|Hi! I'm Jade Amber and I'm giving you a review!
This is a beautiful story of the drive to Grandma's house.
You write like a writer.
You're a natural.
But of course, with every good writer, there's bound to be a mistake.
When you mention the pine trees and evergreens, lowercase the p and t in 'Pine Trees' and the e in 'Evergreens'.
This has the feeling of being told from a seventeen or eighteen year old grandchild, but the question is, is the character male or female?
Though there is a part that confuses the reader.
The line 'You think with a smile on your lips' might make the reader think that they are the character driving to Grandma's, but in the details, it says that this story is from experience.
But all in all, this story is a very good read.
Oh, and by the way: