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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Jeannie🐴

Review of "Plants for Beauty and Soul

*Home* General Comments and Emotional Impact

A beautiful poem about spring flowers and fresh vegetables from the garden. There is something special about the newness and hope that spring season brings and it is a special sight to see the first signs of spring in the blooming forest or garden as you have said here. The fresh vegetables that come out of the hard work of your own hands are also a unique treat to celebrate and feel nourished that way is a blessing indeed.

*DocumentBL* Form and Rhyme Scheme

The poem is of form Shadorma and has followed the set rules of syllabic count and line count perfectly.

*Ornament1Y* Title and description

The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

*Cut* Suggestions and mistakes

No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.*Smile*

*BoxCheck* My Favourite Lines

"Awaken to the sunlight
A most awesome sight"


A vivid visual feast!

*NoteW* Overall

A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!

~ Princess Zelda




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Review of Fade  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Zelda

Review of "Fade

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A poem about the changing of seasons and how beauty does fade. The writing speaks in comparison of beauty in nature to that in humans. Thought provoking that things are fleeting and may be value should be not be given to external things that are fleeting.

*NoteW* Overall

A very good poem so I am giving it 4.5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!

~ Princess Zelda




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Review of Our Baby's Secret  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Sew-no-more 🤗

Review of "Our Baby's Secret

*Home* General Comments and Emotional Impact

A beautiful poem about your first born child who is now in heaven. It is written in the perspective of the child comforting the mother. I can’t imagine the sorrow of such a loss but really love the positivity you have portrayed in these words.

*NoteW* Overall

A poem that brings peace and comfort for those who went though such a loss, so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!

~ Princess Zelda




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Review of Confidence  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello ErinLynn

Review of "Confidence

*Home* General Comments and Emotional Impact

A poem about the confidence in who we are and who God created us to be. I like all the specific examples you have used to compare the unique creation we are.

*DocumentBL* Form and Rhyme Scheme

There is no rhyming pattern.

*Ornament1Y* Title and description

The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

*Cut* Suggestions and mistakes

No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found. *Smile*

*BoxCheck* My Favourite Lines

"meticulously handcrafted enchantment of God"

We are unique creations of God, indeed!

*NoteW* Overall

A very good poem so I am giving it 4.5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!

~ Princess Zelda




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Review of Winter's Touch  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hello Nikola has a Soul

Review of "Winter's Touch

*Home* General Comments and Emotional Impact

A short poem about snowflakes and the magic they bring. Your poem talks about the warm feelings that snow brings into our lives.

*DocumentBL* Form and Rhyme Scheme

There no is rhyming pattern in the poem, but love the alliterations used here, they work really well with the flow.

*Ornament1Y* Title and description

The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

*Cut* Suggestions and mistakes

No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found. *Smile*

*BoxCheck* My Favourite Lines

"Lasting memories
fill my lonely
soul with
sweet solace."


The experience of snow does leave a lasting mark in our memories.

*NoteW* Overall

A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!

~ Princess Zelda




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Review of The darkness!!!  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Nine

A poem about the darkness within each of our souls, it is so true we all have our dark side and need strength and courage to come out of it into the light and peace. Your poem express the turmoil undergone while someone struggles to get some balance and overcome the negative thoughts and feelings within themselves.

Well written and thanks for sharing your work.

~Princess Zelda


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Review of I'll Never Forget  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Choconut

Review of "I'll Never Forget

*Home* General Comments and Emotional Impact

A beautiful poem about a mother remembering all the little and big things throughout her child’s life. So much love and affection is seen clearly in the words described here. From the time in the womb to becoming an independent toddler and then an adult there are so many memories that are cherished here.

*DocumentBL* Form and Rhyme Scheme

There is no rhyming pattern as the poem follows a free from style.

*Ornament1Y* Title and description

The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting which is what drew me in to read and review it.

*Cut* Suggestions and mistakes

No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found. *Smile*

*BoxCheck* My Favourite Lines

“Are memories so precious
Which no-one can take
Oh no, I’ll never forget."


I honestly love the whole poem but if I had to chose, the never forget part reiterates and confirms the importance and value of mother’s love and how no matter what she will never ever forget any of it. Also the first paragraph where gives a perspective from the baby’s POV is so cute.

*NoteW* Overall

A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!

~ Princess Zelda




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Review of Searching  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello drifter

Review of "Searching

*Home* General Comments and Emotional Impact

A poem about the search for a home, for belonging and fellowship. The search is for meaning, something new and relevant that has a higher purpose and calling. This poem is timely for the weird world situation we currently live in, now more than ever people are searching for a solid ground.

*DocumentBL* Form and Rhyme Scheme

There is rhyming pattern of the form a,a,b,b and this works well with flow and content of the poem.

