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Review of My funny memories  
Review by Inner Peace
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello, I think this is a cute story. I do see a few places that a word was misspelled, but just remember to use your spell check when you create an item. I use it even though I look the word up if I'm not sure because typos happen easily. I also see a few places where a word was left out that was needed. For example, the first sentence reads..I still have vivid memories what my mom told me. The sentence should read I still have vivid memories of what my mom told me. There are a couple of other places like that also. I know that sometimes I can go to writing so fast, I myself have left out such a word. Just take your time when your writing, or go back over the item and proof read it for these omissions. I really liked the item and think your doing well with it! Keep up the great job your doing with your writing! Always, Inner-Peace
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Review by Inner Peace
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
WOW! That is an awesome poem! I have started one simuliar today. It's about someone betraying their friends friendship. Keep up the great writing! Inner-Peace
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Review of The Naughty Gift  
Review by Inner Peace
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I just read your short story "The Naughty Gift. It's so cute of a story! At first I thought a man was in the box but got surprised when it turned out to be a puppy! *smiles*. Two questions...where's the rest of it? Did they keep the pup? Always Inner-Peace
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Review by Inner Peace
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Great job and keep up the good job! Always Inner-peace
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Review of Angel Lady  
Review by Inner Peace
Rated: E | (4.5)
Aaww that is so nice of a poem! The lady must be very special to you King! Please keep the good writings coming! Always Inner-Peace
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Review by Inner Peace
Rated: E | (4.5)
Truely awesome poem. I love roses and its beauty! I loved this poem because it not only talks about the beauty of the wild rose, but it's about how it was god that created all the beauty in his world! Beautiful job! Always Inner-Peace.
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Review of Until We Meet  
Review by Inner Peace
Rated: E | (4.5)
This a beautiful poem. If your dreams haven't already came true, I will keep on believing that God will bless you with a child you yearn so badly for! God bless you Shayne! Always Inner-Peace
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Review of What I Want Most  
Review by Inner Peace
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem is one awesome poem! My heart aches for you. There are so many people in this world who have children and not want them. I will be praying for you! Always Inner_peace
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Review by Inner Peace
Rated: E | (4.0)
I reviewed "As I Wander'd Lone Through Nature" and I liked it. Good job on your writing technique and the words you chose to use! Always--Inner-Peace
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Review of Sanctuary  
Review by Inner Peace
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Just TOTALLY SUPERB! Yes I cried as I'm sure many people are going to especially the ones who have been there. Beautiful job relaying the pain and agony this person felt! 5 Star piece of work!

Inner-Peace
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Review of I...  
Review by Inner Peace
Rated: E | (4.5)
WOW! This poem is deep. I myself have experienced the agony of being an introvert. I fought for many years to overcome this affliction. So, my hats off to you! Great job of relating this affliction to other people! Keep up the good work!

Inner-Peace
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Review by Inner Peace
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great poem! It's a very beautiful poem. I loved the references made to nature. Inner-peace
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Review by Inner Peace
Rated: E | (4.5)
I enjoyed reading this item and memories flooded back for me too. Those were the good days weren't they? Good job and keep on writing! Inner-Peace
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Review by Inner Peace
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Dude I really love reading sentences others have added and added and added! LOL! So, I wanted to make a small donation towards your kitty so you can keep on thinking up more great exercises for all of us to spring into/off of, which ever. I'll also come by soon (tomorrow)and check out your port! Thanks bunches for posting this exercise! Inner-Peace
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Review by Inner Peace
Rated: E | (3.5)
I think you done a beautiful job on this essay! I enjoyed it greatly, and look forward to reading more of your work. Inner-peace
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Review by Inner Peace
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
It was a cool Madlib! Kinda funny also. I'm getting addicted to Madlibs!!
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Review of An Embedded Poll?  
Review by Inner Peace
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really have enjoyed writing.com!! I had planned on getting on the internet and search for articles on short stories;however I stumbled onto writing.com.,and I have been at my computer all day. So, I just wanted to tell you guys that I just absolutely love it!!
Innerpeace
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