|Hello, Don Two
I found this poem when I clicked the Read and Review button, and I'm so glad I did! Here is my review:
I LOVE this poem. The language is superb, and I really believed the very real need for snow, even though I live in an area that gets too much of it, and I always long for Arizona in the middle of winter.
I love the line"...for that flocculent flake that covers fields," and also "...where snow is as alien as milk on the moon." Just lovely.
I only have one small suggestion, and it has nothing to do with the poem itself. I would suggest not using the "other" category as a genre, as it isn't as visible in searches that way. Also, a cover image would be lovely for this.
I didn't notice anything here.
This is definitely a 5 from me. Very nicely done!!