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Review of Gaia  
Review by Izzyb1972
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi again Geoff, 'Gaia', had me dreaming off to that far away place somewhere in the back recesses of my mind. It was a nice relaxing mini holiday, so thanks heaps for that. You are very good at setting the scene, so much so that I was transported there. So it my arse laying back enjoying the scenery lol . I love the way you describe in such great detail. I also love the talented way you actually use words and put together the story. Here I was meant to be giving a review, which I imagine is supposed to not only be looking at the story, but also paragraphs, spelling ect, but forgot all about that stuff lol. So I think there is a good answer, in that I was sucked into the story so much that I forgot what I was supposed to be doing! Also, I was wanting to send you a poem I wrote when I was just fourteen years old. I'm not sure about including it in my profile, but thought I would show you in an email. I'll email it seperate to this, so it's not part of review. But all up, great works and keep sending us on trips in our minds
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Review of Torment  
Review by Izzyb1972
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, I haven't done many reviews before, but I could just tell you how, Torment', made me feel. I was riveted and wanted more, loved it. On reflection, the dark under currents were amazing and held my attention when reading it. I loved your use of metaphors and clever use of words. I really wouldn't have any criticisms or ways to improve, because I loved it the way it was. I would be interested in reading other material you have written.
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Review by Izzyb1972
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, falsepoet, I'm brand new on this site, and have no clue what I'm doing yet. But your poem, 'you left without saying goodbye', touched my heart and made me cry. It was so beautiful
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