Hi, I haven't done many reviews before, but I could just tell you how, Torment', made me feel. I was riveted and wanted more, loved it. On reflection, the dark under currents were amazing and held my attention when reading it. I loved your use of metaphors and clever use of words. I really wouldn't have any criticisms or ways to improve, because I loved it the way it was. I would be interested in reading other material you have written.
Hi, falsepoet, I'm brand new on this site, and have no clue what I'm doing yet. But your poem, 'you left without saying goodbye', touched my heart and made me cry. It was so beautiful
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