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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.0)
*Delight* Hello rjsimonson It's my pleasure to be reviewing your piece for "Game of Thrones"  [13+]

*Reading* Oh, if only there were such bottles for all that ails us *Bigsmile* Wouldn't that be an awesome thing?! (And no, not the bottles with little blue pills inside) *Laugh*

*Bookstack* Title and Description
I thought the title an interesting one, since when we can't see plainly, we call it looking through rose-colored glasses *Bigsmile* It seems I'm always pulled to writings with rose-colored in the title for some reason *Rolleyes* The description is a brief synopsis of the story and is what pulled me in to read further. *Smile*

*Bookstack2* Characters
The characters in your story develop a good repour. It was easy to visualize the emotions of both.

*Bookstack3* Setting
The shop sounded interesting. A shop of oddities *Thumbsup* It would have been great to feel a bit more of the eviance of the shop. *Smile*

*Books1* My Thoughts
I would love to have the contents of that bottle sitting on my shelf. She was still happy two years later! WOW! *Delight*

*Quill* I noticed a couple of small typos. These are only my suggestions. Please use or discard them as you see fit. *Smile*

*Penb* she shut the lid put it back.

she shut the lid and put it back.

*Peno* Are you sure that your OK?”

Are you sure that you're okay?"

*Penbl* She found and china doll

She found a china doll

*Penp* being too precious to waist

being too precious to waste

Thanks so much for sharing your story!


*Notev* WRITE ON! *Notev*

Intuey
(1,323 w/o WML)
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Review of Withdrawal Pains  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
*Delight* Hello Futrboy It's my pleasure to be reviewing your piece for "Game of Thrones"  [13+]

*Reading* This story was a bit amusing and a bit disturbing. The reason I found it disturbing is because sadly, I wouldn't put it past becoming a reality. We all laughed when a cartoon showed them smuggling in transfat, who knew that shortly after transfat would become illegal to cook with in restaurants. *Geesh* And you're right, if it's healthy then we really don't have to worry about it becoming illegal or sparse. *Pthb*

*Bookstack* Title and Description
Your title and description fit the story well. It is perhaps the simplest and most wide-spread addiction of all time!

*Bookstack2* Characters
You did a good job with your characters. The conversation was realistic and kept the addiction hidden until the end. Nice job.

*Bookstack3* Setting
The setting is simple and for the story that is all that's needed. *Thumbsup*

*Books1* My Thoughts
As I stated above this is the addiction which is probably the most wide-spread. It's a scary thought of losing it *Laugh* And I wouldn't put it past the Chinese to market it, or the American Government to sell out *Sad* *Shock*

*Quill* I enjoyed your story and didn't notice any grammatical errors which took away from it. Well done!


*Notev* WRITE ON! *Notev*

Intuey
(1,174 w/o WML)
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Review of Sole Survivor  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
*Delight* Hello Cat Voleur It's my pleasure to be reviewing your piece for "Game of Thrones"  [13+]

*Balloonv* HAPPY ANNIVERSARY! *Cupcakev*

*Reading* I enjoyed reading this story. The ending took me a bit by surprise. Such deep reflective thoughts for a zombie! *Shock2* You had a great beginning which hooked me and made me want to continue reading. The body kept me interested and moved at a good, smooth pace. The ending was solid and surprising. *Bigsmile*

*Bookstack* Title and Description
Good title. I think we humans are attracted to the thought of being the only human being left on earth and terrified of it at the same time! Your description built on the title and is a good brief synopsis of what the story is about. It drew me in and made me want to read on. *Smile*

*Bookstack2* Characters
Your main character is the only character left alive after an apocalypse. The inner dialogue with your character is well done and lets the reader inside his head to let us know what he's thinking. He's tired and alone and although he's not truly ready to die, he also does not want to continue on. Anything has to be better than where he's at now.

*Bookstack3* Setting
There's not a lot of visuals on the setting. It is more or less, implied. Though, this does not take away from the story.

