Thanks for your story. I liked the ending. . . finding the real doctor. I'm an amateur writer so my review won't be helpful, but I want to encourage you to keep writing. I checked your portfolio and see this is your first entry. Congratulations! Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
Thanks for your story it's very creative and ends with the promise of more. You have a lot of characters which can provide you with many storylines. I'm an amateur writer so my review won't be helpful to you. I checked your portfolio and see this is your first entry. Congratulations! Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
Ash - Thanks for your poem about your freshman year. My grandson is a freshman and I imagine he is experiencing some of the things you mentioned. I checked your portfolio and see you have two entries. Congratulations! Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
Crystal Thanks for your prose on Bipolar. Whether it's a true account or fiction your description helps the reader understand the condition. I like the ending "He's the kitten version of me." Since I'm an amateur writer my review won't be helpful to you, but I want to encourage you to keep writing. I checked your portfolio and see you have several entries. Congratulations! Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
cobba Thanks for your story. I'm not very knowledgeable about fantasy writing, but this story as you note on the bottom is a continuing saga. Kaitlyn needs to be rescued as I was wondering what you have planned for her. I'm an amateur writer so my review won't be helpful to you. I checked your portfolio and see this is your second entry. Congratulations! You will enjoy this site. Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
Thanks for your story. Since the heading is listed non-fiction I'm taking this is a true story. My favorite part is when you meet the women who is the one you are spending your life with. I'm an amateur writer so my review won't be much help to you but I want to encourage you to keep writing. I checked your portfolio and see this is your second entry. Congratulations! I think you will like this writing site. Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
Thanks so much for your article on writing. Your desire is evident and your article is full of good advice. I especially like the last paragraph and your comparison of writing to a drum beat. I checked your portfolio and see this is your first entry. Congratulations! This site will be helpful to you. Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
Becky I looked at your portfolio and saw the blog heading and I believe this is your first entry. Congratulations! I'm not good at reviewing either as I'm an amateur writer, but I want to encourage you to write. I enjoyed your Christmas poem and it is a special time of the year.
This site will be helpful to you, I hope you receive the reviews that help you in your writing. Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
Thanks for your poem about depression. I have read a few poems on depression and each writer describes it differently. Your use of water works well for the ending of your poem. Also, I like "a pin drop" and "a drop in certain chemicals." I checked your portfolio, congratulations on your entries. Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
Taylor Thanks for your essay on internet bullying. Your thoughts on bullying are right on and it can happen to anyone(even older people). I checked your portfolio and see this is your first entry. Congratulations! I want to encourage you to keep writing. This site has a lot of information and will be most helpful to you. Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
Thanks for your story and sharing the pain of what is seen as failure. I don't know if this is a true story or fictional but your portrayal of the anxiety one can go through is real. I checked your portfolio and I think this is your second entry. Congratulations! I forgot to mention that my grandson is in his first year of college and your story reminded me that he too may be experiencing anxiety over his classes. Sometimes, expressing what we feel by writing is a good way to see things differently. Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey. (this is my normal tag line and if this story is about you, the "enjoy" I mentioned is about writing)
Thanks so much for your poem. I really like the last stanza, but all of your poem impressed upon me to treasure each moment, plus an important part - to go on with life no matter what the moment brings. I checked your portfolio and if I remember correctly this is your second entry. Congratulations! You will find this site helpful and it has a lot of information for writers. Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
Sara Thanks for your thoughts on contemplating life. You have some really good questions. The wonderful thing about your questions is: each answer can create a story, isn't that neat?
I checked your portfolio and believe you have three entries. Congratulations! I can relate to
your bio about life and family. I want to encourage to get back in the groove and keep writing.
One thing about life and family (for a writer) is all that you have experienced can be more stories. Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
Thanks for your thoughts on "not alone." The heading about Olivia being out of town explains the mystery of your story, I'm glad I noticed it. You ideas in this paragraph are good and if you decide to - more stories can be created from this paragraph. I looked at your portfolio and see this is your first entry. Congratulations! Whether you are a new to writing stories or have been writing for some time, this site will be helpful to you. Good job! Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
Laura - Thank you for such a beautiful poem. Though "Forgotten Beauty" is a nature poem I thought of the forgotten beauty that can be found in people. I want to encourage you to keep writing. As an amateur writer my review won't be much help to you but I wanted to let you know how lovely your words are. Keep Writing, Keep Creating and Enjoy the Journey.
Thanks for your poem and the innermost thoughts of one who thinks they are too heavy. I really like the last line especially the play on the words less and enough. I'm an amateur writer so my review won't be helpful, but I do want to encourage you to keep writing. I checked your portfolio and if I remember correctly you have four entries. Congratulations! You will like this site as it has a lot of information. Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
Ash - Thanks for your poem about friendship and how having a best friend can help with our feelings such as the one you mention, hopelessness. I checked your portfolio and see this is your first entry. Congratulations! You will like this site, there is a lot of information that can be helpful to you. Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
Addi Thanks for your story and the very descriptive way you describe the desire for one to end their life. I really like the way you described the note (water spilled, ink running down)
I checked your portfolio and see this is your first entry. Congratulations! Whether you are a new writer or an older one this site will be helpful to you. Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
EllaRose Thanks for your story. I really like that you included Harry watching the security camera. I'm an amateur writer so I don't get into critiquing, but I noticed that while I read your words I didn't pause in my reading(trying to figure out the meaning). I checked your portfolio and see you have four entries. Congratulations! This site will be helpful to you. Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
TG I remember reading your poem "Tumbled Granite" this is another good one. I'm an amateur writer and don't offer constructive reviews so please keep your gift points. I especially like the third stanza. Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
Swanhilda I really like this poem, especially "Human life is the best story you can imagine."
Also, I like how you end the poem. Your writing brings to surface something I have questioned, young girls may believe that happy endings automatically happen, so do fairy tales set up unrealistic expectations? (prince and princess stories) I checked your portfolio and if I remember correctly this is your second entry. Congratulations! I believe you will like this site. Good job! Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
Samara - Thanks for your story, I checked your portfolio and see this is your first entry on this site. Congratulations! I'm not familiar with Booksie but I'm glad you are here. I believe you will enjoy this site and it will be helpful to you. Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
Southernbelle - Thanks for your poem, it's a very descriptive writing about love. I may not be interpreting it correctly but the last line, "I finally said yes" makes me think of a marriage proposal. I checked your portfolio and see this is your first entry. Congratulations! Whether you are new to writing or have been writing for quite some time this site will be helpful to you. Keep writing, Keep creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
Court - Your poem describes the pain of depression and it helps the reader understand how a depressed person feels. I checked your portfolio and see you have three entries. Congratulations! I think you will enjoy this website. Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
Thanks for your poem; I think we all question life what we're doing and why. My favorite stanza is the fourth one - like a bottle, it can break. I checked your portfolio and see this is your first entry. Congratulations! I want to encourage you to keep writing. This site will be helpful to you. Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
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