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Being your reader, then your other eyes.
I'm good at...
Discovering the psychology of a writer and the effect of the work on the reader. The effect on the reader is all that matters to me. Also, I'm not a grammar giant, so don't expect much.
Favorite Genres
Adventure, Action, Fantasy and SciFi.
Least Favorite Genres
Romance. No romance.
Favorite Item Types
Poems, novels and blog articles.
Least Favorite Item Types
Erotic articles.
I will not review...
Any romance, because I just hate reading it, and because it does no good to anyone. I agree you might not understand. Thanks.
Public Reviews
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Review by Mikel Bardsdale
In affiliation with Dreamweaver Bar & Grill  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Keep writing

Mikel πŸ‡
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Review of Unicorn Blood  
Review by Mikel Bardsdale
Rated: 18+ | (1.5)
Wisdom is justified by her children, and children take time to become adults.

I think that even though eighteen years olds are adults, we should show them the right way, not water their corruption.

Greetings.

Mikel πŸ–Œ
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Review of Special Snowfall  
Review by Mikel Bardsdale
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I appreciate reading this kind of story again after a very long time.

Keep writing.

Mikel πŸ–Œ
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Review of A Fonnie Story  
Review by Mikel Bardsdale
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Some bunny. πŸ™‚

Keep writing.

Mikel πŸ–Œ
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Review by Mikel Bardsdale
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
You write like me, I was glad to find. I enjoyed the reading, even though I wouldn't say I liked how everything the speaker said about the objects of her anger – the judges.

Keep writing.

Mikel πŸ–Œ
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Review by Mikel Bardsdale
In affiliation with Dreamweaver Bar & Grill  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I read everything but understood nothing. Knowing from experience the game must be cricket, a game I know nearly nothing about and have no interest in, I tried to read through only because of the indifferent enthusiasm of the speaker; now I've come to the end, knowing only the scores, but nothing else πŸ˜…

Keep writing.

Mikel πŸ–Œ
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Review of Dear Winter  
Review by Mikel Bardsdale
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)

It's quite funny that all the opponents you mentioned are no match for their vast foe whom they even dread.

Keep writing.

Mikel πŸ–Œ
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Review of Interloper  
Review by Mikel Bardsdale
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (4.5)
β€˜Even beauty must be gone, if it does not fit'; a grand finish.

I don't remember enjoying a poem of triplets in this way.

Mikel πŸ–Œ
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Review of All the Time  
Review by Mikel Bardsdale
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The deepest words I found here are β€˜all the time'. It makes one imagine many scenarios. I'm still thinking.

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Review of Noticing Newbies  
Review by Mikel Bardsdale
In affiliation with October Novel Prep Challenge G...  
Rated: 13+ | (1.0)
Email me.
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Review of Ralph  
Review by Mikel Bardsdale
Rated: 18+ | (2.5)
I pity the unfortunate boy.

Such dirty atmosphere.


Mikel πŸ–Œ
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Review by Mikel Bardsdale
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's not everyday that one sees a story written in prose, which though is nearly written only in conversation, is enjoyable.

I also agree that children tend to become like the parent that respect and like them most. That's how racism and disregard for others come from too. I know what I'm talking about, because I know the impact of living with such parent. I'm so sorry for such children.

Mikel πŸ–ŒοΈ


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Review by Mikel Bardsdale
In affiliation with Dreamweaver Bar & Grill  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Who's D’Oso?

Also, from the questions I see here and the discussion, I glean that you have experience in marriage. My question is whether what they know of each other is enough.

I also didn't say another thing I liked about the last chapter I read: the boy calls his father Sir. That made me kinda happy, because I call my seniors that, but minors and people of these days have lost respect.

Not to be preachy, take care πŸ˜„

Mikel πŸ–ŒοΈ


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Review of Fifth Grade  
Review by Mikel Bardsdale
In affiliation with Dreamweaver Bar & Grill  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Is that where it stops? It's too abrupt, methinks.

I enjoyed the reading and your style, and I didn't know I would enjoy a short story made of mainly of conversations. It was good.

There be a few typos here and there, and I hope you fix them.

Isn't girlfriend a word used to define female friends in a romantic relationship? You used it for her BFFs and got me confused.

One could have read on if you kept writing.

Mikel πŸ–ŒοΈ
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Review of The Dark...  
Review by Mikel Bardsdale
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
The message was passed, but I wonder why she stays there.

There be good men, but those men seldom get noticed.

Mikel πŸ–ŒοΈ
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Review of Genie  
Review by Mikel Bardsdale
In affiliation with Dreamweaver Bar & Grill  
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Realistic a bit, since not all the consciousness of the genie was expressed, but the message was passed.

The man was selfish and had no care for the genie. The final even was a good punishment, and leaves the reader laughing in the end.

Mikel πŸ–ŒοΈ
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Review of Meet Olivia Berns  
Review by Mikel Bardsdale
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi, I read this. I look forward to finishing it when I have time.

Israel πŸ–οΈ
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Review of Wings of time  
Review by Mikel Bardsdale
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Revelational.

Israel πŸ–οΈ
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Review by Mikel Bardsdale
Rated: E | (3.0)
Seems like a quickly penned poem. It lacks deep thought and weight.

I also would've liked it better if the rythm was uniform. πŸ˜‚

You are Caucasian, am I right? A negro wouldn't write it this way. It's shallow, praiseful of caucasians and benevolent to negroes in a friendship seeking way.

You also don't have the burden that they have in these days of silent, masquerade-wearing racism.

I have an ability to know much about the writer from his or her writing. It's great you wrote.

Israel πŸ–οΈ
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Review by Mikel Bardsdale
In affiliation with Dreamweaver Bar & Grill  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Interesting. A nice read.

Welcome to the group.


Israel πŸ–οΈ
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Review by Mikel Bardsdale
Rated: E | (4.0)
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Review of Hypothermia  
Review by Mikel Bardsdale
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Cool, imaginative and original.

Israel πŸ–οΈ
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Review by Mikel Bardsdale
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It was poems as this that stitred my love for poems. Keep writing.

Israel πŸ–οΈ
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Review of Beyond Reach  
Review by Mikel Bardsdale
Rated: E | (4.5)
I felt the spark through the words.
Greetings.

Israel πŸ–οΈ
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Review of Ritual  
Review by Mikel Bardsdale
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Sad.

It's sad that both men and women use each other's weaknesses to feed on them.

Israel πŸ–οΈ
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