*Books1* My Thoughts
I think you did a great job with inner-dialogue of your main character. It carried the story along well, bringing us to the somewhat surprising end. *Thumbsup*

*Quill* I didn't notice any grammatical errors which took away from your story. Well done! *Bigsmile*


*Notev* WRITE ON! *Notev*

Intuey
(1,140 w/o WML)
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Review of Mirror I Swear  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
*Delight* Hello ♥~HermyKitteh~♥ It's my pleasure to be reviewing your piece for "Game of Thrones"  [13+]

*Reading* Ewww! What a creepy story! Well done using dialogue only. It works really well for this piece! *Smirk*

*Bookstack* Title and Description
Good tease on the title. It fits the story well. You may want to hint a bit more at the creepiness which lies within this piece in your description. You may receive more views if you do. It's a well-written piece. I believe many would enjoy reading *Bigsmile*

*Bookstack2* Characters
Excellent job with both the human character and the inanimate object! The reader is easily able to establish the warped relationship between the two and the sickness which lies within the human mind.

*Bookstack3* Setting
The setting is simple and for this piece that is all that's needed. The focus point remains between the mirror and the human.

*Books1* My Thoughts
I was pleasantly surprised at the underlying eeriness of this piece. It was very well done and felt like we were actually inside the human's head. *Thumbsup*

*Quill* The confusion in the man's mind is written well. It was easy to visualize him standing in front of the mirror having the ongoing conversation. I didn't notice any grammatical mistakes which took away from the story. Nicely done!


*Notev* WRITE ON! *Notev*

Intuey
(1,192 w/o WML)
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Review of The Curse  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
*Delight* Hello rjsimonson It's my pleasure to be reviewing your piece for "Game of Thrones"  [13+]

*Reading* Be careful what you wish for, I think would sum up this story pretty well. Poor guy *Shock2* You did a good job with a folklore story. I had to scheme it again to make sure I was reading it right *Laugh*
*Bookstack* Title and Description
The title drew me in. A story about a curse has to be pretty good. *Wink* And the description left a bit of mystery about it, which made me want to read more. *Thumbsup*

*Bookstack2* Characters
Great job on both of your main characters. Even though your story was short, we were able to get to know both pretty well. She was needing love and protection and he would go to the ends of the earth to protect her. Perfect combination for what she was going through. *Crazy*

*Bookstack3* Setting
The setting was simple. The reader wasn't giving a lot of detail surrounding the setting, just the basics. But for this story it was really all that was needed. It didn't distract from the story.

*Books1* My Thoughts
I like the air of mystery you kept throughout the body of the story. The ending was perfect and wrapped up the piece nicely. A bit sad. *Sad* Well done!

*Quill* I didn't notice any grammatical mistakes which distracted me. Well done! *Delight*


*Notev* WRITE ON! *Notev*

Intuey
(1,171 w/o WML)
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Review of Dawn Dream 03  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
*Delight* Hello David Shaw-Parker It's my pleasure to be reviewing your piece for "Game of Thrones"  [13+]

*Reading* I enjoyed reading your story. It was a bit different and had an air of mystery. Though, I'm not quite sure where the 'Fantasy' category fits in? *Rolleyes*

*Bookstack* Title and Description
I'm a bit confused with the title. Is this an actual dream you had? Is the 3 because you've had a series of these dreams? You may want to consider changing the title to one that fits in with the body of your story. *Smile* The description is great, fits in with the story and made me want to read on. *Delight*

*Bookstack2* Characters
Your main character seems so naive. He seems like a lovable character and the reader almost feels sorry for him. I was almost scared for him. *Facepalm*

*Bookstack3* Setting
The setting is okay. As much of it is in the car. You may consider adding a bit of atmosphere around them. A bit of rain, thunder when the drama is picking up, etc... Just a thought for your consideration. I think it would add quite a bit to the story. *Heart*

*Books1* My Thoughts
I believe you have a great idea for a longer story. This could really be fleshed out into quite a thriller/adventure story. You already have your main characters and the plot line well established. *Thumbsup*

*Quill* Below are a few suggestions. Please use or discard them as you see fit.

*Penb* This time I meet an old woman at the door

This time, I meet...

*Penbl* John a sharp look, as if he

No comma needed

*Peng* (this'll be the last one

that'll be the last one

*Penp* Instead I'm taken to a great

Instead, I'm taken...

