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Review of walls  
Review by Jordan Richelle
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This sounds, oh so familiar Charlie, like me in my younger days. I love your descriptiveness and your comparison of the water smashing against your chest. We do learn our route eventually or at least learn to bypass the wall and kick our feet in the ocean rather than than the water an assault on you. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.


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Review by Jordan Richelle
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This writing moved me to tears. I have no answers, I fear for the inhumaneness of humans. The writing is well done and it shows compassion and knowledge about the continued atrocities happening in the Sudan and will hopefully move others as it has moved me to educate themselves about what is happening, as I will continue to do. Thank you for this powerful piece.
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Review of 1/6/11  
Review by Jordan Richelle
Rated: E | (4.0)
I think it is wonderful to hear all the things that you are not embarrased about. I think it would also be great for you to own up to those qualities that make you a decent young man, perhaps by using the words "I am proud of", in some instances. It feels a little like you are still thinking that others (in this case I would guess your peers) are still giving you the impression that you you should be embarrassed and you are defending yourself. It sounds like you are a very wise young man that has made some good choices. Keep up the good grades. You have plenty of time to get involved in a physical relationship with someone and waiting until college is not such a bad idea, if thats what you want. I am an avid reader as well, that is another thing for you to be proud of and I hope you are! Keep Writing!!!
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