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Review of Moon Over Water  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Amay ,

Review of Poem: "Moon Over Water" 

General Comments:
Beautiful poem, very romantic and the form of the poem itself is like the moon's shimmering reflection on the water, just like the picture. Very good word choice that lead to the creation of a piece that bringing to life those words that combine to produce this wonderful poem. Well written.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of The King Crow  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Dorian Herestor ,

Review of "The King Crow" 

General Comments:
An interesting story about the ravens. The different uses of a raven are very well explained in the story. The raven is a message of death and yes a vital part of the world. The liked the ending, a bit funny though, The narration was excellent, you've got good skills. Well written.

Overall:
A very good read so I am giving it 5 stars.

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello bordoichila ,

Review of "Happy to be crying" 

General Comments:
A poem about how when life is full of misery we tend to ask God questions and also we become depressed and sad. I have asked these same questions to God as well, I guess everybody goes through these times in life but it is up to us to stand up and keep pushing forward. Thank you for the nice read. Well written.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of Lost and forsaken  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello deepika rebecca ,

Review of "Lost and forsaken" 

General Comments:
The poem is about a person who is forsaken and who is left alone now. The emotions are well expressed here. The fears and doubts that come due to the loneliness is also very written here. What I liked the most about this poem is the ending, though you are all alone now, you keep pushing forward and moving along, that is what is needed. Good inspiration, well written.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 4.5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Viksta* - the undertow ,

Review of "Pure white, or Black Lace" 

General Comments:
The poem is about the confusions a girl has about marriage. She is not sure what would happen to her if she steps into that place. The emotions are very well explained and the entire format of the poem is very good. The word choice is good as well. The rhyming pattern followed is very good which aides to the flawless flow of the poem. Beautifully written poetry. Well written.

Overall:
An excellent poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

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Review of Scream  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello LoveIsImmortalityAlways ,

Review of "Scream" 

General Comments:
Writing a 55 word story is a great challenge indeed and you have pulled if very well. The word choice and imagery are very good. A horror and scary feeling is brought to the reader with just these few lines. Well written.

Overall:
A good read so I am giving it 5 stars.

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Review of I am from  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Megan ,

Review of Poem: "I am from" 

General Comments:
A poem written on the perspective of different people. It is like comparing yourself to the people in the world and considering how it would be if you were them. A good poem, thought provoking as it does make me think how life would have been if I was someone else. Well written.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 4.5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Lana ,

Review of Poem: "Footprints of the Heart" 

General Comments:
A cinquain is a difficult form of poetry, because it requires the set of rules as you have given. I say its difficult because,it may be easy to follow the rules and write it,but it should sound poetic and not like a set of words written as per the rules. Here, you have done a wonderful job by creating a lovely poem about footprints. Word choice and flow is good. Just a suggestion, the formatting of the poem is a bit out of alignment, so you should correct that for a better visual appeal to the reader.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of Ode to Coffee  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello dblameck (David) ,

Review of Poem: "Ode to Coffee" 

General Comments:

Nicely written poem about coffee. You have written it very well without even mentioning , even once the word "coffee" in your poem. I love coffee too. It's quiet addicting because of the flavor and the aroma it has, almost like a magical potion of some kind. The word choice used here is good, there is good flow as well. Well written.

Overall:
A nice poem so I am giving it 4 stars.

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Review of Her Hair  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Lenong ,

Review of Poem: "Her Hair" 

General Comments:
A simple and sweet, yet romantic poem expressing the admiration of a loved one's hair. Good word choice and flow, very good imagery and comparison to her hair. Surely beauty lies in the eye of the beholder and you have done a great job in expressing that beauty you have experienced. Well written.

My Favourite Lines:
Poetic, romantic lines...
Like a man under a spell
Of a beauty too vast to compare
To the crudeness of the world.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 4.5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama-House Targaryen

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello brom21 ,

Review of Poem: "Terror in deep places" 

General Comments:
I'm reviewing your entry in consideration that it was submitted For the prompt/ emotion "Fear".
A deep emotional poem expressing fear. The word choice is very good,the flow is also very good. Fear is a universal feeling and your fear is that of the illness that you have. Each line expresses the fear in different ways and shows how much fear can affect a person. The fear traps us and leave us without any peace or sleep. It cannot be escaped or hidden from. I like the way you ended the poem, a positive way to solve the problems caused by fear.

Thank you for your participation. All the best.

