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Rated: E | (5.0)
What a fantastic idea - I love the fact this activity is so community driven and offers "a prize every time" if you like! It's super generous of you and it encourages members to write something new, just like that, without having to create an item for it in their port. Now I have to come up with something cool!! *Bigsmile* *Heart*


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Review of Yan Can Cook?  
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Rated: 18+ | (1.0)
Hello willwilcox

I am reviewing this poem as part of "Queen of Comedy Challenge" 

I thought that this was a great nonsense - spam poem *Laugh*

At least - I HOPE it was written as a SPAM poem or I will feel really bad about the one star rating! *Shock* *Blush*

The way you have written it, I can actually imagine the character talking in the broken English/Chinese accent. Okay perhaps it IS a bit non PC but....it is still funny *Laugh*. I was a little thrown at the pussy part, but was pleased to find he had just found her cat *Smirk*.

The ending is really funny - mainly because it's nuts!

HA ha!

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Donkey Hoetay

I am reviewing this poem as part of "Queen of Comedy Challenge" 

I do like this poem - I think it is both funny and clever and it did make me laugh genuinely. *Laugh*

When I saw the title, I thought it was going to be a poem about some woman moaning about the misdemeanors of their husband (as this is what married women seem wont to do *Laugh* *Facepalm*) so I was quite surprised (pleasantly) to find that it wasn't!

The poem told by the view point of the letter Q is very clever - of course, U almost always comes after Q - whoever would have thought that Q wanted to go it alone! *Laugh* A letter should be a hard thing to personify but I think you have done so well here. Q sounds perfectly disgruntled with the whole situation.

My favourite verses are 3 and six - the bit about renaming the marina a quay is inspired. The ending is great with Q running off to Qatar. I like the fact that you have used the text speak of "U disgust me", "I am letting U know" etc - only, it isn't text speak in the context of the poem *Smirk*

The verse I am not as keen on is verse 4. Personally I think you could have left this out as I don't think it adds to the poem especially. I am not sure what is meant by the line "My Grammar offered to pay my sin tax," although this could just be me! *Confused*. I think where you say "intacts" maybe you mean "intact"? However, I didn't know what Quixotic meant and had to look it up which is good because it's always a good thing to learn new words *Bigsmile*.

This is probably my favourite of the comedy poems I have read whilst doing this challenge *Bigsmile*. I will never look at Q the same again......*Devilish*

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Review of Blood Money  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Lady Elf

I am reviewing this poem as part of "Invalid Item" .

I thought this was a very powerfully emotive poem which carries an important message. You have managed also to fit a lot of detail in to your poem about these "puppy farms" so the poem is also informative.

Personally I don't really agree with the breeding of "pedigree" cats and dogs which people pay hundreds or thousands of pounds for, when there are so many animals in shelters desperate for homes. And as for these kind of places, well, as you can imagine, they horrify me.

I think you have done a really good job with bringing awareness for this subject and your imagery, although not necessarily nice or pleasant is very effective in getting your meaning and opinion across.

In terms of the mechanics of the poem itself, the AABB rhyming scheme works well throughout For the most part it also flows well and easily as a poem although there are a few lines which seem to have too many syllables for the verse for example here:

"Imprisoned in boxes where loneliness controls."

or here

"Of poor unwanted puppies filling our streets."

I'm also not sure why the word "blood" is in red but am assuming it was a prompt line or something? I would take out the extra line break in between the verses.

This is a really well written poem with powerful imagery. Hopefully these places will eventually be shut down! *Worry*

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Review of As she waits  
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Hello kindredkitty

I am reviewing this poem as part of "Invalid Item" .

What I liked about this poem is how the ending was unexpected. As I was reading through it, I thought it was going to be a sentimental piece about man and dog being best friends with some sickly sweet ending so I was surprised this wasn't the case - even though the ending is sad, I think this gives it more depth.

The poem rhymes well although in places, I feel that the flow is a bit stilted due to some of the lines having too many syllables. The first verse and last verses work the best for me.

The second verse, although the imagery is effective, I do not really feel flows very easily so reads more like a piece of text rather than a poem (to me). Although I wouldn't want to tell you to change your text because that's what is important to you, if you changed the lines a little just so the syllable count was different, I think it would flow better.

