Rowan Oakenscale's (jordanateaton) Reviews

Rowan Oakenscale

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6 Public Reviews Given

7 Total Reviews Given

Review Style

I'm honest and supportive, but I will give advice about things I THINK would help beef up your writing.

I'm good at...

Chapters and short stories.

Favorite Genres

Fantasy.

Least Favorite Genres

Horror, romance (only when it is kind of intense all the way through), and nonfiction.

Favorite Item Types

Chapters.

Least Favorite Item Types

Poems and books.

I will not review...

Intense erotica (an item with a stupid amount of erotica). I will not review things with vore or anything like that, or things that are intensely childish (or made for children).

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#4811172

Review of Favorite type of Western Hero

Review by Rowan Oakenscale

Rated: E

| (4.5)

For the other type, I like the old western type, like the ones from Gunsmoke or something.

2

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#4810796

Review of Im Pensive not Depressed

Review by Rowan Oakenscale

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Great poem (I'm not very poetic, but I like this). Though, the fourth stanza needs a comma after the word "shame." And for the fourth to last stanza (is that what they are called?), the "then" might need to be changed to "than." Your choice, though, so do whatever you want to. Great poem though!

3

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#4810495

Review of Dogwood

Review by Rowan Oakenscale

Rated: 18+

| (3.5)

I have to say, this is a great start! I love how there is some segregation added! It gives some feeling of passion for the main character. There could be some added dialogue between characters to express this kind of separation between these half-breeds and the full-blooded dwarfs.

4

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#4808386

Review of Fursuiter

Review by Rowan Oakenscale

Rated: E

| (4.5)

I like this, this creates a metaphorical bridge to cross the gap of people who are afraid to show themselves, and those who are not afraid. It sounds a bit like an autobiography to me, so I started to wonder if this was on purpose. If it was, the idea is great, and the story is great. As a "furry" or whatever they call the group nowadays, I approve.

5

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#4807744

Review of The Brothers and the Allegory Rose

Review by Rowan Oakenscale

Rated: E

| (5.0)

I think this is a good short story. I think it would be great to see this as some children's book or something. It could teach them a lot, with how they learn.

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#4807636

Review of A Debt to Darkness - Chapter 1

Review by Rowan Oakenscale

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

I love this! I don't like books with human-like characters, but this is something I like.

I do not see anything wrong with the direction of this, nice work!