🌝 HuntersMoon's (huntersmoon) Reviews

🌝 HuntersMoon

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Honest but encouraging

I use an outline (form)to make sure I've covered all the bases but within that, it's pure dialogue. Let's talk about your write.

I'm good at...

Short Stories and better at Poetry

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#4844612

Review of HOLIDAYS

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

Hi Cappy

My name is Ken. I dropped a few pennies in the Read & Review cup... and this is the thanks I got.

It is my pleasure to both read and provide you with feedback on your work "HOLIDAYS"

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✨ Impressions/Thoughts:
A vignette about the compassion and kindness of strangers. You told this primarily as an observer, never really bringing us into the moment. I also never made to connection between the title "Holidays" and the story. This could have happened at any time in any place. It seemed more of a social media type post than a story. Still, the emotion came through and, yes, I share your hope that kindness and compassion survive in this age of indifference. One suggestion: Rather than double-space, try inserting {size:4} at the beginning. This will increase the font size for ease of reading keep it from looking like a draft.

✨ Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:

A heart warming read. Thank you for sharing your journey of creativity, imagination, and talent with me today.

Writing is about communication and this is what I saw in your work and is provided solely for your use. It's offered in a spirit of wanting to give you honest feedback... nothing more.

🤗 Keep 'em coming!

Ken

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#4843968

Review of A strange Sense of Fey

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi Sherasi

My name is Ken, and the Read & Review forum provided this offering to the Review Gods this morning.

It is my pleasure to both read and provide you with feedback on your work "A strange Sense of Fey"

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✨ Impressions/Thoughts:
A nice encapsulation of your daughter's persona. One wonders if it's feyness or shyness. I think anyone involved in art has a touch of magic about them. I appreciate the use of rhyme. It brings the reader along and keeps them in the moment. Nicely done.

✨ Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:

The say you can write poetry about anything; you did and I found this a very enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing your journey of creativity, imagination, and talent with me today.

Writing is about communication and this is what I saw in your work and is provided solely for your use. It's offered in a spirit of wanting to give you honest feedback... nothing more.

🤗 Keep 'em coming!

Ken

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#4843706

Review of I'm Proud Of You

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi Queenbeme

My name is Ken, and I clicked on the Read & Review forum... and this popped up.

It is my pleasure to both read and provide you with feedback on your work "I'm Proud Of You "

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✨ Impressions/Thoughts:
Positive and uplifting. Not a bad way to start the day.

I can tell by the words and emotions you've woven together that this is more than just an entry. It is a testament of your beliefs and love for people. Great word choices! Your descriptive words build images in the reader's mind. I saw nothing in error. You used language to show your feelings and each word seemed well chosen to paint the purpose of your poem. There were a few inverted phrases (i.e. "Proud I am" rather than "I am proud") which I felt put a slight bump in the smoothness of reading but nothing major.

✨ Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:

A very positive and good read. Thank you for sharing your journey of creativity, imagination, and talent with me today.

Writing is about communication and this is what I saw in your work and is provided solely for your use. It's offered in a spirit of wanting to give you honest feedback... nothing more.

🤗 Keep 'em coming!

Ken

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#4843415

Review of The Tale of Betty Blue Shoes

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi TeeGateM

My name is Ken, and I wandered (proudly

) into the Read & Review forum and this popped up. It is my pleasure to both read and provide you with feedback on your work "The Tale of Betty Blue Shoes"

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✨ Impressions/Thoughts:
As soon as I see the "Children" genre tag, I usually just go to the next offering, but your description caught my attention. That shows you the importance of the description block.

What a great storyline and lesson for the young. I found the tale engaging and the lesson integrated and clear. Overall, very well done. There's really nothing I can offer that would improve this.

✨ Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:

A very clever, engaging, and good read. Thank you for sharing your journey of creativity, imagination, and talent with me today.

Writing is about communication and this is what I saw in your work and is provided solely for your use. It's offered in a spirit of wanting to give you honest feedback... nothing more.

🤗 Keep 'em coming!