For example:

"She is covered up by sadness
No one to feel her plight
Her master's been away too long
This just does not feel right"

Or words to that effect! *Smile*

Apart from that, I think you have some good imagery here and the poem deals with a topical subject in a way that I think would touch a readers heart at the end *Heart*

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Review of My African Gray  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Lisa Noe

I am reviewing this poem as part of "Invalid Item" 

I thought this was a cute poem about your pet parrot. You paint a heart warming picture of Katie in the poem and she comes across as a fun pet. I've never had a parrot, only seen them in zoos and so on but as I am a fan of all creatures I am sure I would like them *Bigsmile*.

I'm not sure that the poem is comical in particular (to me). More endearing or sweet I would say. I think the poem would appeal to children, as the language and imagery are quite simple and the tone has a childlike quality to it. Plus, kids like poem about pets *Smile*.

The rhyming scheme throughout the poem works well and I didn't find any glitches here. My favourite line is the bit about her drinking coffee from a spoon! Who would have thought parrots like coffee? *Laugh*

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Review of Mile High  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Ben Langhinrichs

I am reviewing this poem for "Queen of Comedy Challenge" 

The thing that strikes me most about this poem is the bizarre subject nature! *Laugh* I can't say I have ever read a poem about the "Mile High" club before! But as a frequent flyer and fan of aeroplanes this appealed to me and I thought it was very amusing as well as imaginative *Bigsmile*. I could not help wondering though - there are usually only 4 toilets on planes so I'm not quite sure where all these imaginary folk are doing the deed *Smirk*

This is my favourite verse because I like the imagery and the language used here:

"The Mile High Club is so often exclusive
Finding both chance and a partner elusive
But the stars on this flight are clearly aligned
No sense of confinement in those here confined."

The one line I don't think works so well is

"Couples who stroll back and couple so fleetly."

The line does not quite make sense to me and I don't think it flows as well.

Your AABB rhyming scheme is spot on *Bigsmile*

Next time I'm on a plane - I'll be watching out for this! *Laugh*

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Review of Humble Pi  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon

I am reviewing this poem as part of "Queen of Comedy Challenge" .

Well I have to say I have never read a poem about "PI" before - that is definitely a first. I also think it is very clever as I would have struggled immensely to come up with a poem about a mathematical term. For a start - I hate maths and have never had any affinity with the subject. It's like you have brought the two subjects together, maths and poetry *Smile*.

I like the way you have personified "PI" in the poem, which I think means the reader can connect to it more. I also think some of your rhymes here are very clever - such as ending/ascending or fraction/action.

I think the poem flows well apart from in the last verse, the second line seems to have a syllable too many.

I thought this was a well written poem - although perhaps more informative than humorous *Laugh*.

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Review of GAME TIME  
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Hello sindbad

I am reviewing this item as part of "Praise A Member of The Power Group" 

I chose this item as it didn't have any reviews already, and I was interested to know what the game was.

I think this is a fun concept for a game or an activity - kind of like a Madlib I suppose but where you have to work out the story relating to your own situation.

So mine would be "I killed Shahrukh Khan in a Swimming Pool"! - however I don't know who Shahrukh Khan is lol *Facepalm*.

I think this is a great idea but it feels as though it is only half finished with just the three words. If you wanted to expand on it, maybe you could add some more words, perhaps to do with the place someone lives, the letters in your name or something?

I like the concept though *Smile*

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Review of Travel Pictures  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Sum1

I am reviewing this item as part of "November Power Raid" 

I am also someone who loves to travel. Although, I have never been to America! One day, I would like to travel across the States and visit all my WDC friends along the way *Bigsmile*. That would be amazing, and everyone could show me their corner of the World.

I'm not a particularly good photographer either, and I tend to just use my phone camera, which is probably why! *Facepalm*. You have a fab collection of pictures here. The images are so clear and crisp, and such a variety of subjects.

My favourites:

The Jellyfish!!
The soldier placing flags
The Statue of Liberty
The bridge with the reflection
The trees on the pathway.

Have you been to the UK?