*Penv* a screen-presentation

No dash needed: screen presentation

Thanks so much for sharing your story with us!


*Notev* WRITE ON! *Notev*

Intuey
(1,586 w/o WML)
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In affiliation with The Witch's House  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
*Delight* Hello AJVega It's my pleasure to be reviewing your piece for "Game of Thrones"  [13+]

*Reading* I'm so glad I found this story! It's right up my alley! I've read the introduction and the first couple of chapters and have marked it as a favorite, so I can come back and finish it. So far, I am really enjoying it! And can't wait to read on to find out what happens *Bigsmile*


*Bookstack* Title and Description

Oh, what can I say? If you knew me, you would know this is like a light beacon for me! *Laugh* Your title definitely pulled me in and your fabulous description set the hook within me. I can not wait to finish reading this piece. I see you also have your book now on Amazon! Congratulations! *Delight*

*Bookstack2* Characters

Even though I am only beginning chapter three, the characters are already strongly established. The bond between your two main characters is enticing. I am wondering what the separation is going to do to both of them.

*Bookstack3* Setting

I'm enjoying the surroundings. You have brought such a creative twist to your world building. I also love that you took the deer's soul upon her death. I always thought the soul leaves the body before the actual pain and death.

*Books1* My Thoughts

This story has enthralled me already. It's like a book you pick up and don't want to put down. I'm excited to find out what happens to the characters I already know of and new characters which will be introduced. This seems to be a unique story and one well presented. *Smile*

*Quill* I didn't notice any grammatical mistakes. Your story started strong and kept me interested. I look forward to reading on! Thank you so much for sharing it with us!


*Notev* WRITE ON! *Notev*

Tracey
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Review of Running From Evil  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hey Pumpkin,
You entered this into my contest, "Out of The Fog Contest - Open March 1st"  [E] a while back. I am putting together a dream book (only now in the gathering phase) and would like your permission to include this. The book will be available for purchase, so it will be outside of WDC. If you do not feel comfortable with it, that's completely understandable. If you don't mind me using it, please put what name you'd like associated with it and your city and state, or only your country, if you're not comfortable giving your city. Thanks so much for your consideration. *Heart*
Tracey


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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is an "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  Springtime Review RAID Review!

*Reading* This is a very cute and creative poem, told with the viewpoint of a bug. *Bug*
I'd never thought I'd say a bug sounded 'cute', but the writer manages to portray this characteristic nicely.

*House* Good job putting yourself in the place of the bug for a unique point-of-view! *Thumbsup*

*Grass* The flow of your poem is clean and smooth. I didn't notice any grammatical errors to take away from the flow of your piece. *Cool*

*Bottle2* My favorite lines are the last two in the last stanza:

Now my annoyances have been reduced,
After I was trapped inside this bottle of brandy. *Laugh*

*Tree* WRITE ON! *Tree2*

Tracey
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Believe: It Can Happen!  (E)
A raffle and auction activity with a twist, to raise funds for a new, "Believe" MB
#2083641 by intuey of House Lannister


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Review of Gift Doubling  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
*Delight* Hi! This is a review for "a very Wodehouse challenge"  [E]

*Reading* I enjoyed your writing and inner-dialogue of wanting to come up with a new tradition for your family {:smile} I also like that you wanted it to be meaningful, a reflection of what Christmas is supposed to truly be about. First off, Jesus Christ. But you took that as to what Jesus is about: love, forgiveness and a connection to others.

The best ideas often come from an invention from necessity. As it did with you. The one thing I really like is how meaningful it can be to not only the one receiving the seemingly simple gift but also how it makes the gifter feel. I know because every year I use to do this myself. I'd pick someone whom I may have had an argument with, or someone who I haven't spoken to in a while ... or whatever reason and I'd send a Christmas card to them (and sometimes hand deliver it) In the card I'd write an apology or something special I remembered about them. The look on their faces or the sentiment in their reply was always appreciative, sometimes mixed with a bit of surprise and confusion. But the feeling within me, no matter a reply or not, was always priceless. My spirit grew a bit each time, the light shone a bit brighter. I haven't done this in the last few years, but reading this now makes me intent on restarting it this Christmas. That's a gift in itself and I thank you for that *Heart* *Angel*

 I have a few suggestions below. Please remember this is only my opinion, please use or discard it as you see fit. *Thumbsup*

*XMasTree* Does it mean more gifts, you ask?