Ken

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#4843108

Review of Whisper

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Jim

It's me, Ken, and the Read & Review forum finally put you in my crosshairs.

It is my pleasure to both read and provide you with feedback on your work "Whisper"

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✨ Impressions/Thoughts:
I see this was written a while ago regarding the loss of your wife. I have a similar memorial in port. Poetry is a wonderful way to remember and mourn our losses. I can tell by the words and emotions you've woven together that this is more than just a poem. It is a testament of your beliefs and love. While similar words have been spoken, these come from your heart and that makes it unique to you. Well done, my friend. She will always be with you but I'm happy to see that you've moved on to the next chapter.

✨ Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:

A very emotional and loving read. Thank you for sharing your journey of creativity, imagination, and talent with me today.

Writing is about communication and this is what I saw in your work and is provided solely for your use. It's offered in a spirit of wanting to give you honest feedback... nothing more.

🤗 Keep 'em coming!

Ken

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#4843006

Review of Coffee, The Magical Elixir

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi 🦃 intuey Grateful & Blessed

It's me, Ken, and I, after my morning coffee, of course, clicked on Read & Review... and this percolated up.

It is my pleasure to both read and provide you with feedback on your work "Coffee, The Magical Elixir"

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✨ Impressions/Thoughts:
Another love poem!

A well-done Pi poem about a subject a lot of us love. By its nature, Pi poetry is written in free verse. Free verse is a type of poetry that does not contain patterns of rhyme or meter. However, free verse generally contains poetic lines and poetic imagery that distinguish it from prose. I could see the poetry and - more importantly - feel the caffeine in this.

✨ Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:

A very clever and good read. Thank you for sharing your journey of creativity, imagination, and talent with me today.

Writing is about communication and this is what I saw in your work and is provided solely for your use. It's offered in a spirit of wanting to give you honest feedback... nothing more.

🤗 Keep 'em coming!

Ken

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#4842891

Review of Body Music

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Hi Redtowrite

It's me, Ken, and the Read & Review forum - acting as a "way-back" machine - pulled this from a long forgotten corner of your port.

It is my pleasure to both read and provide you with feedback on your work "Body Music"

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✨ Impressions/Thoughts:
As an aside, have you ever noticed that erotica seems to be the most viewed and least reviewed?

OK, on to the review:

I found this very appealing. The use of music allows the reader to fill in the blanks with (hopefully) their own memories.

Let's begin with the title; "Body Music." You left little doubt about what this poem was about. 😄 If this doesn't get the reader's attention, then I don't know what will. The "teaser" line (a.k.a. description) offers you an opportunity to add some clarification and can also be a great tool to attract more readers. I appreciate that you added a personal line about its meaning to amplify and set up the scenario for your poem.

Grammar/Wording - Great word choice! Your descriptive words build images in the reader's mind. I saw nothing in error. You used language to show your feelings and each word seemed well chosen to paint the story of your poem.

Form/Flow: This was written in free verse. Free verse is a type of poetry that does not contain patterns of rhyme or meter. However, free verse generally contains poetic lines and poetic imagery that distinguish it from prose. I could see the poetry and - more importantly - feel the emotion in this.

✨ Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:

A good read that will bring warmth, not sweat.

Thank you for sharing your journey of creativity, imagination, and talent with me today.

Writing is about communication and this is what I saw in your work and is provided solely for your use. It's offered in a spirit of wanting to give you honest feedback... nothing more.

🤗 Keep 'em coming!

Ken

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#4842762

Review of Easy Does It - A Lyric

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi Triple-L

My name is Ken, and I found this through the Read & Review forum. Serendipity; I had just finished listening to a song on the Newfeed and, I swear, the beat seemed to match your lyrics.

It is my pleasure to both read and provide you with feedback on your work "Easy Does It - A Lyric"

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✨ Impressions/Thoughts:
A broken heart healed through Grace. Not particularly new and, while similar words have been spoken, these come from your heart, and that makes it unique to you. There is a definite "beat" to your verses which makes reading this easy and enjoyable. Generally, lyrics have a chorus; a repetitive verse that ties the song together and emphasizes the message. Your final verse would almost qualify.