Any Mistakes:
Just a small typo I noticed, "Binging" in the line " Binging dread any place that I flee" shoulb be "Bringing dread to any place that I flee"

My Favourite Lines:
Though fear can pull us down, love can heal all.
"Let love cast out fear and in comfort will I stand"

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of Fear.  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Destiny ,

Review of Poem: "Fear." 

General Comments:
I'm reviewing your entry in consideration that it was submitted For the prompt/ emotion "Fear".
The first stanza is a very good expression of the emotion "fear", though fear happens to be a small thing it grows into a mighty sensation that almost does no let us do anything. This fear has not let you sleep and it keeps you awake till the day light. Though fear does not lets us sleep we grow heavy with sleep and finally at the end we sleep.

Thank you for your participation and all the best.

Any Mistakes:
No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.

Overall:
A good poem so I am giving it 4 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of Wisdom  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hello Itchy Water,

Review of Poem: Wisdom

General Comments:
This a true and insightful poem about how knowing too much puts us into trouble or rather leaves us thinking, rather then doing. I guess life was easy when the only things we knew were meddle with everything, curious and no worries or calculations or predictions about the results and consequences of such actions. As a child, I always thought that after knowing so much I'll do this and that, but knowing so much only made me fear the results or what happens if a disaster strikes. Very thought provoking poem. The form is free verse I guess and no punctuations but flow very well, wanting the reader to stop and think and re-read the lines to make them more effective.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of RAIN  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Itchy Water,

Review of Poem: RAIN

General Comments:
This particular poem fits the current season very well. I ask daily today the sun is out but later today it may rain as though it had been a storm for a week. It is quite hard to write any poem into a form, but to write a poem in a form and also follow the rules such as statement, question and meaning in each line is more difficult but you have done it again.

Title:
The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting. The title for this piece is like the summary or rather the entire poem's question is answered in the title.

Any Mistakes:
No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of KITTENS  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Itchy Water,

Review of Poem: KITTENS

General Comments:
I love kittens and a lovely poem about them is a nice read. You have written how a mother cat gives birth to three little kittens but only two survive, that is always the case I guess. You have very well followed the form of the Janaku poem and also written a flawless flowing poem on one topic.


Any Mistakes:
No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.

My Favourite Lines:
These lines were a visually pitiful yet cute scene to me, as three little eyes were peeking through the litter.
"Three
Small kittens
From the litter"

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of The Puppeteer  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)

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Hello Molly Rasche,

Review of Poem:The Puppeteer

General Comments:
A true poem written about an abusive relationship. Personally I know how hard it is to even let go or end such a relationship because as you have described here all our control is in the hands of the puppeteer, we have no control as a puppet a mere toy in their hands, but surely it takes great strength and courage to come out of such a relationship. You poem expresses anger and the pain experienced in the relationship. It surely does feel that ending our life only would stop the problem and we almost want the person only to do this too,I'm able to relate to this and I'm glad that both you and me have overcome such a situation in life. Good word and flow, you have managed very well to write few lines that leave the reader with great impact. Well written.

Title:
The title fits the content very well and apt for the message in the poem and the description below is interesting.

My Favourite Lines:
True, deep and painful lines
"I’m the puppet and you the puppeteer
My emotions my actions you have all the strings"

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of true friend  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)

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Hello human,

Review of Poem: true friend

General Comments:
A lovely and thoughtful poem about how hard it is to find a true friend in this world which is fully filled with false and fake relationship that want some gain alone. I guess a search for a true friend is surely a search for diamond in the depths of the sea, which is quiet impossible, and even if we find such a true friend we should be responsible to treat and value them like a rare diamond.

Form:
There is rhyming pattern in the poem of the form, a-a-a, b-b-b,... The good flowing poem with the rhyming pattern, suits well with the message of the poem.

Title:
The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting, the true friend in capital letters tell how the entire poem stresses on that search of yours.

Any Mistakes:
No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.

My Favourite Lines:
A search for the true and rare friend
"Someone, who joins me in every fun, mischief & madness,
Who walks with me not only in happiness but also in sadness,
Good enough, my destiny,to have such a person of greatness?"

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of Why?  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Euterpe ,

Review of Poem: "Why?" 

General Comments:
A poem on the question that most of us ask to ourselves or other very often, "Why?". I have asked this same why many times for all things that happen to me, but then I realised we only ask why and feel sad when we are in a bad situation but when are very happy we never ask why. I guess life should be a mix of ups and downs without which there is no adventure in this life. The first stanza and last stanza are repetitive but the last alone is changed which I like a lot. " When we can be ourselves?". Well written.

Title:
The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

Any Mistakes:
No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.

