This story was great! You definitely have a very amusing way of describing the events of your weekend. I always think that if you can take something simple (going on a guy's weekend to a football game) and make it a story worth reading, that you are a talented writer. I thought it was very funny. Great job!
I loved your story! I am a huge fan of travel writing, and you described your experiences in Africa really well. I found some sections to be humorous, and from the way you describe everything, I can tell you look back on your trip very fondly. I would love to read more!
I thought I would read one of yours in return. This was great! I feel like a sign of great writing is to take a very simple story, but make it interesting. I loved your descriptions both of the fireworks display, and the characterization of the family members. Loved it.
Great! Very interesting. I have been searching for examples of travel memoirs to read on this website, and this is exactly what I have been looking for. I, too, am interested in writing travel anecdotes. I spent some time in Southeast Asia (didn't make it Vietnam, though) and thought it was amazing. Keep up the good work!
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