I have had a few trinkets from you too, so thank you for that *Bigsmile* *Heart*
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Rated: E | (2.5)
Hello Bluelightning

I am reviewing this item for "November Power Raid" 

I found this poll to be a little basic - the question is clear and you have given a few different options for the answers, but I feel that it could be added to a little bit more - for example, you could explain why you have created a poll about apples - are you creating a recipe or interested to know which kind of apples would be best for a recipe? Is it based on a discussion had with friends? Also, you could perhaps list different types of apple such as Granny Smith, Cox, Golden Delicious etc, rather than just mentioning the colour of the apple. To be honest - I'm not sure I have ever eaten a YELLOW apple! *Shock* *Laugh*.

These are just my personal thoughts, so please feel free to disregard them if you are happy with your poll as it is! *Smile*

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Maryann - House Martell

I am reviewing this item as part of "November Power Raid" 

This is a fantastic image! *Smile* I would love to be able to create digital art like this, I don't know how anybody does it and nobody seems to be able to show me! *Shock* *Laugh*.

I love the fantastical quality of the image, I love fairies and I am especially fond of the flashing sparkles which really make it come alive. The snow globe makes it seem like a magical moment caught in time *Fairy* Love it! *Heart*

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Review of Yellow  
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello dogpack:saving 4 premium: DWG

I am reviewing this poem for "November Power Raid" 

I think what is nice about this poem is the sentiment it expresses and the fact it highlights the community spirit of WDC and the importance of this community to the members - those who turn "yellow" will no doubt appreciate the importance of this on the site and probably were hoping to become yellow! So, it's nice to share this thought - and the YELLOW love! *Smile*

The poem does rhyme, although in terms of the language and imagery in the poem, it is quite simple, and could probably be expanded on. It seems to me like maybe it was written quite hurriedly, without a huge amount of thought about the content, so perhaps the idea could be crafted in to something a bit more detailed, but still using the idea of community spirit and congratulating new yellows *Smile*.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating

I am reviewing this item for "November Power Raid" 

I really liked the imagery in this poem. The use of colour really enhances the images as it allows the reader to see them in bright detail. Reading the poem, I can get a sense of the beauty described. I especially like the image of the azure waves washing on the shores - I am picturing a beautiful, sandy beach with palm trees and the ocean *Delight* *Beach* In my head, that looks just like paradise!

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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hello Weirdone-Back in the games

I am reviewing this item for"I Write in August-September-October" 

This is certainly a suitable story to be reading on Halloween night! I thought that it fit the prompt well and is suitably eerie with the appearance of the two characters in white, which of course we don't know whether are real or imaginary - and with a bit of gore thrown in as well. I did note that you have not added a word count to your story, so I don't know if you fulfilled that requirement, but it looks about 500 words. I think you packed quite a lot in to the story and it has a defined beginning, middle and end. I like how it ends with the main character telling (presumably) the police the story of what happened.

There are a few little errors and typos in the text, but I'm imagining that is probably because you wrote it quite quickly!

All in all I thought it was a good flash fiction horror contest entry. A shame there were not more entries for that round!

Congratulations on finishing the I WRITE this time around *Bigsmile*


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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Whiskerfacebythefireplace ! I just wanted to say that I love this poem - it really made me smile when I read it. I love the fact it's about me and is focused on my love of holidays and the ocean and the title reminds me of Finding Nemo, one of my fave movies *FishP* . I am just imagining drinking my cold drink on the beach then going off to play with dolphins *Laugh* *Delight*. L*Heart*ve t!! Thank you for writing this cute Jellyfish inspired poem for me *Smile*


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Fivesixer

I am reviewing this item as part of "Invalid Item" 

Now despite this being "WDC's longest running blogging competition", I, not being a prolific blogger, have only come across it recently when I took part in the Backpacking of Europe blogging challenge. As you know I really loved taking part in this challenge and as someone who doesn't "blog" normally, I though this was a great introduction. I was really made to feel a part of the group and I was very proud that I managed to write all 30 days! *Delight*

It was due to this contest that I tried something new and enjoyed it and, whilst I don't necessarily want to be blogging all the time, I would definitely be interested in taking part again if it was a theme which interested me.

