Review of "Searching"
General Comments and Emotional Impact
A poem about the search for a home, for belonging and fellowship. The search is for meaning, something new and relevant that has a higher purpose and calling. This poem is timely for the weird world situation we currently live in, now more than ever people are searching for a solid ground.
Form and Rhyme Scheme
There is rhyming pattern of the form a,a,b,b and this works well with flow and content of the poem.
Title and description
The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting, which is why I was intrigued to read and review it.
Suggestions and mistakes
No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.
My Favourite Lines
“In the blues hope for new direction
God can raise one up to newness of life,"
It’s hard to hope for a new direction when things are blue but God is in control and will transform us into something new even though the situation and circumstances may still be gloomy and difficult.
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.
Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!
~ Princess Zelda