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Review of Write  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello dove.soars ,

Review of "Write" 

General Comments:
A poem about writing, and what to write. I like how you have given thought into the facts involved when we write something. To each of us writing is due to various reasons but we all write a piece of us in different ways, in each poem or story we put a piece of ourselves into it. And yes, no matter what the world may think about our writing ,it surely liberates us and sets our souls free. Writing to me is a way of escape, a hiding place from reality and today I love doing it because it has become the best part of me.Well written.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of Forest Path  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello dizzydaizy ,

Review of "Forest Path" 

General Comments:
I like your poem a lot, it took to me the journey through the forest path as well. I feel alive and at peace whenever I take some time to connect with the nature around me. I love walking in the park, or standing by my porch and just feeling the breeze on my face. Your word choice and flow is excellent. This free verse poem is very good. Keep writing. I love the last stanza a perfect and peaceful ending indeed.


Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of SHY, am I?  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Maria Mize ,

Review of Poem: "SHY, am I?" 

General Comments:
Thank you for your entry to the "Expressions of Emotions Poetry Contest". I can see you have expressed the emotion "shy" very well within a small poem. Every line expresses the emotion very well. You have reviled the man behind the mask by saying how a shy person feels on the inside, insecure, lonely and mournful.


Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Panda Reverb ,

Review of Poem: "Looking Up With Man" 

General Comments:
Thank you for your entry to the "Expressions of emotions poetry contest". A small and simple poem. Nicely written and a very good attempt. I have no suggestions or mistakes I can find, keep up the good work.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

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Review of Shy  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Itchy Water~fictionandverse ,

Review of Poem: "Shy" 

General Comments:
A different form of poem expressing the emotion shy. It took some time for me to understand the essence of it but it was very deep, visuals. Thank you for your entry to the contest.


Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 4.5 stars.

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Review of Shy  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello,

Review of Poem: "Shy" 

General Comments:
Nicely written poem for the contest. I can see a well depicted picture of a person being shy among their own age group people. There are no mistakes and no suggestion I can give. This poem is well written, thank you for your entry.


Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 4.5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of Ruby's Rage  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hello Joey's Spring has Sprung ,

Review of "Ruby's Rage" 

General Comments:
A really good story with a twist. I'm not good with stories so I don't know much about the technical necessities of the story. Considering that it is third person POV, the story is well written and flow well too. How did you get a perfect picture to suit this story or was there a picture prompt? Overall a good read.

Title:
The title fits the content very well and the description below is about the contest it is entered and also a brief description.

Suggestions:
*BulletR* You could use a more catchy description to lure readers to read the entire story.
*BulletR* You could give a little more detail description/ introduction to Ruby, may be like her dress, hair which will "Show! not tell"
*BulletR* " A car door slammed and she looked up. The back doors on the Range Rover opened and two more young men in their mid-twenties baled out."
Looks like the car just appeared? *Bigsmile*, you could write that she heard a car arrive or screech of the car tires and then start this paragraph.
You have written "two more young men", but you did not talk about any other young men before saying this so you might want to change this.
*BulletR* "She scanned the shadows. Then he bolted out in a single bound."
This part was a little confusing, because I expected the other guy to appear, a bit of a surprize though. It was confusing because you defined "he", what you could do is, "Then someone/something/a shadow bolted out in a single bound." then you could go on too "he".
I have never given so much suggestions to anyone, so hope you take it with a big smile. Remember I'm good with poems and have never written stories. Hope you enjoyed the review.

Overall:
A very good story, so I am giving it 4.5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

~ Jilu

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Review of Missing You  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Ayero ,

Review of "Missing You" 

General Comments:
This is another lovely and sad poem from you. The lines are deep and filled with the emotion of loneliness, regret and broken heart. The word choice and flow is very good. The love reading poems on the romance genre and this one is has a depth that make me want to almost comfort the writer. It shows how much power words have and that they have greater effect if written and read well. Thank you once again for sharing this poem as well.
Well written.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of Love  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello ReeRee ,

Review of "Love" 

General Comments:
I love reading poems about love and romantic ones too. This one here is a quest to find the elusive answer to the yet to answered question which is "What is love?". Reading this I was nodding to myself saying yes that's true. I have the very same questions to ask and I too have seen elderly couples walking hand in hand looking into each others eyes as though they had just fallen in love afresh. I definitely have no answers to those questions but guess we'll have to ask those elderly people to find out. This was thought provoking and lovely to read. Well written.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Ayero ,

Review of "Now When I need it Most" 

General Comments:
I like this poem because I can relate to the things you have written here. It is true how people start treating us different when they no that we are going to give up and we are on the winning side. It was nice of you to put the little explanation of it at the end of the poem. The word choice and flow was good and this being a free form poem is good. What I think I liked the most about this poem is that you are brave to voice your thoughts and thats how we always should be. Well written and inspirational poem.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello J.K. Van'Ellesad ,

Review of "The Forgotten Heart" 

General Comments:
A emotional and painful poem written straight from the heart. The title was intriguing and that is what lead me to read and review your poem. Your writing reminds me of why I started writing in the first place too, It has always been my escape and it still is. Pain, heartbreak and tears make me write too but now I've become more of a frequent writer and hence I find solace here. The best lines I like in your poem is the last stanza. Well written.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of By My Side  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello ReeRee ,

Review of "By My Side" 

General Comments:
A lovely poem about realizing God. He is right here next to us and you have emphasized this throughout the poem which is a very good and makes me feel at peace knowing that He is here by my side and there is nothing to worry about. The word choice is good and flow is good as well. The title is apt and so is the description below it. Surely looking back I too have no idea where I would be right now if He were not by my side.