One suggestion: Add {size:4} at the top of the page. This will increase the font size and make it easier to read - especially important for us old geezers.

✨ Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:

Lyrical and heartfelt; a good read. Thank you for sharing your journey of creativity, imagination, and talent with me today.

Writing is about communication and this is what I saw in your work and is provided solely for your use. It's offered in a spirit of wanting to give you honest feedback... nothing more.

🤗 Keep 'em coming!

Ken

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#4842540

Review of Promise

Review by 🌝 HuntersMoon

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

Hi strlcuckoo

My name is Ken, and I chanced upon your poem through the Read & Review forum. I know it's the time of year to "fall back," but this went all the way back to 2008!

It is my pleasure to read and provide you with feedback on your work "Promise"

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✨ Impressions/Thoughts:
I think we've all had those dreams that seem so real that when we awake, we're not sure if it was a dream or a memory. Since you listed this as "fantasy," I'll assume this wasn't necessarily an actual dream but more of an exploration of thought. Short and sweet, I think it relied too much on the reader's reaction to get the full intent.

✨ Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:

A bit more description and the integration of poetic phrasing might have added the emotional results you were looking for. Thank you for sharing your journey of creativity, imagination, and talent with me today.

Writing is about communication and this is what I saw in your work and is provided solely for your use. It's offered in a spirit of wanting to give you honest feedback... nothing more.

🤗 Keep 'em coming!

Ken

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#4842422

Review of Never Saw a Purple Cow, But ...

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Rated: 18+

| (4.0)

Hi thereBdragons

My name is Ken, and as luck would have it, I clicked on the Read & Review forum and this popped up.

It is my pleasure to both read and provide you with feedback on your work "Never Saw a Purple Cow, But ..."

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✨ Impressions/Thoughts:
A gentle story, more oriented towards kids. Imaginative and in the tradition of fables. "Cute" comes to mind. Please, read over your work once you've posted it. The whole tale was aligned center which made it difficult to read. You can see that it was only the title you meant to center align but the addition of the extra slash negated the "end" center. As writers, we have not only the responsibility of creating but also ensuring our audience can appreciate what we've done.

✨ Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:

A very clever tale despite the difficulty in reading. Thank you for sharing your journey of creativity, imagination, and talent with me today.

Writing is about communication and this is what I saw in your work and is provided solely for your use. It's offered in a spirit of wanting to give you honest feedback... nothing more.

🤗 Keep 'em coming!

Ken

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#4842319

Review of The hallway at dusk

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi B.nzuki

My name is Ken, and this popped up as I wandered through the Read & Review Forum.

It is my pleasure to both read and provide you with feedback on your work "The hallway at dusk"

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✨ Impressions/Thoughts:
As primarily a poet, I loved the elegance and flow of this vignette. It was beautifully crafted and I had an immediate picture of what you described, both visually and emotionally. Really well done!

✨ Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:

A very satisfying read. Thank you for sharing your journey of creativity, imagination, and talent with me today.

Writing is about communication and this is what I saw in your work and is provided solely for your use. It's offered in a spirit of wanting to give you honest feedback... nothing more.

🤗 Keep 'em coming!

Ken

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#4842196

Review of Whispering Hallow

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Rated: 18+

| (4.5)

Hi sindbad

It's me, Ken, and as I wandered through the Read & Review forum, I stumbled upon this bit of enlightenment to begin the day.

It is my pleasure to both read and provide you with feedback on your work "Whispering Hallow"

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✨ Impressions/Thoughts:
A bit of eroticism wrapped in impressions, innuendo, and imagination. I found some of your imagery to be confusing, especially the opening stanza. As I read on, the visceral side kicked in, and I could see (feel) the poetry of this as my own memories filled in the template of your words. Complex but satisfying.

✨ Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:

A good read that relies on the reader's reaction to achieve its goal. Thank you for sharing your journey of creativity, imagination, and talent with me today.