My Favourite Lines:
Thought provoking ending, marvellous.
"Why should we pour tears of despair,
when we can be just ourselves?"

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of Inspiration  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)

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Hello Kimberly Danielle,

Review of Poem: Inspiration

General Comments:
Beautiful and really inspiring poem. It is true that no one can live and survive through each day without inspiration in some form and without hope. I like how you have included the sky to the inspiration and to reach it being our goal or desire, it is a challenging mystery. surely sky does bring us the will to try and reach for things that are higher than us. Well written.

Title:
The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting and a thought provoking question.

Any Mistakes:
No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.

My Favourite Lines:
"Just as the dreamer reaches for the sky
you too can reach for anything
So be inspired to live your life the way you always dreamed you would"

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of Once Was An Angel  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Lady Gypsy,

Review of Poem: Once Was An Angel

General Comments:
Beautiful poem and dedication to your grandmother. Everybody wants their angel to be with them forever and never leave them but life happens and they are taken away from us. Thought they are taken away from us, they remain forever in your hearts and in our memories. Lovely poem written.

Form:
There is no rhyming pattern in this poem, this is a free verse poem.

Title:
The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

Any Mistakes:
No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.

My Favourite Lines:
Once an Angel, will always be an angel
"With her loving memory, will always live on"

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of Smores  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello shelby- daughter of Lady Gypsy ,

Review of Poem: "Smores " 

General Comments:
Yummy poem. Smores, a lot of memories and good time spent comes to our mind. It is a tradition, a family get-together and a sweet snack. A well written poem. You could have included some nice memories too. This is just my suggestion.


Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 4.5 stars.


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Review of Stuck  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)

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Hello shelby- daughter of Lady Gypsy ,

Review of Poem: "Stuck" 

General Comments:
Emotional and very different way of expressing pain in love. It is true how we seem stuck to crying and pain once we are hurt by someone we love. You have stressed on that fact that, due tote pain, you are staying stuck to the place without moving or changing because of the loved one.

My Favourite Lines:
A statue is immovable and it being lost in the abyss is a great expression of the qualities written in this poem, stuck yet unmoving, Nice!
"A statue in the abyss of hate love"

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.


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Review of Whispers  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)

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Hello shelby- daughter of Lady Gypsy ,

Review of Poem: "Whispers " 

General Comments:
Romantic poem. You surely have a way with words and can bring feelings to life very easily. As this poem expresses, words and talking don't mean anything when compared to those sweet nothings whispered and feelings brought to life with just one kiss.
To be loved this way in a true relationship would be an epic tale which should be treasured with all your heart forever. I should tell you, I'm becoming a fan of your writings, hope you don't disappoint me *Wink*, don't worry we're here to help.

Form:
The poem has free verse form and it flows well.

Title:
The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

Any Mistakes:
No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.

My Favourite Lines:
Romantic and beautiful lines
"As he whispers sweet nothings in my ear
Love, the untold promise in whispers"
Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of summer breeze  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)

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Hello shelby- daughter of Lady Gypsy ,

Review of Poem: "summer breeze" 

General Comments:
Beautiful and relax poem about sun's effect on us. Summer is almost here, after long awaited cold winters it comes to give us the energy and brightness of a new beginning. In the first stanza, I like the line "You walk through the fresh morning dew soaked grass;", this I did just yesterday morning, and I love the feelings an early morning walk in the just rising sun can bring.
The second stanza explains the peace and good feelings brought by the summer breeze. You have a good word play here and can bring readers to feel what you are explaining, they can feel it and can see it, rather than just read it. That's a great poet in working I see. Well written.

Form:
There is no rhyming pattern as this is a free verse poem.

Title:
The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

My Favourite Lines:
Most picturesque lines
"You walk through the fresh morning dew soaked grass;
The smell of roses lay in the air "

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of Goodbye  
Review by Princess Zelda
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)

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Hello shelby- daughter of Lady Gypsy ,

Review of Poem: "Goodbye" 

General Comments:
This is a poem about saying goodbye to our friends and loved ones. Everybody faces this situation in life, I have too, it is almost impossible for me to say good bye and leave. I would say goodbye and stand there as though waiting for fate to change or time to turn back so I could spend more time but nothing like that happens. I can say, I have felt all these feelings expressed here in your poem and I can say I have always felt scared to meet someone special because what if I'll have to go through saying goodbye forever. You brought a lot of memories to me. Well written and emotional poem.

Form:
There is no rhyming pattern in the poem,this is a free verse poem.

Title:
The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

My Favourite Lines:
Most experienced emotional lines
"You hug each other
Never wanting to let go"

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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