*Ornament1B* } Secondly, this most-precious gift

... most precious

*XMasTree* importance or affluence and that attribute

Comma after affluence

*Ornament1g* 6-ft table and a couple of hard-back chairs

... hardback chairs

*XMasTree* the gift wrapper were willing to take the time

the gift wrapper was willing...

Thanks for sharing your writing with us.

*Quill* WRITE ON! *Quill*

Intuey
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Believe: It Can Happen!  (E)
A raffle and auction activity with a twist, to raise funds for a new, "Believe" MB
#2083641 by intuey of House Lannister




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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
*Reading* Hello Cynaemon , I am reviewing your story as part of "a very Wodehouse challenge"  [E]

I adored this story. It was well thought out and so cute. The story is told by the point-of-view of a Chinese cat. He is happy and content in his alley-street home behind the Chinese restaurant. He truly feels this is his five-star kingdom and in no way can life get any better.

The story continues showing that even though one may be truly pleased with where they're at and not wishing change, that sometimes those unwanted changes can be blessings in disguise.

*BookStack* I do have a few suggestions below. Please remember these are only my opinion, please use or discard them as you see fit. (I know it looks like a lot, but it's mainly comma placement). *Smile*

*Penb* out play, and out last all of them

out-play, and outlast...

*Penbl* After this horror they took us

Comma after horror

*Peng* language of the tourists, like An

No comma needed after tourists *Smile*

*Peno* Fortunately I had no trouble understanding him, as Catonese is a universal language.

Fortunately, .... as Cantonese

*Penp* We were also groomed daily, and

No comma needed after daily

*Penr* The vet looked in on us once a week, and made sure that we were all healthy. And on rare occasions humans

No comma needed after week. Insert a comma after occasions.

*Penv* Well I was not anxious

Well, ...

*Peny* the back of my cage, and

No comma needed after cage

*Penb* Finally the little girl bowed briefly to him, and

Finally, ... No comma needed after him *Wink*

*Penv* poor old Frank, and

No comma needed after Frank

*Peno* New Year in a few days, and

No comma needed after days

*Penr* day of the fifteen day

fifteen-day

*Peng* plum blossoms, and bamboo

No comma needed after blossoms

*Penv* fish-tail soup and rice, and

No comma needed after rice

*Peny* Next I helped Ming write

Comma after next

*Penbl* one which said “Together

one which said:

*Penp* paw print, and hung

No comma needed after print

*Penb* with a dollar, and

No comma after dollar

*Peno* day of the celebration the family

Comma needed after celebration

Thank you so much for sharing this uplifting story with me. It made me smile. *Smile*

*Bookstack2* WRITE ON! *Bookstack3*

Intuey
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Believe: It Can Happen!  (E)
A raffle and auction activity with a twist, to raise funds for a new, "Believe" MB
#2083641 by intuey of House Lannister


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Review of A Do-Over in Life  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
*Reading*Oh! I absolutely loved this! Such wise words. I could have written it myself. *Laugh*

I couldn't agree more with every single thing you said. It's hard to pick my favorite stanza, I should say the part about how to treat people, how to invest in your children -- because those words are the most important. They're the most important act we can instill toward others to make the world a bit better. Make our light shine a bit brighter. But in order to do so, we have to be happy within ourselves. That's why I'm picking the below as my favorite lines. Also, my soul mourns that I haven't done more of this and my spirit yearns to keep exploring ... adventuring *Heart*

“I’d spend more time at the beach,
hike more mountain paths,
ride horses along wilderness trails,
go white-water rafting on angry rivers,
go camping in the desert southwest.
In short, I’d avail myself throughout my life
of Nature’s grandeur in its many varied forms.
I’d travel at every opportunity presented.
The world is wide, gorgeous, amazing,
and well worth making the time
to experience it as much as you can.

And the ending is priceless! Nicely done!

