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Review by n.lea
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Reminds me of high school. Always wanting to fit it, but never quite right.
The tag along; the accepted 3rd or 5th wheel in a room full of couples.


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Review of Storm Colors  
Review by n.lea
Rated: E | (5.0)
Ooooo yes.. its so romantic. Is it ok that driving to work on an about to storm day is romantic?
I love the description of the greens against the grey.
And how orange turns to rust.

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Review of Were I A Flower  
Review by n.lea
Rated: E | (5.0)
The first part reminds me of the song “ you picked me” by the band a fine frenzy.
I like the lulling flow this has. The imagery is a beautifully painted canvas of words.


Keep writing.
N.


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Review of Write Stuff  
Review by n.lea
Rated: E | (5.0)
I feel this in my core! Great job


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Review of Idle Talk  
Review by n.lea
Rated: E | (5.0)
Reminds me of writing a journal and someone goes snooping and shares what they read. Very nice


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Review of spineless  
Review by n.lea
Rated: E | (5.0)
How crushing. It’s starts so light and lovely like the first flicker of youthful love. Then crashes like waves of a hurricane. So beautifully tragically written


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Review of The Boy  
Review by n.lea
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I feel you. I too have written of the creeping shadows of former humans that shed their flesh to keep the records spinning in an act for someone else to feel the pain they too have been dealt instead of sparing the ruin of the innocent. You did a great job of expressing the cycle as heartbreaking as it is.


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Review of Darkness  
Review by n.lea
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is raw! So honest. I know so many can relate. Great imagery
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Review of Waste of Time  
Review by n.lea
Rated: E | (5.0)
This!! It feels as though someone else understands the things I lie awake a night and lament upon.

It flows very nicely.
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Review of Dancing Babies  
Review by n.lea
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Wow. Very vivid.
My favorite...
"Terrorized under violent palms which squeeze too tight."

Such an interesting image.

Great job
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Review of Dawn  
Review by n.lea
Rated: E | (4.0)
I love the imagery that you use to describe the cycle of life as a war.
The only suggestion I have for you is that if you are going to use the ellipses in the second stanza, take out the fourth period. The fourth in grammar means you aren't going to finish the thought. Continuing after makes the piece look jumbled. At the end of the piece if you want to leave it so the reader is guessing, just leave it at the fourth, the fifth period just seems excessive.

I do love the ending. It is so very encouraging and leaves the reader on a positive note.

Great Job.
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Review of Highway Miles  
Review by n.lea
Rated: E | (5.0)
this gave me shivers. makes me wonder at the loss of a partner for a lifetime. It sings of pain and loneliness
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