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Review by S. L. Britton
Rated: GC | (5.0)
I love the "power struggle" between these two characters. Sam and Zoe are both so in need of each other and maybe together they can find peace.

Nice work Mara, I hope that everyone loves this duo as much as I do. Thanks a million.
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Review of Muse  
Review by S. L. Britton
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Perfect, Ultimate Mara! You are so discriptive and put your reader right in the story! I fell Patrick's irritation, like it or not. And Jess's fear is heart wrenching. Thank you for another wickedly awesome story, and as always I can't wait for more.

Thank you,
SL Britton
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Review of Second Chance  
Review by S. L. Britton
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Your wit and humour never cease to amaze me. The love radiates from these characters as does the recognizable Gibbs charm. It's a beautiful twist the the tale we NCIS fans love so much and wouldn't it be AMAZING if they pulled somthing this heart wrenching? A masterpiece work once again, Mara.

LOOOOOOOVVVVEEEED it ...

SL Britton
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Review of Old Glory  
Review by S. L. Britton
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
As always, I am moved beyond words by your work, Friend O Mine. As a patriot and American you know I was in tears.
I can taste the smoke and feel the sweat. I can also feel the relief and guilt when the soldier realizes he is now home. Thank you for another amazing story.
SL Britton
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Review by S. L. Britton
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
OH BF!!!! I have tears dripping down my cheeks right now!!!!! I can see your little Inspiriation right now and YOU KNOW how much I love him :) This tale is truly gut wrenching and any mother's worst night mare. It truly reminds you of how short life is and how it change change in an instant!!!!

Wonderful angst Mara!!!!!
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Review of On the Chance  
Review by S. L. Britton
Rated: E | (5.0)
You know I am a sucker for a good romance. For YOU of all people, to come up with a moving E RATED romance.... I AM SHOCKED! *Shock* SEE I told you that you could do it BF! You just had to stretch your style a bit and there you have it! I am proud of you. All of the vivid descriptions you generally use to shock and sicken are found here to showcase a perfect setting and strong emotions. Awesome job!

S.L.Britton
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Review of Two of a Kind  
Review by S. L. Britton
Rated: XGC | (5.0)
Two of a Kind was a heartbreaking and disturbing story. Allthough 20 now, Monique has been through a lifetime of abuse already. I can't imagine how she felt at 7. *Sad* It almost seems she is trapped in her childhood at times. Maybe this is the way John wants her.

I particularly loved he ending. *smirks* So it seems it was not suicide but a bit of John's own medicine. He has the girl brainwashed and she wants to be with him/his. Not even Katie is safe at this moment. Not from Monique or John.

Great erotic thriller! Well done!
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Review by S. L. Britton
Rated: GC | N/A (Review only item.)
The detailed violence here is breath taking and heart breaking. You can feel the sickening sexual tension from these two men who are certainly depraved. I can almost feel the pain the woman in suffering, which is the mark of a wonderful writer. I’m hooked for sure.
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