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Good story, I enjoyed the momentum of the piece with a good climax at the end. Your piece was well written, I think you could draw this out to longer short story and maybe find an appropriate magazine to publish your piece. I'm sending 75 GPs.
I enjoyed reading your work. You have a great way of letting the reader feel the emotions with you. I comend you for the work you do raising your son, he is truely a gift from God to you. I'm sending you 100 GPs. God bless you and your son.
Your work was well written and your thoughts placed just right. Your work speaks volumes of what people are like and the issues we face. I think it was a brave piece and I will send you 75 GPs for your work. Thanks I enjoyed reading it.
I enjoyed your work it was well written and well thought out. I like the momentum of the piece and the climax at the end was great. Good work and continue writting. I am sending your 100 GPs for your work and time. Thank you for writing with such an honest heart it is reflected in your work.
I don't believe it is stupid to write your feelings or thoughts, that is the way we sometimes connect our feeling into thoughts. A way of rationalizing what we are feeling and how we think about it. It takes a feeling and sometimes turns it into a belief. I enjoyed your writing, God is love. God Bless. I'm sending your 100 GPs. Write On!
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