Beatrice - What a beautiful letter. I especially like the third and fourth paragraph. This is a thought provoking reminder of the importance of our words. I checked your portfolio and see this is your first entry. Congratulations! Whether you are new to writing or have been writing for quite some time, this site will help you. Good job! Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
Your poem paints a great picture that places the reader in the scene. I especially like the last stanza. I checked your portfolio and see this is your second entry. Congratulations! I think you will enjoy this site. Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
Angel - Thanks for your poem "Armistice." Since I'm a real amateur when comes to writing and more so with poetry my interpretation of your work may be off base. I see the shadow as either the shadow of war or the shadow of a person or spirit. Don't be disappointed if I have it all wrong. I checked your portfolio and see this is your first entry. Congratulations! I want to encourage you to keep writing. This site will be helpful to you and will give you the opportunity to explore your writing skills. Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
milena99 - Thanks for your essay about your grandmother. This article shows how the diagnosis and symptoms of mental illness can affect the one ill and their family. Your essay is most thought provoking and will be helpful to those who are experiencing a similar situation. I like the last sentence of your article "more unapologetically herself than I could ever be."
That is a great sentence and allows the reader to question how authentic they are. I checked your portfolio and see this is your first entry. Congratulations! Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
zkyler Thanks for submitting your story about you. I really like the phrase "being a brilliant mind is great but a creative uneducated mind can be great." I checked your portfolio and see this is your first entry. Congratulations! I want to encourage you to continue writing. This site will be helpful to as you explore your writing. Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
Thanks for your thoughts ( I call it on living) good advice, I especially like "that we are to up beat about issues that we can't control." I checked your portfolio and see this is your first entry. Congratulations! Whether you are new to writing or have been writing for a long time this site will be helpful to you. Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
Ellie - I like your poem especially the last line. I checked your portfolio and see this is your first entry. Congratulations! Just want to encourage you to keep writing. This site has a lot of information that will be helpful to you. Your poem reminded me of my childhood and the line about the crickets reminded me of staying at my grandparents house. Your words took me back in time and I enjoyed the trip. Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
Maerus - Thanks for your story, you certainly are creative as this is quite an imaginative story. I checked your portfolio and see this is your first entry. Congratulations! Whether you are new to writing or have been writing for quite some time, this site will help you. I want to encourage you to explore your writing. Sometimes, just a sentence or two can be developed into a story, so each scribble is important. The ones you can't use can get you that much closer to finding the words you want for your story. Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
life - Thanks for your article, I like that you compare life to a book and we need to turn the pages. That's a neat concept and it makes for a good article. I checked your portfolio and see this is your first entry. Congratulations! I think you will enjoy this site. Whether you are new to writing or have been writing for quite some time you will find lots of info on here. I want to encourage you as you share your thoughts, sometimes just a sentence or two becomes a story. Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
Dallon - Your story is a reminder of how suddenly someone we love can be gone. I'm thinking this is a true story and if it is I'm sorry for all the sadness you have experienced. The way you describe the factory workers (sad, disappointed, and miserable) helps the reader understand how traumatic it is to have to quit school and become a factory worker. I checked your portfolio and see that this is your first entry. Congratulations! This site will be most helpful to you. I'm an amateur writer so my review won't be of much help, but I want to encourage you to keep writing. Whether you are new to writing or have been writing for a long time this site will give you the opportunity to expand and discover more about your writing. Good job! Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
Ryan Thanks for your thoughts on(monsters inside real or fabrication) "Into The Dark." This story poses interesting questions about the demons that we sometimes fight. I especially like the last sentence of your prose. I'm an amateur writer so my reviews don't really help, but I do want to encourage you to keep writing. I checked your portfolio and see that this is your second entry. Congratulations! Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
BQ Thanks so much for your article on depression. Most families have or know someone who is suffering from depression. Your description is vivid and allows the reader to come closer to the horrors of mental illness. The way you end the article is superb, showing sympathy and realizing the need to understand what they are going through. I checked your portfolio and see this is your first article. I want to encourage you to keep writing and I want to thank you for this article. Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey. (this is my normal tag line, enjoy the journey of writing).
gocreate I think you wrote this poem for me. Ha! I'm great at putting things off, so I really enjoyed this one. I checked your portfolio and see you have three entries. Congratulations! I want to encourage you to keep writing. Whether you are new to writing or have been putting your thoughts down for a long time, you will enjoy this site. Good job! Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
Margie - Thanks for sharing your story. I'm an amateur writer so my review won't really help you, as far as your writing goes, but I do want to encourage you to keep writing. I checked your portfolio and I see that this is your first entry. Congratulations! Your story has the ideas and potential to be expanded upon or to create a new story. Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
Rachita Thanks for your thoughts on "Separations." I like your last sentence about the scarred heart burning with desire to meet new lovely people. I checked your portfolio and I see this is your first entry. Congratulations! I want to encourage you to keep writing. This site will be most helpful to you. Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
Brownie - Thanks for your story, it reminds of the movie "The Christmas Story." The end of the story connecting the apple and ring is good. I think it's hard to write short stories/flash fiction. I checked your portfolio and see this is your first entry. Congratulations! I want to encourage you to keep writing. Whether you are new to writing or have been writing for quite some time, this site will help you. Good job! Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
Lex Dee - Thanks for your story;you are very creative. This sounds like a interesting plot that can be developed into a story that has many twists and turns. I checked your portfolio and see this is your first entry. Congratulations! This site will help you as you write. I want to encourage you to continue writing. Even the days you don't have much time, jot down a sentence or two. Later, you will be surprised at how your scribbles can be used. Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
Rhue Thanks for your poem, I'm not very good at interpreting poems because sometimes the writer has incorporated a mystical meaning into their work. I like this poem and my take on it is that you are writing about an actual fruit(apples). I really like the second stanza, I read it out loud and the words are a pleasure to read. I read your other poem, I think the title is Shotgun and it's very good. When I checked your portfolio I noticed this is your second entry. Congratulations! You will find this writing site most rewarding. I want to encourage you to keep putting your thoughts on paper and sharing your work with others. Good job! Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
GraceEleven Thanks for your thoughts about lost love. Even though it is a sad story it's one than many can relate to. I checked your portfolio and see this is your first entry. Congratulations! This site will be most helpful to you and your writing. I encourage you to keep writing. Sometimes, it's frustrating to me, but then I realize I'm much closer to being a better writer. Good job! Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
keatlareste Thanks for your story. Since, I'm an amateur writer I won't critique your story, I will leave that for those more knowledgeable. The only suggestion I have(since I'm an older reader) is to think about spacing. Not so much sentences, but maybe paragraphs. Just a suggestion, I'm sure younger readers don't have a problem with it. I checked your portfolio and if I remember correctly this is your first entry. Congratulations! I'm sure you will enjoy this site. I just want to encourage you to continue with your writing. Your story did help me see the difficulties a person has in hiding their identity. Good job! Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
jorjordays Just read your story and I like that you have the questions. The questions can be the prompt for a continuation or a new story. I'm an amateur writer so I don't critique very often. I did notice your spelling is good and your story left me wondering what is going to happen next. I checked your portfolio and see this is your second entry. Congratulations! This is a great place that can help you with your writing, being able to post and get reviews is most helpful. I want to encourage you in your writing. Even though at times it can be frustrating it can also be very rewarding. When I get frustrated and my story doesn't work out I just think I'm that much closer to writing the one that does. Good job! Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
Aeria Thanks for your article "Artist Statement." What a great article, you capture the essence of art and how it enriches the life of the teacher and the student. The sentence: "I have always wanted to teach," is evident in how you describe your goals for the yourself and the student. I checked your portfolio and if I remember correctly you have three entries. Congratulations! Whether you are new to writing or have been writing for a long time this is the place to be. Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
espoir - Thanks for your article on being a freshman in college. My grandson is freshman and plans to transfer midterm so he can be closer to home. Your article has very good advice. I checked your portfolio and if I remember correctly you have three entries. Congratulations!
Whether you have been writing for quite some time or not this site will help you. I want to encourage you to continue writing. The days you are super busy it may be just a sentence or two, but they will be there when you return. I enjoyed reading your article, it's good information for the transition from high school to college. Good job! Keep Writing, Keep Creating, and Enjoy the Journey.
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