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Review of Darker Than Black  
Review by n.lea
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wow. Very real, with raw emotion And so many people relate.

The 2nd stanza stands out to me the most because i now how real grief thieves joy.

Keep writing !!


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Review of Aloneness  
Review by n.lea
Rated: E | (5.0)
im left wondering what mark he eventually made. Did he find enjoyment once surrendering?

Thought provoking piece.
Id love to read a sequel

N.
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Review of The Fury  
Review by n.lea
Rated: E | (5.0)
ooo. I love how commanding this poem is. A serman, a native song and dance to bring the tempest!!
The power. I can hear the the thunder and see the lightning streak the sky and like the dark storm.

I cannot tell you how much i love this!!
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Review by n.lea
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow. This feels like it represents the current world political climate.

It has a depressing and black and white no grey between old school 1950s feel.

Great job with the imagery.


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Review by n.lea
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Reminds me of high school. Always wanting to fit it, but never quite right.
The tag along; the accepted 3rd or 5th wheel in a room full of couples.


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Review of Storm Colors  
Review by n.lea
Rated: E | (5.0)
Ooooo yes.. its so romantic. Is it ok that driving to work on an about to storm day is romantic?
I love the description of the greens against the grey.
And how orange turns to rust.

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Review of Were I A Flower  
Review by n.lea
Rated: E | (5.0)
The first part reminds me of the song “ you picked me” by the band a fine frenzy.
I like the lulling flow this has. The imagery is a beautifully painted canvas of words.


Keep writing.
N.


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Review of Write Stuff  
Review by n.lea
Rated: E | (5.0)
I feel this in my core! Great job


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Review of spineless  
Review by n.lea
Rated: E | (5.0)
How crushing. It’s starts so light and lovely like the first flicker of youthful love. Then crashes like waves of a hurricane. So beautifully tragically written


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Review of Darkness  
Review by n.lea
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is raw! So honest. I know so many can relate. Great imagery
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Review of Dancing Babies  
Review by n.lea
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Wow. Very vivid.
My favorite...
"Terrorized under violent palms which squeeze too tight."

Such an interesting image.

Great job
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Review of Dawn  
Review by n.lea
Rated: E | (4.0)
I love the imagery that you use to describe the cycle of life as a war.
The only suggestion I have for you is that if you are going to use the ellipses in the second stanza, take out the fourth period. The fourth in grammar means you aren't going to finish the thought. Continuing after makes the piece look jumbled. At the end of the piece if you want to leave it so the reader is guessing, just leave it at the fourth, the fifth period just seems excessive.

I do love the ending. It is so very encouraging and leaves the reader on a positive note.

Great Job.
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Review of Highway Miles  
Review by n.lea
Rated: E | (5.0)
this gave me shivers. makes me wonder at the loss of a partner for a lifetime. It sings of pain and loneliness
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