Writing is about communication and this is what I saw in your work and is provided solely for your use. It's offered in a spirit of wanting to give you honest feedback... nothing more.

🤗 Keep 'em coming!

Ken

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#4842164

Review of Original Honey Pit Quotes Poll

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

Hi StephBee

It's me, Ken. Congratulations! You are the recipient of my very first review of a poll.

It is my pleasure to both read and provide you with feedback on your work/item/poll "Original Honey Pit Quotes Poll"

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✨ Impressions/Thoughts:
I thought the quotes were quite original and, yes, even humorous. It created a fun activity for the community as well as spread the word about the Honey Pit. I'm sure folks will be buzzing about this.

As for the technical side: several errors distract from the focus of this.

First paragraph: "Who Which are is your FAVORITES?" Rationale: The poll is a thing, not a person. You can only select one so singular form is needed.
Second paragraph: "Favorite Quotes will will win the Originality Merit Badge!!" Rationale: Typo

✨ Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:

Potentially, a fun activity and a great was to promote your forum and group. Thank you for sharing your journey of creativity, imagination, and talent with me today.

Writing is about communication and this is what I saw in your work and is provided solely for your use. It's offered in a spirit of wanting to give you honest feedback... nothing more.

🤗 Keep 'em coming!

Ken

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#4842102

Review of Election

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi Purple writing writing writing

It's me, Ken, and I spun the cylinder of the Read & Review revolver... and this popped into the chamber.

It is my pleasure to both read and provide you with feedback on your work "Election"

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✨ Impressions/Thoughts:
A rhyming rant.

As a poem, this works well. You've used simple, common vocabulary to express your feelings and thoughts and communicate your frustrations to the reader. For me, the short lines made this rush by and I think gloss over message.

This was written last year and I wonder if you still feel the same. Looking over the American landscape, I see many of the warnings have come to pass. True, there is a strong element of "con" in the pap they feed us but as intelligent people, it's our job to separate the wheat from the chaff.

✨ Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:

A good read which I found thought-provoking in light of what's passed. Thank you for sharing your journey of creativity, imagination, and talent with me today.

Writing is about communication and this is what I saw in your work and is provided solely for your use. It's offered in a spirit of wanting to give you honest feedback... nothing more.

🤗 Keep 'em coming!

Ken

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#4841998

Review of Dear Stranger...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi mercy

It's me, Ken... again.

I went trick or treating on the Read & Review forum and this dropped into my bag.

It is my pleasure to both read and provide you with feedback on your work "Dear Stranger..."

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✨ Impressions/Thoughts:
Supportive, encouraging, and a small ray of light in the darkness through which some journey. Your gentle words will soothe the anxiety of someone lost with a promise of what may come. There's little doubt that staying the course is an achievement in itself. "That is enough for today."

One minor personal observation: Consider placing {size:4} at the beginning of your work. This makes the font larger and easier to read. It also cuts down on the white space so the poem doesn't look so lost on the page.

✨ Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:

A compassionate, good read. Thank you for sharing your journey of creativity, imagination, and talent with me today.

Writing is about communication and this is what I saw in your work and is provided solely for your use. It's offered in a spirit of wanting to give you honest feedback... nothing more.

🤗 Keep 'em coming!

Ken

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#4841919

Review of HEARTBROKEN

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi TheBusmanPoet

It's me, Ken, and I went Trick or Treating at the Read & Review forum... and this was dropped into my bag.

It is my pleasure to both read and provide you with feedback on your work "HEARTBROKEN "

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✨ Impressions/Thoughts:
You seem to have a thing about Acrostics.

As I recall, the last time I reviewed you, it was "An Acrostic a Month." So, on to HEARTBROKEN. Acrostics, by their nature, tend to be written in free verse. I felt that this was missing the flow that poetry has and felt it was very prose-like. That said, Robert Frost once said, "Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words." I could see the poetry and - more importantly - feel the emotion in this. Touching the reader is the essences of poetry and you excelled here.

✨ Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:

A very emotional but overall good read. Thank you for sharing your journey of creativity, imagination, and talent with me today.

