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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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Hello 💙 Carly: poems & novel

Thank you for taking the time to enter the May 2025 round of the "The Bradbury Contest" Open in new Window..

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Positives

I thought you did a great job capturing the "nature" genre in this piece. The setting was well-described and detailed, and a pleasure to discover in the experience of reading. I thought the characters were also realistic and engaging. Nice work!


Suggestions

I was hoping for just a tad more narrative (conflict, resolution, etc.). As it is, it's a lovely vignette about the experience of being in nature, but I was hoping for a bit more storytelling in terms of narrative drama ("drama" in the sense of dramatic tension, not that the characters need to have unnecessary drama in their lives. *Laugh*).


Overall

Overall, I thought this was a solid entry. Good job!


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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Hello Kaytings

Thank you for taking the time to enter the May 2025 round of the "The Bradbury Contest" Open in new Window..

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Positives

The characters in the story were excellent, and I thought you did a great job with the dialogue in particular. Well done!


Suggestions

This is more of a personal preference and an issue of presentation rather than storytelling, but I'd recommend separating each of your paragraphs with a blank line, and/or increasing the font size of the text in your item; with such a small font and little white space on the page, it's a little difficult to read and appreciate the narrative fully.


Overall

Unfortunately, this story isn't eligible to win the contest because it wasn't entered in "The Bradbury" Open in new Window.. If you'd like to be eligible for future rounds of this contest, please feel free to also enter these items in the main activity so it'll be eligible next time! *Smile*


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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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Hello iKïyå§ama

Thank you for taking the time to enter the May 2025 round of the "The Bradbury Contest" Open in new Window..

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Positives

I'm really impressed by the way you were able to include so many different specific word prompts into a cohesive story while still making it feel natural and authentic. The characters were also really unique and vibrant. Great job!


Suggestions

The split between the two parts of the story felt a bit abrupt. In a piece this short, I think I would have preferred to have that expository information in the first part more naturally woven into the cohesive narrative of the second part, rather than a standalone prelude that forces the reader to reset and refocus after a few hundred words.


Overall

Overall, I think this is a really strong Writer's Cramp entry that does a really impressive job of incorporating a difficult prompt. Nice work!


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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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Hello Amethyst Angel 🌼

Thank you for taking the time to enter the May 2025 round of the "The Bradbury Contest" Open in new Window..

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Positives

I like that you took the "haunted car" trope and put a bit of a spin on it, where it wasn't the prior owner tormenting the new one. The characters were engaging, and there was a good mix of detail and dialogue that kept the narrative moving along.


Suggestions

You did such a great job describing the details of the car, the characters, etc. that it kind of makes the generic setting stand out as underdeveloped. You have such a vibrant way of describing everything else, that driving down "a quiet country road that ran parallel to the mountains and headed toward a state park" felt a little flat by comparison.

The scheme that Dan and Reema come up with to suss out whether Dr. Sebring felt a little overwrought. There were a lot of assumptions made that had to play out perfectly for the plan to pay off the way it did; it would have been great to have thought through the plan a bit more and come up with something more open-ended so it didn't feel so railroady (i.e., that the narrative couldn't really have resolved any other way).


Overall

Overall, this was a fun read and an entertaining entry for the contest. Nice work!


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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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Hello No Sox with Sandals

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Positives

I like the surprising twist at the end of the story to indicate that there's a larger narrative playing out. I also thought your use of detail in the story was excellent.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this entry. Nice work!


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Rated: ASR | (3.0)
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Hello Angelica Weatherby- July 4th

Thank you for taking the time to enter the May 2025 round of the "The Bradbury Contest" Open in new Window..

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Positives

I liked the use of detail in your story. By focusing on a very specific thing (making a bed), you were able to include both dialogue and description that made the story come to life in only a few short paragraphs. Nicely done!


Suggestions

I was hoping for a little more narrative. This read like more of an anecdote or a vignette rather than a story, and the "single mother" prompt was more peripheral/implicit than explicitly a centerpiece of the story.


Overall

Overall, this was an endearing, entertaining read. I think there's some opportunity for improvement, but it was a enjoyable piece of flash fiction. Good job!


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Wandering Thoughts

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Positives

I really enjoyed these song lyrics. I thought you did a great job with the structure and repetition of the stanzas, and I could totally imagine this as a song set to music. Well done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a great job with these song lyrics. Nice work!


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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Words Whirling 'Round

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Positives

I really enjoyed this poem. I thought you did a great job with the structure and imagery, and the language used was really visceral and impactful. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a great job with this piece. Well done!


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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi DaKidRocks

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Positives

I really liked the brief, staccato structure and pace of this poem. It was short, but really impactful. The choice of having all the lines either contain only two or three words was really effective for a poem of this type. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I enjoyed reading this. Well done!


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Sumojo

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Positives

I really enjoyed this poem. I thought you did a great job packing a ton of imagery and meaning into just a few short stanzas, and your structure was excellent. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a great job with this piece. Well done!


