|Good morning, Fyn darling!
I've started reading The Eternal Seed and I must say I'm impressed by your fairy-tale style! I can almost feel the book open in my hands and see little faces around me as I read. I love it!
The opening poem is incredible. You must've spent a great amount of time puzzling out the exact words and clues before polishing it to the perfect end product. BRAVO!
My only suggestion for this chapter is a tiny nit-picky thing in this sentence here ...
He was thinking about the words, what they might mean to each of them and how this quest—for it was surely that—would send the three of them out into Alyndoria with each of them having to perform part of something that would save Alyndoria.
I would suggest changing one of the Alyndoria's. Like I said, a nit-picky thing, but with them being so close together it jumped out at me when reading. Perhaps you could change the second to something like ... save their lands ? Just a thought.
I'm off to the next chapter and looking forward to setting off on an adventure!