*Cupcakep*HAPPY ANNIVERSARY!*Cupcakep*

*Note* WRITE ON! *Note*

Intuey


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Review of I HAD A FRIEND  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*Reading* This poem drew me in with the title and description. It most certainly did not disappoint.

Your words are powerful and pull on the heartstrings of the reader. You portray pride in the soldier well, along with the fear that every war brings.

The anxiety, sadness and anger also seep throughout your words. Ties which cannot be broken, no matter how badly you'd like to sever them. And your friend so needlessly lost *Cry*

I usually like to give a favorite stanza, or lines. But I'm unable to do so here. If I did, I would just be recopying and pasting the entire poem.

Truly beautiful, Monty. *Heart* *Salute*

*Note* WRITE ON! *Note*

*Hug* Tracey


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Here you go, sweetie! Hope it helps a bit *Bigsmile* *Heart*
Tracey
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Review of Do Something!  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
*Reading*Hey, I found your writing through the Spiritual Newsletter. *Bigsmile*.

I truly enjoyed reading your piece. It's so true. Many of us do sit and wait for the things we want to happen in our life, just to magically appear. (And yes, I've been guilty of this myself). We don't seem to realize how silly our actions are at the time. Wouldn't it be nice if we could just sit back and have it come to us? But things just don't happen that way. Your piece reminds us that if we want change in our lives, we have to help make that change happen.

I also like the advice you give to members of WDC (new and old, alike). It helps to remind us if we want ratings/reviews, we need to take the action to bring others to our port. It's amazing what a little interaction will do. (Both online and off).

Thanks so much for sharing your writing with us. I enjoyed it. *Smile*

*Note* WRITE ON! *Note*

Tracey
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Ticket to Hope  (E)
Closed! Thanks so much for a highly successful raffle~ Congrats winners :)
#2076609 by intuey of House Lannister


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Review of Soldier's Song  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
*Reading*This must have been under sponsored links, because I clicked on it by (a happy) accident!

Your poem speaks volumes for not only those at war against other countries, but it can also be implied while one is at war with anything in their lives.

The passion of your words shine through. The poem has a nice rhythm and reads smoothly. *Delight*

*Egg1* I do have a couple of small suggestions below. Please remember these are only my suggestions. Please use or discard them as you see fit. *Thumbsup*

*Egg2* Your rhymes seem to flow smoothly and easily. Not sounding force. Which is not always easy, especially using AABB rhyming scheme. There is only two lines, which you may consider making small adjustments:

*Egg3* Though sadness fill my head and toe.

This was the only line where I found the rhyme to sound forced. But you can make a small change, which I believe helps it flow better, not sounding forced at all:

Though sadness flows from head to toe.

That will also keep your line at 8 beats. *Smile*

*Egg4* For all those lost which I held dear.

Since the whole poem is in present tense, I'd just change the line to:

For all those lost who I hold dear.

You may also want to change 'which' to 'who' since you're speaking of people, not objects. *Smile*

I hope the couple of small suggestions helped some. *Bigsmile* I'm so glad I stumbled across this. It's well written and thought out piece. I thoroughly enjoyed it. *Heart*

Thanks so much for sharing. *Salute*

*Note* WRITE ON! *Note*

Tracey
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Ticket to Hope  (E)
Closed! Thanks so much for a highly successful raffle~ Congrats winners :)
#2076609 by intuey of House Lannister



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Review of That time I died  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
*Reading* Hey! I saw your writing in the spiritual newsletter! *Cool*

Below are only my thoughts about your piece. Please use or discard them, as you see fit. *Thumbsup*

*Wind* Your title definitely caught my eye. Life after death has always fascinated me. Then when I read the description, that was it! I had to come check it out. *Bigsmile*

*Earth* The beginning of your story is strong. It pulled me right in. I enjoyed the easy flow as your story progressed. Your words put the reader into your writing, making it a cinch to visualize your surroundings. Nice job! *Delight*

*CountryTR* I was surprised by the surroundings and the near-death experience. I enjoyed it, because it was different. Different in many ways, but similar in the ideology. I had to double check that this was a fantasy piece. *Wink*

*Note* There's just a couple of spots I noticed simple typos:

