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Review of Worst Date EVER  
Review by jack benny
Rated: E | (4.0)
That was you?!?! How have you been?…Sorry, I couldn’t resist. The unpleasantness of the story comes through loud and clear. I think next time you might want to check to see if the ladies room has an escape window. The only thing I think you should add is your feelings of uneasiness. It is implied, but your writing is so well done on descriptions, it would add even more to a good read. Thanks for sharing it.
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Review of YOUR SILHOUETTE  
Review by jack benny
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Thanks.
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Review of The Sound  
Review by jack benny
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Driving back from Alabama to New Jersey this weekend a persistent rattle lurking someplace in the dash drove me nuts. Speed up, slow down, press on the vents, press on the buttons, who the hell knows where it was coming from. Lord knows this story flashed through my mind. We all have personal gremlins that seem to like nothing else in life but to giggle in a corner while we try to find them making annoying noises. Thanks for the story!
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Review by jack benny
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love it.

I am a son of a WWII submariner and everything you say is true. You will have to go aboard a working (or war boat memorial) to physically appreciate the limited space those men were required to live in. I can tell your age from your comments on smoking. You have to understand, smoking to me is not a trait, it is a right. In WWII it was as natural as breathing.

A few things to add to the perfume: diesel engines puffing noxious fumes, cooking 24 hours a day,

Keep righting! Your curiosity for history will serve you well, well done.
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