Overall:
A great poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of You are beautiful  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello rachel ,

Review of "You are beautiful" 

General Comments:
Beautiful poem about your daughter. You have expressed the happiness and joy you feel because of her. Reading your poem gave me a glimpse of what motherhood is all about and how one feels when you have a child, a great emotional poem from the heart. The words are very well connected and good flow too.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

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Review of Nightfall  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello Fallen Dreams ,

Review of "Nightfall" 

General Comments:
Losing is always a great time to think and write for me as well and I believe we learn more in failures than in success. The word choice and flow is good. Well written.

My favourite lines are:
Very emotional and beautiful
"Teardrops shatter like glass,
Their poems spilling on the floor,
Lost "


Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of Nostalgia  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hello Snder ,

Review of "Nostalgia " 

General Comments:
The poem is beautiful and sad. Title and description below are apt to the content. There is good flow and word choice in the poem. The depth in the feeling and emotion are good. Well written.


Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 4.5 stars.

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Review of A Love Long Lost  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello MrMajestic ,

Review of "A Love Long Lost" 

General Comments:
Lovely poem. A sad tone and very painful words. A short and nice poem with good word flow and no mistakes can be found. You could capitalize the last three words "My, Love... Fades..."
Well written.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of Warning  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello April Desiree-I'm back! ,

Review of Poem: "Warning" 

General Comments:
This poem is well written Naani poem. It carries a simple yet strong message that when the birds start to fly it is a warning sign for all of us. Surely the end of world can be seen as the birds start to migrate or rather flee. Thought provoking poem indeed.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

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Review of Tomorrow  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello April Desiree-I'm back! ,

Review of Poem: "Tomorrow" 

General Comments:
You have a unique writing style and not all your poems are the written in the same style and tone. I love this poem cause it speaks about how tomorrow is an illusion that makes us actually lose this very day. I love Shakespearean poems with 'thee', 'thou' and yours is a perfect one. The poem rhymes in the form a,b,c,b and maintains the form and flow very well.
Great writing.

Overall:
A Great poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

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Review of Tears  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Review of Poem: "Tears" 

General Comments:
I like this form poem a lot. It flows very well and follows the rules as well. Each stanza is unique and full of emotion and each stanza is whole and complete in its own as well. The best lines I like are the first two stanzas, they are lines that I would usually write. I'm happy to be a reading a poet's whose work reflects my own writing.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of He Is Waiting  
Review by Princess Zelda
Rated: E | (5.0)
Like a child, believe;
In this He has pleasure.
Live according to His ways;
In this you will find favor.

Beautiful lines.
As we grow up we cease to believe like a child, faith is so hard.
Logic comes and puts out faith.
A child's faith is complete with now hint of doubt but our's is not.

Thank you for a lovely inspiring poem.

~Jilu
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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello DonnaB~On a Roll! ,

Review of "Tear theTemple Walls Down, original" 

General Comments:
A poem written about illegal worship and consequences. The word choice and flow is good. There is rhyme scheme of the form, a-b-c-b, and a good rhythm too.
There are no errors in the poem so a well written one.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of Friends  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Jozarin ,

Review of "Friends" 

General Comments:
Beautiful acrostic poem about friends and friendship. It is hard to find and keep true friends, you have explained here the emotions and feelings experienced by a person who has lost all her friends and in the end gets them back. Good word choice and flow. A good read, but I have suggestion for you, you could try to increase the font size so that its a more enjoyable read.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello tarun agrawal ,

Review of "a old man singing a sweet song" 

General Comments:
The message of the poem is loud and clear, how love is being forgotten by busy lives. This is just my suggestion, you could try to correct your spelling mistakes and use proper sentences so that your poem reads well and can be understood fully by your readers.

Overall:
A good poem so I am giving it 4 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of Regret  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello anagha ,

Review of "Regret" 

General Comments:
A sad but true poem about the decisions many girls take during these days. This poem is a warning and an inspiration to all who are suffering to never give in or give up. Though things may seem worse and all the world does not care for you, you are a unique and valuable creation, who cannot be replaced. A well written poem.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 4.5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of Journey  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Amay ,

Review of Poem: "Journey" 

General Comments:
This poem is simple,its about life's journey. It fits the form well and has good flow. After I read your poem, the first line struck me, one step at a time is all that's needed,with no worries about the past or future, just one step at a time. Thank you for a nicely written, thought provoking poem.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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