*Ornament1Y* Title and description

The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting, which is why I was intrigued to read and review it.

*Cut* Suggestions and mistakes

No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found. *Smile*

*BoxCheck* My Favourite Lines

“In the blues hope for new direction
God can raise one up to newness of life,"


It’s hard to hope for a new direction when things are blue but God is in control and will transform us into something new even though the situation and circumstances may still be gloomy and difficult.

*NoteW* Overall

A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!

~ Princess Zelda




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Review of She Smiles at Me  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hello Joleigh Aubaugh

Review of "She Smiles at Me

*Home* General Comments and Emotional Impact

A dark and scary poem about the face in the mirror. To me, in my interpretation, I saw it as self reflection and how sometimes there is a misalignment between the face on the outside and how we really feel on the inside. But these are just my thoughts when reading it. Eyes are stark and powerful entities that can “see” beneath the surface and it works well to use in horror/dark genres as you have here.

*DocumentBL* Form and Rhyme Scheme

There is no rhyming pattern as the poem is free verse.

*Ornament1Y* Title and description

The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting which obviously caught my eye and hence I’m here reviewing it.

*Cut* Suggestions and mistakes

No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found. *Smile*

*BoxCheck* My Favourite Lines

"Though she smiles at me,
I am not smiling back."


Good plot twist and cliff hanger here.

*NoteW* Overall

A very good poem so I am giving it 4.5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!

~ Princess Zelda




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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello QueenOwl ~ A New Day Dawns

Review of "Love Story Ten Thousand Miles Away

*Home* General Comments and Emotional Impact

This poem is about long distance love and the hopes that one day the distance will reduce to nothing so they can be together. I like the whole princess waiting for her Prince type romance here and the longing of the princess is shown clearly in the last line.

*DocumentBL* Form and Rhyme Scheme

There is rhyming pattern in some lines while the other lines do not rhyme.

*Ornament1Y* Title and description

The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

*NoteW* Overall

A good poem so I am giving it 4 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!

~ Princess Zelda



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Review of Lost and Found  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Starlake

Review of "Lost and Found

*Home* General Comments and Emotional Impact

A sad but beautiful poem about the loss of a loved one. The poem is full of fond memories and thoughts towards the person who was lost.

*DocumentBL* Form and Rhyme Scheme

There is rhyming pattern of the form a,b,a,b. This works well with the flow and content of the poem.

*Ornament1Y* Title and description

The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

*Cut* Suggestions and mistakes

No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found. *Smile*

*BoxCheck* My Favourite Lines

"If you paint the sky with your heart, my love,
I would feel it as ecstasy pure."


Surely this kind of love is pure and rare and as such must be treasured as you have here.

*NoteW* Overall

A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!

~ Princess Zelda




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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello BEAR

Review of " " The Moon in Love "

*Home* General Comments and Emotional Impact

A beautiful emotional poem about heartbreak. Personally, I’ve spoken to the moon a lot about these things and so I appreciate the significance of its use here.

*DocumentBL* Form and Rhyme Scheme
The poem is a free form one and works well with the flow of the content. The lines do not rhyme.

*Ornament1Y* Title and description

The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

*Cut* Suggestions and mistakes

No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found. *Smile*

*BoxCheck* My Favourite Lines

"It's glow shines down,
as I smile while tears form.”


Vivid picture of the beauty and pain of love.

*NoteW* Overall

A very good poem so I am giving it 4.5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!

~ Princess Zelda



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Review of WINTER REST  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi dog pack:saving4 premium renew

I’m reviewing your work today as part of the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group raid!

A cozy little poem about enjoying warmth and comfort during the harsh winter. This was written as part of a contest with the prompt words as given and I think I’d not even know that’s why the words were chosen, as the flow and story the words tell seems to work so well. And there is a rhyming scheme on top of that as well. A short poem with well placed words that brings to life the imagery described.

Well written and thanks for sharing your work.

~Princess Zelda


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Review of A Winters Eve  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Lovina 🐕‍🦺

I’m reviewing your work today as part of the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group raid!

You poem is about the winter snow and the scenes it sets. Your words do bring to life the imagery you describe here to the reader. My favourite paragraph is the last one where the moon light shines on the settled snow causing unique beauty which must be admired as you say. Some of your lines rhyme and other don’t, and the poem doesn’t seem to be following any particular form so this works well with the overall flow.

Well written and thanks for sharing your work.

~Princess Zelda


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Review of Crystalline  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Seven Ink

I’m reviewing your work today as part of the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group raid!