I think this is a great idea and provides an alternative contest for people who perhaps are not so in to writing fiction and prefer to write about real life. I think your rules are clear, you offer good prizes and I also like the way that you list all the current participants on the main page. One of the main things that I liked about this contest is that, as part of the contest you are required to comment on other people's blogs. This gets people communicating and in our case, we all ended up being in each others stories which was fab! *Delight*

My only suggestion is, to have more "special" rounds like the Europe trip, which might encourage more people to enter if they are interested in that particular topic.

Great activity - and miss being in Europe with ya! *Bigsmile* *Heart*

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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hello ♥Hooves♥

I am reviewing this item as part of "Invalid Item" 

Now I will tell you....I know this song inside out. It's my karaoke signature tune and I have sung it dozens of times, in bars all over Europe *Bigsmile* - this of course is why it caught my eye. *Laugh*

I have to say your parody had me laughing. Whilst I do love the original I thought YOURS was very original too, and I love the way you have fitted it to your signature cow theme*Cow*.

Though not all of the lines have the right amount of syllables to fit with the tune perfectly (yep, I sang it through! *Laugh*) I did like the way you have linked your version with some of the original lyrics - for example the "Pretty, pretty bulls" and "Relax said the Milkman"!

My favourite line however has to be:

"Saw ducks in the meadow, thought I heard them quack" - ha ha, love that!

I also liked:

"Blue lights in the rafters, cool water in the pail, she mooed,
"You’re a bull I could go for, I could make you wail!"" *Laugh*

This is a really imaginative and funny parody - - - just hope NEXT time I'm singing it....I don't start singing about cows! *Laugh* *Facepalm*

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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hello Weirdone-Back in the games

I am reviewing this item as part of "The Challenge"  - Day 27 - Review someone who recently reviewed you.

I picked this item because I like poetry and I also like the Halloween theme! *Bigsmile*

I actually really liked this poem. I thought it flowed very well and it has a balance between eerie but amusing - more of a children's poem I guess than something genuinely scary. As I was reading it I felt like reading it in the voice from "Thriller" or something like that!

In terms of the form, it did seem a bit odd but I'm not familiar with much form poetry being a free-form kind of girl *Smirk* - I googled "Villanelle" and see what you have done here. I think it's clever you have managed to write an appealing poem whilst keeping to a strict form as well!

The only line I don't think works as well as the others is:

"Ghost, witch, pirate, or fairy queen," - it seems to have too many syllables in it.

My favourite line is probably:

"Hungry he is foul and mean.
But give him candy and he´s sweet."

I would do away with the breaks between the lines, but that's just aesthetics *Smile*

A fun poem, liked it *Smile*

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello ZombeeLuv

I am reviewing your item as part of "I Write in August-September-October" 

I thought this was a good opening to your book as it introduces the reader to the story, the theme and your main character although it seems a little short for a first page.

Straight away we can tell this is a fantasy novel featuring werewolves and witches, the main character Soshana apparently being a "good" werewolf.

Your writing style is engaging and puts the reader in the story and your description is vivd, although it gave me the impression of being quite similar to many other books written on this theme and I'm not sure I would be compelled to read the rest of the book based on the first page. Still, I'm not a huge reader of werewolf/zombie fiction and having read the first page I think it would appeal to those who are.

One thing that confused me was use of the word "smug" - is this the correct word? I have not heard it used in this context.

Good luck in "Hook to Book" *Smile*


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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating

I am reviewing this poem as part of "Invalid Item" .

I thought this was an interesting take on the prompt where the poem really tells a story of where you live and where you used to live as a child, through the medium of weather conditions!

I am familiar with neither Las Vegas nor Oklahoma and both sound very different to England, for although we get a lot of "moisture" here (in the form of rain), we rarely get the heat to go with it *Rolleyes*.

I like the way your poem really does depict both the "joy" and "pain" of summer in the sense that the heat is uncomfortable but the joy is in the City living.

As a poem however, I don't feel as though it flows very "poetically" for me, I can imagine it being written as an opening paragraph to an article or a story, only here it has been organized in to verses which do seem a bit forced.

Suggestions:

"bring back memories of Oklahoma," - I think this should read "BRINGS" not "bring"

"It's the middle of July
soon monsoonal moisture" - I think there should be a full stop or a colon or something after "July" (If you are going with using punctuation in the poem!)

