|Hello friendlywriter, I'm randomly reviewing your item today, as suggested by writing.com.
I'd just like to begin with telling you that I think your writing is really great. The story behind this little item is great - go LGBT weddings. This was written wonderfully, with plenty of descriptive writing in the mix.
I'd like to offer some constructive feedback, this feedback involves the structure of your item. I'm unsure if you previewed the item before publishing it, but if you didn't, then I recommend you do that in the future, as the structure of your item became scrambled when I assume, you copied and pasted it from wherever you wrote it on, originally.