Found you randomly under Emotional genre. Please take these words as an attempt to be helpful, and not as criticism. There are always multiple ways to write things.
First, check your title. Did you mean to type "Not Your. . ." instead of "you"?
Please don't be insulted. I copied your story and made some suggested changes to it. It's repetitive in places. Some of the commas I changed to semi-colons.
I have a pie that is a pie like no other. I am in like Bipolar mode so I must go big or go home. This pie has a lot of big flavors in it.
You will need to mix up the following ingredients and put in as little or as much as you want: Boxed pudding any kind or flavor you want; cream cheese any kind or flavor you want but I say buy the good stuff; Vanilla wafers; Cappuccino, hot chocolate mix buy whatever you want but just buy the good stuff. If you're broke you can but the cheap stuff; it will work also. You can use heavy cream, milk, and or coffee creamer use, what you got used what you like,.
Lastly 2-3 bananas medium to large. You will also need a graham cracker pie crust. Cherries fresh , canned, or frozen to put on the top if you wish also put the juice on top with some of the whipped cream (optional) if you want to top the pie with some. Don't like cherries or can't have them use strawberries or something and that fruits juice. I eye-ball everything if you are making a big pie use less of everything. if you make a big one use, less stuff
Mix all the ingredients together into a blender or mixer but not the cherries, wafers, whipped cream they go on the top of the pie at the end. The pie should be thick, rich, smooth, and creamy if it's not, it's wrong to add something to it to thicken it up. If it's lumpy keep blending, not creamy enough add more fruit or cream cheese. Put the mix in the pie crust and put it in the fridge for like 5-6 hours to a day.
Happy eating y'all!
I tried to address the format issues only, not substance. Sounds like one heck of a pie. We'll all be over after the pandemic goes away!
Please keep writing informative, helpful articles.