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Title: A Remembrance of Old Doors
Impression Of Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem, that caught my interest.
Spelling, grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhythm is good. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: This is really a beautiful and touching poem and really makes the reader think. As I was reading this I thought about my past and what my future hopes in store for me. You painted this picture of the present and past very well in your poem. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout.
Once again, this is a truly beautiful work and a pleasure to read.
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Title: Intertwining Branches
Impression Of Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling, grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhythm is good. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: What a beautiful poem you have written here. About orchards. As I was reading this I could picture the two trees intertwining and the orchards in full bloom. You did a good job with imagery in this poem. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. My favorite phrase was:
Our blooming branches,
As the seasons mark a shapely and timely change
Of life’s windswept and magical fortunes,
In our widely sown and colorful orchard…
This is such a beautiful phrase, excellent in depth of emotion and the imagery is gorgeous with this phrase. Just lovely. Very nicely done, and a pleasant read to boot.
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Title: The Children of Tomorrow
Impression Of Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem. that caught my attention.
Spelling, grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhythm is good. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. There is very strong depth of emotion and feeling in every line. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. All in all a good poem.
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Title: The Collection Of Dreams
Impression Of Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling, grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhythm is good. The flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: Good poem you have written here. About your dreams. Never stop dreaming. Cause you never know what may happen from your dreams. You really used variety of words as well as metaphors and imagery that pertains to the senses to evoke feeling and picture. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is very strong depth of emotion and feeling in every line. My favorite phrase was:
Moderate thinking and aiming too high
While stars you are reaching for fall from the sky,
Will lessen your care for dreams that you’ll nab,
So use your desire while hauling that “grab”!
TI thought this was a good way to end your poem. I enjoyed reading your poem. Good Job!
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Title: A Father's Love
Impression Of Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling, grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: This is a poem about your beloved father. There is wonderful depth of emotion and so much feeling is expressed in every line. The reader can tell that you love your father very much and that the two of you had a very special relationship. I know that sometimes this can be a rare commodity indeed, so please consider yourself lucky. I know many people who have not had this kind of relationship with their fathers. You are are really wearing your heart on your sleeve in this poem, which is just lovely. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. A beautiful poem written straight from the heart that I hope many people have a chance to read and enjoy as much as I have. Very well done!
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You have beautiful grandchildren!! My daughter have been married for 2 yrs and I'm still not a grandma. That is one of my greatest wishes I wish would come true for me. Congratulations on your precious grandchildren!!
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Title: AUTUMN
Impression Of Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling, grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhythm is very good. The flow is nice and easy. The form is lovely, being centered on the page, which makes it attractive to the eye. This, of course, is a matter of taste, and what I prefer.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. My favorite phrase was:
Stop --- be still, listen:
the tolling bell of winter
echoes in the shadows.
This is such a beautiful phrase, excellent in depth of emotion and the imagery is gorgeous with this phrase. I thought this was the perfect way to wrap up this poem I enjoyed reading this poem because it was beautifully written.
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Title: LAUGHTER
Impression Of Title: A perfect title that is suitable to the subject of your poem, that caught my interest.
Spelling, grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhythmis very good. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: I have no suggestions to make this poem any better.
Overall: What a funny and great poem you have written here. This is a beautiful, well written poem that conjures up wonderful pictures for the reader. You give a lot of description in this piece, which I really like. I can really paint the scene and you did a great job setting the mood to it. You definitely have a true gift with words. Very nice originality and great imagination too. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. This was an enjoyable piece that I am sure many will be able to relate to. I think children of all ages would just love reading this poem. Just by reading this poem, the reader senses the closeness I can tell that you must have put a lot of time and effort into this poem,and I'am sure there were many revisions, but the reward is in the beautiful final copy of this poem. Thank you for sharing, and congratulations on such a beautiful poem! One in which I would highly recommend. Kudos to the author!!
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Title: Embers of the Day
Impression Of Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling, grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. As I was reading this I could just feel the hurt inside of that person. It is not an easy thing to end a relationship. I could feel the agony and despair in this poem. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Although this was a sad poem, I enjoyed reading it. Nice job!!
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Title: Haiku: Winger 2010
Impression Of Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling, grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhythm is good. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: Good imagery of what winter feels like and how we long for spring. Which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Good poem and a joy to read.