A winter poem about the beautiful wonder that is snowflakes. The poem is a free form one and some lines have rhyming words but others don’t but this not impact the flow of the poem. The words used bring the vivid imagery and also the feeling of frost and cold winter days. Even with the cold and freezing weather the beauty and experience is something to treasure and enjoy.

Well written and thanks for sharing your work.

~Princess Zelda


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Review of The Missing Years  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Prosperous Snow writing poetry

I’m reviewing your poem today as part of the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group raid!

An interesting and thought provoking poem about missing 13 years of your life where in good go to sleep as a single woman seemingly enjoying that life and wake in the nee year as a married woman and a mother. Some of the lines in the poem rhyme and some don’t but this doesn’t interrupt the flow of the story within it. There is the obvious confusion as to why and how this might happened and the poem ends with a resolution to get to the bottom of it and fix it.

Well written and thanks for sharing your work.

~Princess Zelda


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Review of "GONE"  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi S A Gibbins

A thought provoking poem about using one’s day wisely and prioritising all the important things in life. In reality though as you say it’s not that easy or simple to live it out that way. The poem has some rhyming lines and some non-rhyming lines but there is no interruption to the flow of the words or the lines because of this.

Well written and thank you for sharing your work.


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Review of Husband  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Lisa

A beautiful love poem about your husband. Lots of positive qualities and emotions are being brought to light here and the words to bring pictures to the mind of the reader of what the start of a new love or meeting your soulmate for the first few times would be like.

Well written and thanks for sharing your work.


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Review of Removed  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Strange Brain

This poem is a short and interesting one, very creative use of the word assigned to use into a vivid short story in poem form. Short poems are hard to write as each word must earn its place and it seems like a job well done has been accomplished here.

Thank you for sharing your work.


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Review of What is a Woman?  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Redtowrite,

This poem on breast cancer awareness talks about the struggles and implications of having cancer reduction surgery. I like how you have compared/thought through whether that defines a woman or there is more to her than just that. And I’m glad you have concluded that even though it won’t be the same, the courage to go through with it and win is also what defines a woman!

Well written and thank you for sharing your work.


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Review of Family Tree  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Jade Amber Jewel,

I came across your poem and thought I’d give it a review. A interesting poem about family and it’s structure. The poem starts off with the most important aspect of a family, it’s foundation of love. Some of the lines have rhyming words but some don’t, this seems to be a free verse poem so shouldn’t be any form to it.

Well written, thanks for sharing your work.


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Review of For My Valentine  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jim

Hope you are well. I just came across this beautiful poem of yours. A lovely emotional and uplifting love story is being shared here and I like that it covers the ups and downs of life and how that affects relationships. The rhyme scheme a,a,b,b works well with the form and flow of the poem.

My favourite line is - Our love has won; we’ve conquered time and miles.

Well written so I give you five stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.


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Review of Overcoming Fear  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Megan

A senryu poem written about Trusting in God. Though the pome is short, it is to the point. The form of the poem is followed well and the works with the flow, content and story it’s telling. It’s true that testing works the faith in us and the more we start to let go the more freer we become and hence we can lose our burdens and fly as you say.

Well written,

Jilu


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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Dr M C Gupta

Review of " DO NOT TAKE AWAY MY SONG

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A emotional poem about wanting to protect the one thing that matters most to the author, his song. I interpret this as the voice, the freedom to express and be oneself. One voice is one's own and cannot as you say enrich anyone else, but it is sadness and pain if and when one loses one's voice. This poem personally resonates with me and my desire to express and write and being able to do that freely here in WDC is an amazing privilege!

*DocumentBL* Form and Rhyme Scheme

There is rhyming pattern in some lines while the other lines do not rhyme. The poem follows the abcb pattern and this works well with the flow.

*Ornament1Y* Title and description

The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

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*BoxCheck* My Favourite Lines

"Besides this all that I have
With me is the Lord’s word."


No greater possession can be than of the Lord's word!

*NoteW* Overall

A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!






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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv

Review of "He Walks With Me, quill nominated 2020

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A beautiful poem written about walking with the Lord. He is a ever present friend and companion of comfort and support. You written a good summary of Jesus' life, death and resurrection and the reason for His arrival on earth.

Congrats on getting the second place for this poem, well deserved!

*DocumentBL* Form and Rhyme Scheme

There is rhyming pattern in some lines while the other lines do not rhyme. You have followed the rhyming pattern as per the prompt with the specific pattern and I don't see any mistakes in that.

*Ornament1Y* Title and description

The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

*Cut* Suggestions and mistakes

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*BoxCheck* My Favourite Lines

"Now in my heart, He lives
And I feel full of love
I want to give freely"


Truly, having Jesus in our hearts gives us so much peace and love that it just radiates joy.

*NoteW* Overall

A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!






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