot.
*Conclusion:
It is a very good job mostly because of what it brings as a human value. I like it.


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Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.5)

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*The principal meaning:
This great poetic piece reveals the state of some poor people who are struggling each night with the cold weather. Their night is transformed into day and they do not succeed to sleep and get a rest.
*The style:
It is elaborate and the piece is very descriptive.
*The expressions:
They are thought and sturdy and translate the social reality of some poor people. There is live and sad imagery. They are touching.
*Vocabulary/language:
The language used here is sturdy.
*Notifications:
*Conclusion:
Very good job!


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Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)

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*The principal meaning:
A group of young men is at the church parking each Tuesdays waiting for a donation. They get boxes with some food. They do not want to be seen by people.
*The style:
The description is lively.
*The expressions:
They are sturdy and translate a certain daily social reality.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is good and fluent.
*Notifications:
It might be written as an article for example. It is just my suggestion.
*Conclusion:
Good job!


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Review of Rugged  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)

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*The principal meaning:
A man bought a wing but caught and tore it. People are stonished especially he was bald.
*The style:
This is a sturdy humorous rhythmical limerick. There is funny imagery.
*The expressions:
They are thought.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is sturdy and the chosen words are very expressive.
*Notifications:
You can write at ease in this genre.
*Conclusion:
Good job!



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Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.5)

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*The principal meaning:
You reveal your experience with a chronic disease which is Rheumatoid Arthritis. Like an adolescent you refused this fact but as an adult you have accepted it because it has been a wealthy experience.
*The style:
I like the academic style where you emphasize very well the different phases and events.
*The expressions:
They are though, spontaneous and very sincere. They translate a reality and a certain truth.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is good and fluent.
*Notifications:
It might be more elaborate. It is a featured experience that teaches a lot.
*Conclusion:
The very good job mostly for the value of this lively and important experience.


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Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)

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*The principal meaning:
Tom throws the ashes of his parents and says to his dad that you will get a good companion that is a majestic bird.
*The style:
It is sturdy. There is lively imagery.
*The expressions:
They are sturdy. The description is detailed and rich.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is sturdy and the vocabulary is rich.
*Notifications:
I hate the cremation of human beings' corpses.
*Conclusion:
Good job!


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Review of Resonance  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (3.5)

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*The principal meaning:
Someone should deal in full sincerity and with affection so that to know the others.
*The style:
It is sturdy.
*The expressions:
They are sturdy and thought
*Vocabulary/language:
It is fluent
*Notifications:
It might be more expressive.
*Conclusion:
Good job!


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Review of Overcoming  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)

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*The principal meaning:
Fear renders someone numb. The coming of another person probably the beloved in your life, with her/his appeasing words brings personal assurance and solace.
*The style:
It is sturdy. The poetic prose is well written.
*The expressions:
They are sturdy and thought
*Vocabulary/language:
It is fluent.
*Notifications:
*Conclusion:
Good job!


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Review of Maybe  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)

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*The principal meaning:
A lover thinks that his beloved will be his one in another life where they will exchange love.
*The style:
It is sturdy.A nice and romantic brevity is here written in full eloquence.
*The expressions:
They are sturdy and very touching. They show well an obsessional and faithful love.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is good.
*Notifications:
*Conclusion:
Good job!


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Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)

The review by KHBEY:

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*The principal meaning:
A romantic story that reveals how much a friend relationship could be strong when there are love and faithfulness.
*The style:
The narrative style is sturdy and the dialogue makes it lively and credible.
*The expressions:
They are sturdy and very touching especially when John says: "I have been waiting for you".
*Vocabulary/language:
*Notifications:
It could be developed.
*Conclusion:
Good job!


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Review of The Bench  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.5)

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*The principal meaning:
A lady that doesn't succeed to sleep is here described. She is waiting for the day and from her window she sees the sunlight as a signal fro her to go working. She always sees a bench but one day it was close.
*The style:
The narrative style is elaborate and there are many scenes.
*The expressions:
They are sturdy and thought. It is original.
*Vocabulary/language:
The language used here is sturdy.
*Notifications:
It could be developed further into chapters.
*Conclusion:
It is a very good job.