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Title: Things I Thought Were True
Impression Of Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem. The form is lovely, being centered on the page, which makes it attractive to the eye. This, of course, is a matter of taste, and what I prefer.
Spelling, grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhythm is good. The flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: Parting ways in any relationship isn't an easy job, but it's about something I think we've all experienced sometime in or our lives. Some times you just have to find the strength to get on with your life and start anew. Sadness is found here. Unable to understand and confused. Left alone and lonely. You conveyed the emotion of pain very well in this poem. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. This is a great poem. A sad one, of course, but a great one nonetheless.
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I'm reviewing your poem for "Invalid Item" General Disclaimer: I hope that my observations are in someway helpful, though I ask you to take into account that what I offer is only a personal opinion and respectfully given to you. Only you know what is right for your writing! Mother
Title:
Impression Of Title: The title fits and is appropriate.
Spelling, grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: I do have a suggestion. I would shorten up you lines. Example:
When I was young and innocent,
my mother sang a song.
Perhaps it had to do with birds,
I can’t recall just how it went,
though I used to sing along.
By doing this, it would help your rhyme and make your poem flow better. But, that is only my opinion, only you know what is right for your poem.
Overall: This poem is a very sad and emotional one. About a mother that drinks and commits suicide by being hit by a train. And brakes her son's heart every time she drinks. What an awful thing you had to go through as a child. My heart aches for you in all that you endured. As I was reading this, I could just feel the pain, agony of the depths of deepest despair. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. It's clear that you write from your heart. All in all a good poem.
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╚╝╚╩╝╚╩╝╚╝═╚╝ ♥￥☆★☆★☆￥♥ ★☆May All Your Wishes And More Come True For 2011!! Best Regards, janice48 Have a Nice Day!!
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Hi, Destiny This review comes from:"Invalid Item" Title: Faded memories
Impression Of Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling, grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: I found this poem is so heart catching, breath taking, and tear dropping and really pulled at my heartstrings. About a woman who is very sad because she only has her memories of the one she was in love with. Bitterness is also found here. Unable to understand and confused. Left alone and lonely. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. I did feel the agony of the depths of deepest despair. I think the picture really added a lot to your work. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. Very nicely done. To me you did a fine job with this.
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Hi, Jessesgirl This review comes from:"Invalid Item" Title: American Heroes
Impression Of Title: A great title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling, grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhythm is very good, Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: What a great poem you have written here about honoring of our military. You emotions of Proud of the military was conveyed very well in this poem. I like the tone and subject of you piece. It gets the reader thinking. As I was reading this, it made me think of all the men and women still fighting overseas for our country. I pray everyday that each and everyone of them will come home safely and soon. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. This is a beautiful, well written poem which I enjoyed reading.
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Hi, Jessegirl This review comes from:"Invalid Item" Title: Your Hands
Impression Of Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling, grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhythm is very good. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: This is a poem about a beloved father. There is wonderful depth of emotion and so much feeling is expressed in every line. The reader can tell that this person loves their father very much and that the two of them have a very special relationship. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. I really enjoyed reading this because it was so beautifully written, Nicely Done!
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Hi This review comes from:"Invalid Item" Title: Just The Wife
Impression Of Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem, that caught my interest.
Spelling, grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhythm is very good. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: What a great poem you have written here. As, I read this poem, I thought to myself, wow, this poem is speaking about me. I thought this poem is a very sad and emotional one. Because it shows that the husband does not have any respect for his wife around his friends. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. My favorite phrase was:
You think you're the very life
of every party or cookout
but my heart dies a little
when you say I'm
“just the wife”
I thought this was the perfect way to wrap up your poem. Good Job!!
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Hi Berty, This review comes from:"Invalid Item" Title: End Song
Impression Of Title: Fits the content well.
Spelling, grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: First off, I sure hope this is just fictional. If not, please go and talk to someone. PLEASE!! I found this poem is so heart catching, breath taking, and tear dropping. Really pulled at my heartstrings and brought a tear to my eye. To think that a person would commit suicide because they are lonely and depressed about how their life is going. What a sad situation this person is in. This poem is a very sad and emotional one. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. The feelings come through and between every line. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. All in all a good poem, very sad though.
