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Review of That's a Laugh!  
Review by hippychick
Rated: E | (5.0)
Speaking as someone who lives with you, I thought I'd heard all of your funnies. However, I found myself unexpectedly laughing at your question "Have I started?" (being a comedian). I guess I could say, I've been laughing at you for over 30 years.
Thanks for the laughs! I look forward to 30 years more!
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Review by hippychick
Rated: E | (4.0)
You say a lot in 5 short lines!
I sense that although the kid seeks refuge in the cathedral, perhaps he hasn't completely found it as he sits "in anxious worry". Or perhaps the worry is because, just as he is feeling refuge, he is anxious because he knows he has to leave this safe place soon?
Very nice first piece!
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