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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Hi Angelica Weatherby- July 4th

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Positives

I thought you did a great job with this poem. It was simple, to the point, and you did an excellent job with the imagery and structure. Well done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I really enjoyed reading this piece. Nice work!


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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi R☆

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Positives

I thought you did a great job with the theme of this piece, and connecting the technological with the religious. Nice work!


Suggestions

TYPO: The computer sings a synth melody sung by its choir of screen angels...

TYPO: It wires your heart into its own, making you one; with the illusion of individuality.


Overall

Overall, I enjoyed reading this piece. Well done!


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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Hi THANKFUL SONALI Magical Days!

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I don't think I've ever seen a mashup between Jane Eyre and Harry Potter before! This was creative and I think you did a great job featuring all of the Harry Potter elements that you think someone from 200 years ago would be interested to see.


Suggestions

I would have loved to have seen a little more about not just Hogwarts and Harry Potter, but some of the other modern elements that Jane Eyre would have discovered as well. In addition to the magic and literary elements, I imagine she'd also be relatively gobsmacked by things like electricity and even the train to Hogwarts. It would have been great to include some of those elements as well.

I also can't say that, for me personally, meeting JK Rowling is anywhere near the top of my list of celebrities I'd like to meet after her recent forays into anti-trans activism and outright bigotry; she's one of the foremost examples of situations where I very much try to separate the author from their work, because I love the Harry Potter books but detest her as a person. But I don't suppose Jane Eyre would be aware of any of that backstory if she were to suddenly time-travel to the present day for a Harry Potter holiday. *Wink*


Overall

Overall, I enjoyed reading this item. It was imaginative and entertaining. Nice work!


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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Joey's Summer Sparkle

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Positives

I thought you did a good job with this poem. This piece definitely brings back memories of all the Game of Thrones activities and prompts throughout the years, and I think you did an excellent job responding to the prompt.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I enjoyed this piece. Well done!


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi danielbird

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Positives

I really liked the structure of this piece. The language is sophisticated, and you presented an engaging, well-paced poem that lends itself well to reading multiple times to fully appreciate it. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

I really enjoyed reading this piece. Well done!


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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Tim Chiu

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Positives

I thought you did a really great job with the structure and imagery of this piece. The language was elegant and sophisticated, and you painted a vivid picture in comparatively few words and lines. Well done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece. Nice work!


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Rated: E | (3.0)
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Positives

I liked the juxtaposition of the animal and human roles in this story. I thought it was a really clever way to subvert expectations, and you did a good job of still capturing the owner-pet relationship while inverting the roles. Nice work!


Suggestions

I would have loved to have seen a little more build-up to the payoff of the switched roles. As it is, the story just kind of lays it out like it's a commonly-understood fact, and I think there's a real opportunity here to subvert your audience's expectations with a little bit of setup and payoff. I think it would be really compelling if we're following a story of a teenage girl who is being distracted from doing her homework by her pet... and if we get a more traditional image of that in our minds first before you pull a bait-and-switch and reveal that the dog is the one doing homework once it has a chance to catch the reader off guard and surprise them.


Overall

Overall, this was a fun read and it has a lot of potential. You're off to a great start!


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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Positives

I thought you did a good job with this piece. The mix of dialogue and description was well balanced and kept the story moving along at a brisk pace.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece. Well done!


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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
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Positives

You did a great job with the details and description in this piece. There was just enough information to paint a clear picture in the reader's mind, while still leaving enough room for their imagination to fill in the gaps.


Suggestions

From a formatting perspective, you might want to consider employing some paragraph breaks to help structure the piece and make it a little more readable.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece. Nice work!


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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Positives

I enjoyed reading this story. Flash fiction stories are always fun to read, and I thought you did a great job with this one.


Suggestions

This isn't specifically a suggestion for the story itself, but I'd highly recommend setting at least one genre other than "Contest Entry" for your piece in order to give potential readers some idea of the story's subject matter.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a solid job with this. Well done!


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Positives

I thought you did a good job with this story. The details and description were excellent and the overall pace was engaging. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I enjoyed the read and thought you did a great job. Well done!


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Positives

I thought you did a great job conveying emotion and feeling in this piece. Your use of detail at the beginning helped set the scene and allowed the reader to identify with you as you eventually shared more of your mindset with them. Well done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a solid job with this piece. Nice work!


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Positives

I enjoyed reading this item. I thought it was thought-provoking and interesting, and you did a great job of mixing both rhetorical questions and actual questions to get the reader to think. Well done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece. Nice work!


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Positives

I thought you did a great job with this item. The imagery and the structure of the piece were both excellent, and you did a great job of capturing the theme that love seems silly or illogical until you experience it for yourself. Well done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a great job with this piece. *Smile*


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Positives

I thought the writing was direct and to the point, and had some really visceral, impactful language for such a short piece.


Suggestions

It's a little unclear what the purpose or goal of this piece is. It's listed as being a draft of a piece of writing in the "Animal" genre, but the intro and the body of the item itself don't really elaborate on that premise.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job making an impactful impression with your writing, but there's a bit of confusion about what this piece is or what the author's intentions with it are, which would be helpful to elaborate upon.


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