This has the basics to become an interesting story. It could be for children and take them on a magical journey with the pocket size unicorn. The story line is there and you could go many places with it. Hope to see more on it. I will be watching to see where you can take it. Thanks for sharing.
is the contest I entered. It has a scavenger list of 71 items that you have to take pictures of or write about. I love photography and have so far found 35 items. Thank you Fran for hosting this contest. Your Storykids week is fabulous.
This is a great tribute. It is well written and the flow is good. The rhythm is good and you did a good job. I enjoyed some of the antics she does and yes cats are so funny. I love cats even though I have a dog now. They make you laugh and I just think they are great, Thank you for sharing.
So sad for your loss. Ladybug sounds like she loved you a lot. I also have a Ladybug and I can't imagine what it would be like. I talk to her and even though she can't speak I understand. Your poem was very moving and she had someone with her. I hope your memories of her bring you peace. Thank you for sharing.
I love POV stories or poems. This is so clever and cute. It was fun to read and your certainly captured the view from the mouse. It had great rhythm and flow, the imagery was good. I could just see her running across the power lines. It was a good little poem. Thank you for sharing.
Very beautiful and well written. The rhythm and flow were great. The wording was nice and the imagery was good. Welcome to the WDC community I hope you enjoy your journey here and have lots of fun. You seem to be headed in the right direction with poem. Thank you for sharing and I shall be back to read more.
Very well written poem. I like the subject. I too, keep my smiles for special occasions. The rhythm and flow were great. I was able to read from beginning to end with ease. Welcome to WDC community I hope to see more of you here. There are lots of great things and people here. Thank you for sharing.
Welcome to the WDC community. Always glad to see new faces. Your poem is written well and the rhythm and flow are good. The imagery was great I could see the words come to life as I read them. Thank you for sharing here on WDC it is a great place. Hope to see you around.
First of all Welcome to our community. Your poem is very well written, flow and rhythm is good. Very funny subject and your imagery was terrific. I could almost feel him biting me. I have been in this war before and I am glad you finally won. Thank you for sharing. Hope to see more of you on WDC.
the stresses(of) the working day. Other then that (of) missing it was very good. We never know what memories lurk in us. You did a nice job and the imagery was good. I was right there at that window looking out. Good job and welcome to wdc I hope your journey here is fun. Thank you for sharing. I also am a fan of The Lord of the Rings and I love the new Hobbit Trilogy.
Sounds like you have lots of excitement and love in your life. Your blog was very enjoyable. You must love them very much. I would like it if they could be in my first issue. Just maybe a story or even a picture of them all.
This is too funny. You hit it right on the head with these greeting cards. Your imagination is great and the flow made it easy to read. The imagery was great. I have often thought about starting a card company for pets. I think it would be fun and you could make some money. Thanks for sharing.
Well written piece. It carried me through till the end. I enjoyed it and the flow and imagery were very good. You just never know what will come into your life. How many times does a guardian angel appear? The story is well told. Thank you for sharing this piece.
Oh, the woes of kindergarten. This was well written and very cute. Would make a cute picture book. The flow and imagery were good. It was a nice piece to read. I like reading children's stories as I write some myself. I have not had any published but hope to. Thank you for sharing your story.
Well, guess or family member? What a beautiful cat. Nice name too. We can all use a pet in our lives. They become part of our lives when we're not looking. My little stray instantly adopted us and it has been 4 years now. I hope she became a family member. Cats can pretty much take care of themselves. Thank you for sharing.
Well written and the flow was easy to follow. The rhythm was good and the imagery led me through the poem from beginning to end. I always find good things to read in your port. I found that the children in their costumes were really the monsters and I don't know if that's what you meant but good job anyway.
Wow you have done quite a few things. Many names and lots of imagination. You have encouraged and inspired others. You are just an all around person. I myself would be tired from all that activity. I think I have read your port before and found many things there I like. Thank you for telling your story. Well done.
You got it to the tee. I never even had such an idea about the email. Your poem certainly hit it on the head. What a novel idea and the flow was good. Rhythm was easy to follow. I am often amazed at what people find to write about. I think anything can spark a poem or story we just have to keep an open mind. Very good job thank you for sharing.
I love teddy bears. Your poem brought back memories of my teddy. It had rhythm and flow was easy to follow. I like the photos it gave the imagery a boost. I can't even imagine any child who would not like a teddy bear. Thank you for sharing your poem.
They certainly are different. I found them to be funny and entertaining. I think each c note shop is different and have never found any two alike. I like having a variety to choose from. You did a good job on them and I hope to visit your port soon. Thank you for sharing.
Very well written. The imagery was good and it kept me interested all the way through. It is hard sometimes to write for certain contests. I think as a writer we must challenge ourselves to try new things. I have written in genres I know nothing about. Thank you for sharing. Good job.
How cute. I can only hope my husband has a good sense of humor when he reaches the big 50. Your poem is clever and well written and funny. None of us want to grow old but some numbers are scarier that others. I didn't mind being 40 but 60 got me going. I enjoyed this poem thank you for sharing.
Short but so powerful and imaginative. The imagery was good and I could feel the emotions Timothy had. I think our pets do feel and they can grieve also. This story tells that things like this happen more often than we think. Thank you for sharing.
It is not very easy to tell a story in 55 words but you have done a good job. I think as writers we need challenges like that to test our imagination. The idea was a good one too. I never thought of having a baby that way but you nailed it. Thank you for sharing it.
What a beautiful story. I can only imagine what heaven will be like. Your story was touching and read very well. The flow was good and I was interested from beginning to end. The imagery was nice. I found this story to be very inspiring and encouraging. Thank you for sharing it.