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Review of I have control?  
Review by express
Rated: E | (4.5)
Review of: I have control [E]
A lesson in flying.
By: mikemahoney
Item: 1983002
Review by: express



I enjoyed reading your article very much. The thrill learning to fly plane would be very exciting. I liked your description of a small plane and comparing it to a go-cart on a freeway.

I did not observe any typographical errors or misspellings. Your grammar is perfect.
Keep Writing!
The descriptions used and your comparisons were what I enjoyed the most!
I would have like your article to be a little longer.

express


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Review by express
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Review of: The Day I Called Jesus
By: ruwth
# 1570698
Review by: express

I liked your article. You are a talented writer! I can just imagine your surprise when the phone call went through. Telephone communication has come a long way.

I did not notice any grammatical errors or misspellings.

Keep Writing!

express


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Review of Simply Be  
Review by express
Rated: E | (4.5)
Review of: Simply Be (E)
Everyone has asked this question at times of hardship.
by Nevis Moore
Item # 1970967
Review by: express


I enjoyed reading your poem very much. Life is short and we need to handle it with care.

Your poem flowed nicely. The lines were well organized.

I noticed no grammatical or spelling errors.

Simply Be is a well written and thought provoking piece.

KEEP WRITING!

express


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Review of Dear Wastebasket  
Review by express
Rated: E | (4.0)
Review of: Dear Wastebasket

By: A*planning*Faith
Item #: 1973505
Review by: express

I have a similar relationship with piles of loose notebook papers. As a New Year's resolution I threw most of the scraps of paper away. I found that difficult to do. True confessions of a pack rat!

Keep Writing!

I can identify with your frustration. I liked your poem. It is helpful to write done your frustrations.

Good luck with your writing.

express


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Review of Addiction  
Review by express
Rated: E | (4.5)

Review of: Addiction (E) The Resurrection of a cigarette
By: TheUnreiableNarrator
Item # 1973586
Review by: express


Keep Writing!


I enjoyed your outline on cigarette smoking. An addiction to tobacco is very difficult to stop. Your outline captured the diabolical and alluring quality of cigarettes. I have smoked for over fifty years! I have tried to quite smoking more times than I can count.

My overall impression: Nicely written! Your outline makes me think. You have helped me with incite not available in quite smoking manuals . Thank you!


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Review of Poem I  
Review by express
Rated: E | (4.0)
Review of: The Poem1 (E)
Item #: 1972245
By: Nashpatty
Review By: express

Keep Writing! I enjoyed your poem. It needs to be longer.

It is very Shakespeare.

Spelling and Grammar: I noticed no grammatical or spelling errors.

express


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Review of If I  
Review by express
Rated: E | (3.0)
This poem touched me! The short,simple lines were precisely expressed

Review of: Of my love


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