*Telescope* have an aneurysm where you to figure

aneurysm were you to figure

*Telescope* im not quite sure

I'm not quite sure

Your piece had me hooked and I enjoyed it from beginning to end. Nicely done. *Thumbsup*

*Note* WRITE ON! *Note*

Tracey


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Just a short note to let you know I REALLY liked this poem. It carries so much truth and such a great message. I think this is one of my favorites from you. Very nice job with the prompt and wonderful message! I hope you have an awesome weekend! TTYS,
Tracey


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Review of word magic  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
*Reading* This is really nice, Rhyssa. It definitely has the sing-song value, that was requested. I really enjoyed your second stanza, which is so easily relate-able:

as back and forth the hours turn
the line to dance is faint and blurred
so light the candles, watch them burn

It's amazing how many hours can pass by while writing (or on WDC) *Shock*

You did a fantastic job using all the prompt words and the rhyming scheme, which was requested in the contest.

NICE JOB!

*Note* WRITE ON! *Note*

*Heart* Tracey


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Review of I Love the 2000s  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Cool contest. I'll definitely try to submit a poem *Smile* Are those the actual prompts? You may want to put a header up, announcing that those ARE the prompts for the contest, and not just examples. *Smile* I'd also put some color in it, by making the wording different colors, under each heading. You may also want to make a set of rules (what you allow and don't allow) Put down the judges, or you under the judge. And under prizes, I'd put what size awardicon, etc... you will award. Will the prize size depend on how many entries you get? Also under donations, what kind of award will you be giving for 25K and plus donations?

Do you have any idea of what kind of graphic you'd like? Do you want just big numbers saying "The 2000's" or just "2000's"? Any ideas of what you're looking for? Just let me know. I'll be happy to help you if I can. *Smile*

Tracey
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*Reading* Hi Arakun the Twisted Raccoon . I am reviewing your activity as part of "The Talent Pond"  [ASR], on behalf of "a very Wodehouse challenge"  [E]. Plus, I will be entering the contest, so wanted to get familiar with the rules, prompts, etc... *Bigsmile*

You have this contest laid out nicely. Everything anyone needs to know about the contest, is clearly and plainly displayed. You made sure to address just about any questions anyone could have. Nicely done! *Thumbsup*.

This contest is a nice addition to "The Talent Pond". The more activities I explore and review for this group, the more it's making me want to join. *Bigsmile* I look forward to getting caught up, so I may do so!

Nice contest, with fun and inspirational prompts. Thanks for hosting. *Bigsmile*

Tracey
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*Reading* Hi Jaeff | KBtW of the Free Folk . I'm reviewing your activity for "The Talent Pond"  [ASR], on behalf of "a very Wodehouse challenge"  [E]

I picked your activity to review, because I love blogging and reading blogs. I always have good intentions, but for some reason cannot (or do not) keep up with doing so on a regular basis. I enjoy reading nonfiction, and particularly 'real life nonfiction', so blogs are the perfect place to go and read. *Smile*

Congratulations on being the selected activity of the month for "The Talent Pond". Your activity is well organized and easy to read. You make all the instructions easy to follow, and to the point. I also enjoyed how you have each blog rating in a 'dock' of its own. Very nice! *Thumbsup*

I really like the idea for the merit badge challenges, but noticed that you haven't updated this since the end of May. One thing you may want to consider, is making an announcement, on when to expect the next challenge, so the members don't have to keep dropping in, wondering when the next Merit Badge contest is going to begin. *Wink*

I really enjoyed visiting your activity. I believe it's a very nice addition to "The Talent Pond"  [ASR].

Tracey
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Review of The Talent Pond  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
*Reading* Hello, I'm reviewing "The Talent Pond"  [ASR], on behalf of my required activities from "a very Wodehouse challenge"  [E]

Your group page is laid out very nicely. I really like all the links and activities 'The Talent Pond' has for its members. The bitem links are easily seen and all the descriptions are nicely done. A very easy way to travel around the group, without getting lost. I also like the survey form to become a new member. The questions are thought out, without being too invasive or long-winded. *Bigsmile*

The information provided, lets the reader know what to expect when they join, and all the fringe benefits of becoming a member of such a wonderful group. I look forward to diving into it a bit deeper, and hopefully being able to have the time to become a member, shortly.