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Hi, Jess This review comes from:"Invalid Item"
Title: One Possibility
Impression Of Title: The title fits and is appropriate.
Spelling, grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhythm is good. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: The only suggestion I have is with punctuation. I would place a strategically placed comma at natural pauses will give emphasis to your thoughts as well as make the flow and rhythm even better in my opinion.
Overall: This is a poem about someone special in your life. There is wonderful depth of emotion and so much feeling is expressed in every line. Again, this reminds me of a love letter which you wrote to your special person in your life, and in essence, I believe this is what this really is. The reader can tell that you love this person very much and that the two of you had a very special relationship. You are are really wearing your heart on your sleeve in this poem, which is just lovely. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. A beautiful poem written straight from the heart.
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Title: New Year's Resolution
Impression Of Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling, grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhythm is good. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: What a great poem you have written here. About setting realistic goals for 2011. This poem was true to the subject and carried the message well. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is very strong depth of emotion and feeling in every line. I like the tone and subject of you piece. My favorite phrase was:
Old habits I know are hard to break.
New figures I want, for goodness sake!
I liked this phrase because it is so true that old habits are hard to break. I can really relate to this because I'm a smoker and have tried many times to quite, but have unfortunately failed. I'm going to try again this year, hopefully I will succeed. Very nicely done, and a pleasant read to boot.
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Title: Animals On New Year's Eve
Impression Of Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling, grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhythm is pretty good as well as the flow. The form is very nice, being centered on the page which I think looks attractive. This, of course, is a matter of taste, and what I prefer.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: What a nice poem you have written here. Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. I think that highlighting the word (New Year's Eve} in different colors, really added to your work. Very nice originality and good imagination, too. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. My favorite phrase was:
I found my cat still snoring.
She hasn't moved yet,
And she has a most curious smile on her face.
So I only suppose this is what animals do.
It’s what I would do if I were she.
This was a perfect way to end this poem. While reading this phrase, I too have often thought it would be nice to be a cat or dog and to just lay around all day and do nothing. Nice job and a pleasure to read.
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Title: Go in Peace
Impression Of Title: A perfect title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling, grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: First off I send you my deepest condolence and prayers for the loss of you loved one. There is a lot of feeling in this piece. I can tell the difference between someone being angsty and someone writing from experience, and I could feel the pain and the loss in your heart as I read it. There are tears in my eyes right now. Really pulled at my heartstrings while I was reading this. I can not even begin to image what you are going through. May God help you through this trying time. You brought forth your emotions and I felt as if I was feeling them myself. I am so sorry that you have to go through this. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. I usually have a favorite line or two, but, Oh my gosh, the whole poem just touched me and brought me to tears. Very well written poem. Again, my deepest condolences, you will be in my prayers.
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Title: The Young Wolf
Impression Of Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem, that caught my interest.
Spelling, grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Good assonance and alliteration. Choice of words is good which makes for good readability.
Suggestions: I have no suggestion to make this poem any better.
Overall: What a great poem you have written here. You chose your words carefully to evoke beautiful images for the reader. You describe the wolves very well in this poem. I could just picture them in my mind as I was reading. You definitely have a true gift with words. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. I really enjoyed reading this because it was so beautifully written, and the imagery was just great. One in which I would highly recommend. Kudos to the author!!
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Title: Son of Nature
Impression Of Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling, grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: What a lovely poem you have written here. Speaks of God who touches you and lives in wind and air. I found this poem to be very inspirational. It shows so well how it feels when one is willing to let the false sense of self go and become one with God. He does all of these things and more, giving a sense of peace and relief in the wake of fear and pride. Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Very nicely done, and a pleasant read to boot.
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Title: The Strange Creature.
Impression Of Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: What a good poem you have written here. Good imagery of this beast and how it gets in trouble, which helps the reader to see in his or her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. I could just imagine while I was reading this, I could just imagine in my mind the beast setting the curtains on fires. Very nice originality and great imagination in this poem. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Very nicely done, and a pleasant read to boot.
Keep On Writing And Rock On!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: Nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is beautiful depth of emotion and feeling which comes through in every line. Good imagery about a person that is very much in love, which helps the reader to see in her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem.
Keep On Writing And Rock On!!!
Thank you for allowing me to review your writing -- I consider it an honor and privilege.
Have a Wonderful Day!!!
Wishing You A Very
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