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Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)

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*The principal meaning:
It is a social story that reveals a dramatic missing of the father among his family because of being alcoholic. Tammy his daughter feels this missing even though living with her mother.
*The style:
It is a study narrative style and there are many lively and vivid scenes.
*The expressions:
They are sturdy and thought.
*Vocabulary/language:
The language used here is good.
*Notifications:
It could be developed further into chapters for example.
*Conclusion:
Good job!


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Review of Kentucky Derby  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.5)

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*The principal meaning:
It is about a ceremony of a derby.Great feast and preparation but it is not a horse but a sorrel colt.
*The style:
It is nice brevity.
*The expressions:
They are sturdy and thought. There is vivid and lively imagery.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is sturdy and the vocabulary is rich.
*Notifications:
*Conclusion:
Very good job!


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Review of god is a creator  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)

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*The principal meaning:
All the universe belongs to the CREATOR.
*The style:
It is a revelation written with full engagement. It is a spiritual poetic piece.
*The expressions:
They are sturdy and clear.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is fluent.
*Notifications:
You have redundancy when you repeat constantly stand by. Also, you should write the CREATOR with a majuscule.
*Conclusion:
Good trial! It bears a great meaning!


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Review of The Hungry Raichu  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)

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*The principal meaning:
Raichu is greedy and eats everything he finds in front of him. He went to the city and filled his belly before returning to the forest.
*The style:
It is a good narrative style. It belongs to Asiatic culture probably.
*The expressions:
The expressions are good and full of humor.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is fluent.
*Notifications:
The story suits children.
*Conclusion:
Good job!


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Review of Fall's Fancy  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.5)

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*The principal meaning:
The nature is dormant during winter.
*The style:
The description is rich and lively. There are vivid images.I like the rhythm.
*The expressions:
They are sturdy and put the reader in front of a lively Caneva.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is rich. I like the thought chosen words.
*Notifications:
*Conclusion:
Very good brevity!


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Review of silence  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)

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*The principal meaning:
Someone should think before speaking indeed. You are more introverted because you think that others are no more interested in your opinions or point of view or ideas.
*The style:
Your point of view is well emphasized.
*The expressions:
They are simple but thought and transmit a great meaning.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is fluent.
*Notifications:
*Conclusion:
Good job!


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Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.5)

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*The principal meaning:
You debate racism as a great societal scourge. Racism can be intellectual and by manipulation using the internet or the mass media. The brought repetitive ideas become fastly a true reality.
*The style
The point of view is well defended with argumentation and mostly by theology. It is probably inspired by Christianity.
*The expressions:
They are thought and sturdy. The script is rich of information.

*Vocabulary/language:
It is sturdy.
*Notifications:
It is a featured issue that needs further debates. The script is somehow condensed. It might be simplified especially for the readers that get an average culture.

*Conclusion:
It is a very good job mostly it is a job that has needed endeavors.


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Review of Tomorrow  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.0)

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*The principal meaning:
Someone should look at the future in an optimistic way and takes into account that tomorrow will arrive at light speed. Tomorrow belongs to those who take their lives between their hands.
*The style:
The prose is very well written and there is great imagery.
*The expressions:
They are sturdy and thought.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is fluent.
*Notifications:
It is a philosophical issue that could be developed.
*Conclusion:
Good job!


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Review of Life  
Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.5)

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*The principal meaning:
Life is known by its up and down but someone should look up and not down where he fell.
*The style:
The prose is very well written and contains a great meaning.
*The expressions:
They are simple but thought and sturdy
*Vocabulary/language:
It is fluent.
*Notifications:
It is a great philosophy that inspires hope.
*Conclusion:
It is a very good job mostly because of this nice meaning.


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Review by K.HBey
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Rated: E | (4.5)

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*The principal meaning:
You think that basically the human being is alone since his birth until his death.
*The style:
The style is sturdy. Your point of view is defended by argumentation.
*The expressions:
The expressions are sturdy and it has been written in full engagement and with a great determination. There is a part of convincing argumentation. However, mostly it is based on your life experience.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is sturdy.
*Notifications:
It is a featured issue that needs further debates. I think that the human being is basically alone indeed. It is because he is individually responsible for his own acts( good or bad). At the same time, human beings cannot live alone but within the community.
*Conclusion:
Very good job!


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