Thanks so much for sharing such a wonderful place for all WDC members!

Tracey
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In affiliation with Roots & Wings Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi DRSmith . I saw your writing on "Roots & Wings Contest"  [E] *Bigsmile*


*Reading* First off, that picture is amazing! I can't believe the size of the bull moose! And his racks are huge! One can truly appreciate the magnitude of his size, with your grandfather being in the photo as well! Beautiful. *Starstruck* I so enjoyed your story. The nostalgia and love definitely shine through your words. It must be truly wonderful having such fond childhood memories, (and fun to share!). I thought you did a wonderful job portraying your story to the reader. I could easily visualize each scene as I read, and smiled all throughout. A joy to read!

*Flower3* The Beginning- Awww . . . Reading your words transported me back to when times were simpler. Your description of the apple orchards and trout stream, made me want to jump right through the screen. It sounds like a beautiful place to live and raise a family. Your story about your mom and dad, reminded me of the story of my grandparents. It's a shame that so much family connection is lost, due to prejudices and pride. *Sad*

*Balloon2* The Title- I didn't know what Deux-Mille meant until I got to the end of your story. I thought that Deux may mean two/double, or something along those lines. But I knew Memoires so I read on to the description.

*Flower1* The Description- The description is nicely done and pulled me on in to want to read your story.

*Balloon4* The Ending- Wonderful, descriptive ending. It made me a little sad, that families just don't get together like that anymore. That it takes Christmas (or similar holiday) or funerals to bring the family together. I could tell how much you loved your childhood, and the stories you hold, just waiting to be told. Truly beautiful and special. *Heart*

*Flower3* The characterization- Your character descriptions were the strongest part of your story. You brought us up close and personal with each family member you told us about. It was as if we were in your head, reliving the memories with you. I don't think you could have done so any better! *Thumbsup*

*Balloon4* What I liked best about the story- I enjoyed the camaraderie in your story. The love and nostalgia coming from your words. I enjoyed the momentum and how your story flowed. Well done!

Thank you so much for sharing your story with us. I greatly enjoyed it!

*Note* WRITE ON! *Note*

Tracey





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In affiliation with WDC Addicts Anonymous  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Nixie Martell cheerleader Header for The Gift Shop This review was bought for you from "Invalid Item"  by Gaby ~ Keeper Of The Realm with the message: 'I know I owe you more reviews than anyone, but for starters this will have to do. *Wink* Don't worry I'll make sure to swing by your port myself and drop a word or two
Enjoy! *Bigsmile*


*Reading* Oh no! Mom needs to take another nerve pill! Leave it to a precious little furbaby to totally destroy everything! *Laugh* This was a really cute story, filled with drama. Completed with this reader's pleas of sorrow for poor, ole' Mom. *Sad*

*Flower3* The Beginning- Cute beginning with description of the adorable kitten (who could believe anything bad could come from him?) lol and the family trying to get ready for Dad's birthday party. Mom is on high jitters, afraid something is going to go wrong. I believe Mom has strong intuitions~ *Laugh*

*Balloon2* The Title- Great title and great name for a cat! How can a title like that, not draw one's attention!

*Flower1* The Description- *Laugh* Great description. After I read it, I knew I had to read the story. Nice job!

*Balloon4* The Ending- UGH! This ending would be the kind you'd be covering one eye, while peeking out through fingers with the other, if you were watching it on T.V. A lot of action brought in toward and at the ending. One couldn't help but feel so sorry for the mom. Definitely a Murphy's Law party! The descriptions were well done and made it easily to visualize while I read.

*Flower3* The characterization- You did a great job fleshing out the characters. Especially to have so many in such a short story. Well done! *Thumbsup*

*Balloon4* What I liked best about the story- How you described the kitten and the ending scene with the kitten. *Laugh* Hilarious! You kept a great momentum throughout the whole story, building it to an excellent climax at the end. Nicely done!

Thanks so much for sharing your writing with us. I enjoyed it!

*Note* WRITE ON! *Note*

Tracey


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