Writing is about communication and this is what I saw in your work and is provided solely for your use. It's offered in a spirit of wanting to give you honest feedback... nothing more.

🤗 Keep 'em coming!

Ken

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#4841772

Review of The Garden of Misplaced Things

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi mercy

My name is Ken, and as luck would have it, I clicked on the Read & Review forum... and this popped up. It is my pleasure to both read and provide you with feedback on your work "The Garden of Misplaced Things"

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✨ Impressions/Thoughts:
I can tell by the words and emotions you've woven together that this is more than just a poem. It is a confession of the feelings that you've lived through. Unfortunately, similar words have been spoken aloud and in the dark recesses of others' minds. These come from your heart, which makes them unique to you. You've used emotional images and well-thought-out descriptive words to build images in the reader's mind. I saw nothing in error. You used language to show your feelings and each word seemed well chosen to paint the story of your poem.

✨ Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:

A very good read that, upon reflection, will resonate with many readers. Thank you for sharing your journey of creativity, imagination, and talent with me today.

Writing is about communication and this is what I saw in your work and is provided solely for your use. It's offered in a spirit of wanting to give you honest feedback... nothing more.

🤗 Keep 'em coming!

Ken

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#4841556

Review of Abc...

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

Hi Samm

It's me, Ken, and as luck would have it, I clicked on the Read & Review forum... and this popped up. It is my pleasure to both read and provide you with feedback on your work "Abc..."

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✨ Impressions/Thoughts:
As in life, everything's a circle... or can be made into one. Isn't English a marvel. Between heteronyms and double entendres, you can wrap a thought into any shape you want.

I see your point, although I take exception to your final line. Every word (assembly of letters) that touches another's consciousness sets off a chain reaction of thought. That has the potential to create a sense of wonder and inspires the next generation of thought. Just my perspective.

✨ Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:

An interesting and thought provoking read. Thank you for sharing your journey of creativity, imagination, and talent with me today.

Writing is about communication and this is what I saw in your work and is provided solely for your use. It's offered in a spirit of wanting to give you honest feedback... nothing more.

🤗 Keep 'em coming!

Ken

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#4841107

Review of Troll

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi Than Pence

My name is Ken, and I clicked on the Read & Review forum... and look what was dragged from a lost corner of your port.

It is my pleasure to both read and provide you with feedback on your work "Troll"

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✨ Impressions/Thoughts:
What a clever poem. We've all made snap judgments about people based on voice, looks, and any number of first impressions. You've managed to distill this into a semi-humorous tale of drive-through judgment that proved totally inaccurate... and your final verse reflects the feelings we all should have. Unfortunately, many don't.

✨ Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:

A very clever approach and good read. Thank you for sharing your journey of creativity, imagination, and talent with me today.

Writing is about communication and this is what I saw in your work and is provided solely for your use. It's offered in a spirit of wanting to give you honest feedback... nothing more.

🤗 Keep 'em coming!

Ken

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#4841001

Review of Closing In

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi Claevyan

It's me, Ken, and I clicked on the Read & Review forum... and this was pulled from some long forgotten corner of your port.

It is my pleasure to both read and provide you with feedback on your work "Closing In"

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✨ Impressions/Thoughts:
A darker version of the original song. Great word choices! You've used emotionally charged descriptive words to build images in the reader's mind. I saw nothing in error. You used language to show your feelings and each word seemed well chosen to paint the story of your poem.

✨ Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:

A dark but good read. Thank you for sharing your journey of creativity, imagination, and talent with me today.

Writing is about communication and this is what I saw in your work and is provided solely for your use. It's offered in a spirit of wanting to give you honest feedback... nothing more.

🤗 Keep 'em coming!

Ken

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#4840887

Review of My Job at the Bank

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi Jeffrey Meyer

It's me, Ken, and I spun the cylinder of the Read & Review revolver... and this popped into the chamber.

It is my pleasure to both read and provide you with feedback on your work "My Job at the Bank"

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✨ Impressions/Thoughts:
OK. You got me. 🤣 I appreciate the trip down the garden path.

