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21 Public Reviews Given
Review Style
If you don't want to spend 1000 points email me and I will do it for less or nothing! I would love to review your piece! *Smile*
I'm good at...
I'm good at reviewing short story's and articles I believe your writing can never be perfect, so if you're looking for an easy review, I'll still do that, just let me know.
Favorite Genres
My favourite genres are scientific, children's fantasy, and mystery but I'll be glad to do anything!
Least Favorite Genres
My least favourite is poetry and really long story's but I would still be glad to review it.
I will not review...
I will review anything you need as long as your story isn't a chapter book or ridiculously long.
Public Reviews
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Review of Jeanne's Fight  
Review by Ari
Rated: E | (4.0)
Your hook was great. It definitely captured my interest. The story was very interesting and I loved the sci-fi vibe it gave. Your writing style is unique and you did a great job describing events and objects, however, I did have some trouble picturing the characters. I do think if you could improve anything in this piece, it would be adding more description to the characters. As for spelling and grammar, you did perfect (not that it would matter too much) I couldn't find any spelling errors. You did great!

Keep writing, Ari
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Review of The End of Time  
Review by Ari
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My favourite thing about this piece is the storyline and the style in which you wrote it. I am so excited to read the continuation! Now if I must give you a wish, I did get a little confused about why he was there. In the story, it says they were stuck there because they were sleeping through the apocalypse, but by the sounds of it, Taylor and Ferren were already dead for quite a while by the time the apocalypse struck. Just a little part that I got lost in. I loved all of the details in this story, it was really effective in the writing. You also did really good with grammar! The only mistake I could find was this: resting he face in her hands. But I don't count grammar as a point down so good job!

keep writing, Ari



*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
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Review by Ari
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
You need to turn this into a book, a series, something! This was so amazing, I swear, I've been going through, doing reviews and this is the best thing I've read today by far. I've always had the idea of writing things that are based off of classic stories, I find having that not so PG twist made it that much better. I can't find one little thing to critique you on here!
Keep doing what you're doing, Ari


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
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Review by Ari
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Wow, This was fantastic. I think you may qualify for a contest I have on my page! You have the potential to win a merit badge! If you're interested then I have a page in my highlighted with more information.

I hope you consider, Ari
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Review of Thank You, Father  
Review by Ari
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow, This was fantastic. I think you may qualify for a contest I have on my page! You have the potential to win a merit badge! If you're interested then I have a page in my highlighted with more information.

I hope you consider, Ari
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Review of Family  
Review by Ari
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow, This was fantastic. I think you may qualify for a contest I have on my page! You have the potential to win a merit badge! If you're interested then I have a page in my highlighted with more information.

I hope you consider, Ari
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Review of Over The Moon  
Review by Ari
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow, This was fantastic. I think you may qualify for a contest I have on my page! You have the potential to win a merit badge! If you're interested then I have a page in my highlighted with more information.

I hope you consider, Ari
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Review of Midnight Angel  
Review by Ari
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow, This was fantastic. I think you may qualify for a contest I have on my page! You have the potential to win a merit badge! If you're interested then I have a page in my highlighted with more information.

I hope you consider, Ari
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Review of There's No Point  
Review by Ari
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow, This was fantastic. I think you may qualify for a contest I have on my page! You have the potential to win a merit badge! If you're interested then I have a page in my highlighted with more information.

I hope you consider, Ari
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Review of Your Smile  
Review by Ari
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello! I love this poem, I can almost see it as an old song from the 50's! I think you may qualify for a poetry and short story contest that I am hosting. You have the potential to win a merit badge! If you are interested I have a page in my highlighted section to teach you more, I hope you consider...

Ari
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Review by Ari
Rated: E | (5.0)
The story was amazing and i really loved it! the detail in it was amazing and i really hope you keep writing! you could really hear the voice in it and you put your story in paragraphs which I know seems like something little but it is something that I personally struggle to remember.
keep on writing, Ari
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Review of Silence  
Review by Ari
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great job!!
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