Best Bit:

"Triple digit temperatures and
monsoonal moisture:
instead a frying eggs on the sidewalk
we can poach them."

*Laugh* I love that image of you poaching the eggs in the monsoonal moisture!

I also like the way the writer fondly remembers the Oklahoma rains.....but conveniently forgets the tornadoes *Facepalm*!

These are of course my personal opinions so feel free to take and discard what you like!

Good luck in the competition *Smile* *Sun*

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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hello Gaby ~ Keeper Of The Realm !

I came across your item on the "read and review" link - and I thought, oh look, it's Gaby and a giant M&M! *Laugh*.

It was interesting reading your bio even though some of this stuff, I already knew about you. I can see you have kept updating it since 2006 which is good! I like the way you have made it lighthearted and humorous in places which makes it fun to read - for example the crossing out and re-writing of your age and the fact you didn't dare to change your eye colour! *Laugh*

I can't believe you don't like vegetables, ha ha, half my diet is vegetables - especially the green variety. Doesn't everyone like vegetables??

I found it interesting that you don't like libraries because you don't like taking the books back. I tend to buy books, but for a different reason, because I like to support the authors. I think a book is a good thing to spend money on. I don't keep them however, I read them and pass them on to someone - although if I had a big house of my own, I would probably keep them and have my own library like you.

I really like your layout here and the colours and font you have used too.

One suggestion: you say the "faeries" will take you to the islands. Do you mean ferries? I would love for a faerie to take me to an island however *Bigsmile* *FairyR*

Also - I'm being pedantic here, but you say you don't hate anything, but have a header of "Sports I hate" - *Smirk* *Laugh* - sorry, it just jumped out at me!

Hope you are surviving GOT!

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Review of Awaiting Sleep  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hello Schnujo is Late to Lannister

I found this item on the "read and review" link *Smile*

I liked this short and sweet poem as I can relate to the subject and the theme, of lying awake in bed, knowing that you need (and want!) to go to sleep, but your mind just won't cooperate.

I think you have captured this period of time well with your imagery - my favourite part is how you have described the mind as a "wasteland of thoughts", I really like this metaphor.

My only suggestion would be to explain why you have bolded certain words, assuming this is for a contest.

Thanks for letting me read and review!

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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello Imran Butt

I am reviewing this item as you have sent me a review request.

I have to admit that I am a little bit lost when it comes to the meaning of your article and what you are getting at. I feel as though you have put ideas randomly together as you thought of them rather than putting together a concise article to be read by a wider audience.

You obviously have many philosophical ideas on life and I can see how your ideas would be suitable topics for creating a longer and more succinct article *Smile*.

Your use of vocabulary is generally good here and I can see how you would be able to create something more solid and more accessible to your audience.

You might want to double check for typos and small grammatical errors as there are a few here eg:

neither thought off - "neither thought of"

our destiny will provide us way - "our destiny will provide us a way"

better than a live time - "better than a lifetime"

You do have some interesting ideas but personally, I think your article needs to be a bit more focused and possibly a little longer, expanding on your theories so they make more sense to the reader.

These are of course just my personal opinions so please feel free to take or leave them as you wish! *Smile*

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Jess

I liked looking at your PICS of Toronto! I went to Toronto in the summer of 2014 so I recognized some bits - well, mainly the tower. I like the pictures of the views, I never actually went up the tower as the day we went there was a massive queue and I didn't really want to waste so much time queuing!

I also love your JELLYFISH pictures and the others from the Aquarium. That place looks cool - are they real Jellyfish? They look like they could be pictures. I love the seahorse too and the crab painted around the grid! *Laugh*.

The only suggestion that I have for your album is that a few of the pics are sideways and I can't see a way of rotating them. I don't know if it is possible to upload them after rotating them? It makes some of them a bit hard to see.

Glad you enjoyed your time there - I really liked Toronto, I liked it more than Ottawa as a City and the day I went it was lovely and sunny too. We went on a little train, to a beer brewery and I had a veggie hot dog from a van I was really impressed with!! Oh and we had a delicious cocktail somewhere. The only thing I didn't like was not being able to order at the bar and having to wait ages!

I am curious to know what the Moe story is now?!
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