Wishing you the best, may family and good friend help make his passing soft to bear. (big hugs to Sm) I found a few spelling problems but since this is more personal then a story or poem I will just say they are in the beging. Take care and thank youf or making this wonderful sit. I bet you grandpa would be proud of you.
WOW! It's so short but I liked it. It had chills running up my spine. GREAT JOB. I liked the bottomless eyes.
They seam to see right through you don't they?
Great poem/prose it could picture a raven siting on a fence or low in a tre just watching life as it goes by. Well done! You captured the spiret of a raven very well in this.
Have a great day.
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A wonderful poem even though I have no idea what a mono ryme is I really liked this poem. It brought to my mined all the days I use to ride. I loved the way the wind blew through my hair and how my troubled mined would clear. LOL maybe I should write a poem about Dancer and I. Thank you so much for shareing this wonderful poem, it lifted my heart today. I needed a good spiret lift. Thanks:)
Have a great day and good job!!!
EXSALENT WORK!!!!!Wow, these writing let me see a side of and helped me to see who you really are. Great job. You pored yourself into these pieces of work. You did a great job. Keep writing you doing great!!!!
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Wow, This was a well writen story. I love the happy ending. Great job!! I was very surprised that you did this great story all around song titles. I wish I could do something as cool as that. Great job keep writing. I bet you could do it again, and if you do I would love to read it.
WOW, You are better at poems then you think. I just love them. Your poems are so full of life and feelings. I think you need to change the discription of this folder to well writen poems by you. I mien it you have some great poems in here. I think you are a Poet by heart, keep it up, your doing great!!!!
This is a good poem, It needs a little more heart in it. Its not giving me the feeling of sadness or pain the way I think of feeling when a loved one is dieing or has died. I found a great poem the other day, read it and think of how you feel when you read it. If you can feel the sadness the lonelyness add those to your own poem. Keep writing your doing good.
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This is a great Idea to help those people who love to write but are in a bad spot and can't afford to buy an upgrade. This is also a great way to get people to shair the love and to help one another. Great job and may this group/forum go far.
Very good to me it needs a little more chill to it. Think in a nother Point of view and try to get another angel on it to bring this story out more. You have a great story you just need to polish it a little more.
Great job keep at it, it only get better.
I have not read all of them but the two I did read were very good and dark. I wish I could weave a tail like you. Keep up the great work and I will read more of your work later. Have a good evening.
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