At 6:15, I had my ah-ha moment and realized not all is what it appeared. By then, I was committed to see where the twist was coming from. What a fun ending. Thank you for the smiles today!

✨ Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:

A humorous and fun read. Thank you for sharing your journey of creativity, imagination, and talent with me today.

Writing is about communication and this is what I saw in your work and is provided solely for your use. It's offered in a spirit of wanting to give you honest feedback... nothing more.

🤗 Keep 'em coming!

Ken

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#4840635

Review of Texas Drought

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi strlcuckoo

My name is Ken, and I spun the cylinder of the Read & Review revolver... and this popped into the chamber.

I see this was written... a while ago. If memory serves, you've had rain since this was written. A lot of rain! It is my pleasure to both read and provide you with feedback on your work "Texas Drought"

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✨ Impressions/Thoughts:
Great word choice! You've used descriptive words to build images in the reader's mind. I saw nothing in error. You used language to show your feelings and each word seemed well chosen to paint the story of your poem. Droughts, floods, and natural disasters seem to be the bread and butter of many poets. Well done.

✨ Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:

A interesting and good read. Thank you for sharing your journey of creativity, imagination, and talent with me today.

Writing is about communication and this is what I saw in your work and is provided solely for your use. It's offered in a spirit of wanting to give you honest feedback... nothing more.

🤗 Keep 'em coming!

Ken

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#4840426

Review of Window, cat and lace curtain

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Rated: E

| (3.0)

Hi ApplesAndPearls

My name is Ken, and I came across this in the Read & Review forum. It is my pleasure to both read and provide you with feedback on your work "Window, cat and lace curtain"

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✨ Impressions/Thoughts:
Your first foray into the world of writing. Congratulations! I'd say more of a vignetter rather than a story or poem but nicely done. As I read this, I kept waiting for... something. You used great descriptive words to paint your story but (and it may just be me) to what end? What is the tale you're trying to tell? In writing, it's always helpful to know where you're going and then tailor your narrative to lead the reader to that place.

✨ Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:

You obviously have the skills. Now, continue to write and work on the craft. Thank you for sharing your journey of creativity, imagination, and talent with me today.

Writing is about communication and this is what I saw in your work and is provided solely for your use. It's offered in a spirit of wanting to give you honest feedback... nothing more.

🤗 Keep 'em coming!

Ken

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#4840359

Review of Eagle on the mountaintop

Review by 🌝 HuntersMoon

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi woodswoman

My name Ken, and I clicked on the Read & Review forum and this popped up.

It is my pleasure to both read and provide you with feedback on your work "Eagle on the mountaintop"

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✨ Impressions/Thoughts:
What a clever idea. I love the imagery and the seemingly random nature of your words. It all comes together in the final line. We are, truly, all one.

✨ Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:

A very thought provoking read. Thank you for sharing your journey of creativity, imagination, and talent with me today.

Writing is about communication and this is what I saw in your work and is provided solely for your use. It's offered in a spirit of wanting to give you honest feedback... nothing more.

🤗 Keep 'em coming!

Ken

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#4840210

Review of Letting Go Is Holding

Review by 🌝 HuntersMoon

Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

Hi THANKFUL SONALI Party Hopping!

It's me, Ken, again. I guess I'm just lucky having been paired with your poetry twice in the last week!

It is my pleasure to both read and provide you with feedback on your work "Letting Go Is Holding"

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✨ Impressions/Thoughts:
What to say? This is a slice of idealism and I'm sure this is more than just an entry. It is a testament of your beliefs and love for humanity. While similar words have been spoken, these come from your heart, and that makes it unique to you. Other than the "one, two, three" verse which seemed inconsistent in the middle (It would probably work as the opening verse) this was an uplifting and enjoyable read.

✨ Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:

Congraulations on the Cramp win. Thank you for sharing your journey of creativity, imagination, and talent with me today.

Writing is about communication and this is what I saw in your work and is provided solely for your use. It's offered in a spirit of wanting to give you honest feedback... nothing more.

🤗 Keep 'em coming!

Ken

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .