first for the sake of your readers please remove all of those big empty spaces
I have dyslexia, sometimes my brain runs faster than my hands can keep up, leading to me dropping the occasional small word. Someone here at WdC suggested I should use Grammarly, a free grammar checker that I installed on my web browser, it helps make my writing more readable.
Also whilst editing this you might think about indenting your paragraphs useing a larger font size or adding a bit of color.
I hope my talking about the appearance, and not the content of your work does not put you off.
If I am reading you right you are suggesting using the earth's core as the core of a transformer. I could be wrong about this, I often am, but doesn't the primary coil of a transformer have to surround the core.
have you ever considered Schumann resonance as a way to energize the atmosphere. https://en.wikipedia.org wiki/Schumann_resonances
I was unsure where this was going at first, but I enjoyed the trip.
I think you might like the one about the dyslexic devil worshiper.
He prayed to Santa every day, for hell on earth.
and got what he wanted for Christmas.
A good solid four. but English English is already reabsorbing American English.
For example, you use correct grammar. the rules about word order, which enfaces to use and which pause goes where. all amount to an accent. but which accent. The answer is received pronunciation, BBC English. and you can't write without it!
the kid who flunked basic algebra in high school got top grades in physics and geometry.
as someone who has no mathematical talent but does have a bit of a big pic view. I wonder would you have a quick look at this, https://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/224...
and tell me is there any proof that reality is flat.
Cognitive testing or IQ test should not be administered on those who have + or - 6 numbers for spectacles or myopia.
I think you have made the type of mistake that I make. that is to stop typing but keep thinking the when I start typing I start where my mind is, not where my writing was.
It might sadden you to know, but up until the second world war cows did, in part, fly. Zeppelins airships and blimps all relied on cow appendixes to stay aloft.
An odd thing I put ICSI a type of IVF into the site search and it brought me here.
I have not got the skill to be a writer for hire but I am curious did you get many takers?
yes, the greedy b*s will kill to keep what they have got, but then they will kill to get more. If they could be the ones selling/renting you the box in your garage.
a lot of the jobs you listed are about to disappear soon anyway; pots covid, decarbonization, the rise of AI.
A minor point, try having a playwith the format bar and indent the start of your paragraphs.
up until the last paragraph I was with you. then you made it about Americans, who have inclusion engraved on your monuments, and exclusion is your normal practice. even when dealing with those who stood on that ground before you.
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