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Review of Bumble Boy  
Review by Midoriya
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Poor, Poor Jonny... His arm... gone.... We must all realize that people who have lost limbs are still human too, Disabled people are not more different than you or me, I like this story but am sad for Jonny. We always take what we have for granted. Like our arms.

May Bumble Boy live in peace.
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Review of In Dreams  
Review by Midoriya
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
I am extremely confused about what this story is about? Is it about a murder? I have no clue, Please try to make it more understandable, though good details still very confusing, but it can always get better. Please try to make your stories even better than this one.
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Review of River of Death  
Review by Midoriya
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Holy! That would've been a very hard situation to deal with, Poor guy! His head gone, Very scary stuff! I wouldn't change a thing about this story! It has the perfect amount of suspense and text! good job on this and I hope to see some more "nightmare fuel" from you!
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Review of Floods  
Review by Midoriya
Rated: E | (3.0)
Wow! I think it's very... interesting? It could do with some more lines but overall I like it, I think it could be improved, Nothing is ever perfect, but this is a great start, If you keep on trying you will get better, You can trust me.

From Midoriya
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Review of Solia's Revenge  
Review by Midoriya
Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
Very confusing, I did not understand the story all that much, transitions made it very difficult to understand personally and were a bit clumped up together, I'd recommend spacing out and re-looking over this story and get feedback from someone else close to you, but overall I liked the idea of a Space Prison. Keep on going and you'll get better!
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Review of Misty  
Review by Midoriya
Rated: E | (3.0)
Very cute and adorable, I think it's great but I think some word choices make the entire thing confusing and hard to read. I got confused on multiple parts, but overall I think it's great! Good luck with your writing adventures!
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Review of For Puppy Love  
Review by Midoriya
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Puppies are the best, I mean who doesn't love puppies? I have a cute doggo sitting next to me! If he was hurt I would do anything to help him. FOR PUPPY LOVE!
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Review of Chivalry  
Review by Midoriya
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Beautiful poem! I really like it! I think that it could use a bit more... emotion I guess? But overall it is very good! I like it and I hopefully will be able to read even more from you! and don't forget! Keep doing your best and it will pay off! Trust me!
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Review of Piano  
Review by Midoriya
Rated: E | (4.5)
Woah! Creepy!! But overall very good! Could use some more lines and some of it is very confusing, but with all due time, your bound to get better. Don't forget to keep at it and try your best! I honestly think this was pretty cool! So keep at it and I cannot wait to see other stuff made by you!
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Review of Be Reasonable  
Review by Midoriya
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow! Very nice! Everything seems more reasonable, doesn't it? though I don't like the fact that the woman in the car seems like a Karen! but it kinda matches the story! Honestly, I get the guy, Mothers are very important in our lives, so to be in a hurry to find your sick mother is understandable.
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Review by Midoriya
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like it! But it seems everything is a bit clumped up and can be hard on the eyes, Also if this is real and not just a story please put it because it seems real enough. Overall the grammar is pretty good and seems in order, punctuation seems in order aswell.
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Review of The Awakening  
Review by Midoriya
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow! This story is pretty good overall! I would love to see the next part but I do not see anything about where this takes place, when does it take place. That is very good to know when you edit things as it can always help out your story and make things come together, Overall I like it :D
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