Jeff Sturgeon's (jsturgeon53) Reviews

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Review of Glowing Restricted: A Love Unrequited  

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Rated: E | (4.5)
I enjoyed your poem, it was well thought out and catchy. The rhyming sequence was off on a few stanza's and the last line I thought would be just below "lacking for thrills".

I gave it an overall rating of 4.5 stars.

Thank you, Jeff Sturgeon


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Review of Baked Potato  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
This sounds like a great recipe idea. I am going to try it the next time the wife and I make baked potatoes.

The only error or typing issue was: Either pierce each potato several, or use a tool like this:

I think you should place the word "times" after several. Other than that, great article and recipe.

Thank you, Jef Sturgeon


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Review of Reviewing ideas  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Maryann,

Thank you for the wonderful article on creating a review template. I will work on that to ensure there is consistency in all of my reviews.

I will check to see if there are different types of review template due to my reviewing different types.

Have a great day and thank you. Jeff Sturgeon


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Review of My heart is in a cough syrup  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
That was a great article, you articulated it well. I never thought cough syrup could capture my imagination like your article did. I really appreciate that!

I didn't find any spelling errors or anything grammatical.

Thank you, Jeff Sturgeon


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Review of The Snapdragon  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a beautiful and well presented poem. You brought the Snap dragon to life in a vivid and realistic way. To do this in 15 lines was fantastic.

I appreciate the effort and thank you for your poem. I am rating this 5 stars.

Jeff Sturgeon


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Review of Shrinking Woman Size Measurement  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I have to say, you have one amazing imagination! That was a very unique story and I rather enjoyed it. Let's just hope no woman shrinks like that, lol.

The thought and care that went into this piece was truly remarkable, kudo's on that. I am rating this 5 stars for the pure genius behind the piece.

Thank you, Jeff Sturgeon


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Review of Priceless  

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Rated: E | (4.0)
This was good poem, not to sure on the rhyming sequence but overall it was spot on for today's economy.

The flow was a little difficult at times and I had to go back to reread, that does happen at times but just one of the things I point out.

Overall I am rating this 4 stars.

Keep writing. Thank you, Jeff Sturgeon


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Review of A Prisoner In My Own World  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
What a sad but fantastic piece of writing. The topic is sad but the way you put this together and the thought is what drew into the theme.

Each stanza was powerful and added to the piece. Awesome work.

Thank you, Jeff Sturgeon


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Review of Toasted Gnocchi Bites  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
WOW, those sound delicious and I am looking forward to making them. I also prefer to utilize bread crumbs instead of panko on numerous recipes.

Panko does serve a purpose but I can see that this isn't one of them. I like the addition of other sauces, that will give everyone a variety.

Thank you, Jeff Sturgeon


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Review of My Writing & Publishing Journey  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for the great information. I used Amazon/Kindle for my first book "Ghost Peppers" and you're correct, It was difficult. I had my 28 year old daughter help me which made the process easier.

I found a college student who was ready to graduate in the publishing and editing field and she did a great job on my book. For me that served two purposes; the first was it was inexpensive, $150 for the entire manuscript and second, she referred it to friends and family. She just finished with my second book and I look forward to working with her.

How did you go about getting it on Barnes & Noble Online? Any help in that quest would be greatly appreciated.

Again, thank you for your insight! Jeff Sturgeon


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Review of I never meant for this to happen.  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
WOW! That was a very powerful set of words, feelings and thoughts. I felt it was well constructed and each stanza was clear and concise.

My only issue and this is my opinion only, I had a difficult time with the font. Besides that, very well written and thought out.

I am giving you 5 stars, you've certainly have earned those!

Thank you, Jeff Sturgeon


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Review of Atlanta Pride  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a great poem, I thoroughly enjoyed the history lesson laid out so uniquely in this piece.

I enjoyed the rhyming sequences that you had laid out throughout the poem.

The only grammatical or spelling error I found was in this line: "!996 US Olympics, Amb. & Mayor Andrew Young." Is the ! a mistake? If not then please disregard.

I rate this 5 stars and appreciate all of the hard work and planning that had to go into this poem

Thank you, Jeff Sturgeon


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Review of True Love Forever - My Cherished Girl  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a very well written and thought out poem. I could feel the love and encouragement in every verse.

The rhyming sequences were very well done. The only exception was this verse: "Unique in our values, two partners’ paid dues" which doesn't rhyme.

I still an rating this 5 stars. I appreciate the entire poem and the hard work that must have went into this.

Thank you, Jeff Sturgeon


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Review of Why All the Secrecy  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
That was a very powerful message and a great piece of poetry.

I liked how you pieced the theme throughout the piece, each stanza conveying the message so eloquently.

Hope that hasn’t happened to you.

Thank you, Jeff Sturgeon


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Review of Escaping his own trap -- Quickie Rnd 386  

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
That was a great story, erotic but very clean and respectful.

I didn’t anticipate Cassie would be modeling and then her giving those pictures to Darren, great twist.

Punctuation looked solid and I didn’t see any grammatical issues.

Thank you for a great read. Jeff Sturgeon


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Review of River Blues Bring Yellow Flowers  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
The poem, in my humble opinion was perfectly laid out and the 4 sets of words were used beautifully.

The rhyming sequence was spot on and was wonderful to hear when I read it out loud.

This was a fantastic poem overall and I wish you success in all future writing.

Thank you, Jeff Sturgeon


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Review of Sarah Ebon  

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I enjoyed the rhyming sequence and thought you did a great job with that.

The use of fantasy characters like dwarves and elves was an added touch which did surprise me, in a good way.

Overall this was an excellent piece of poetry.

Thank you
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Review of Crystal Painting  

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
That was not just beautiful and thoughtful, it clearly painted a brilliant picture in my mind. Not many poems have done that for me so amazing work there.

I enjoyed the theme, the read and appreciate the effort you must have put into creating this brilliant piece of poetry.

Thank you


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Review of In My World  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Absolutely beautiful free verse poem. The feeling and a beauty of what you wrote was powerful and intoxicating. I appreciate how you portrayed the fact that true love sometimes can never come to fruition due to circumstances beyond our control. Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Sorcerer  

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I enjoyed this poem very much, the title drew me to it immediately.

Structure: I found it to be perfect, and well thought out. The 2 stanza's was perfect for what you needed to convey.

Rhyming: The rhyming sequence was good, I enjoyed the use of words which really impacted the message of the poem.

Rhythm: The rhythm was solid, I was able to read through the whole poem without having to reread any lines.

Overall: I thoroughly enjoyed this poem and wish you the best in your future writing.

Have a great day!!


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