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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Thank you for this informative piece. I liked where you talk about the different types of scenes and their purposes. I still struggle some with fiction writing, so it's nice to have information like this handy. Thanks for the good read.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
A dark and lovely poem. I like the mood and feel of this. Nicely done.
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Review of Vicious Cycle  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I love the opening and closing lines of this poem. Very nicely written. If I could make one suggestion, it would be that the use of the word "barraged" in the second line is past tense, when the rest of the poem seems to be in present tense. Maybe use "barrage" instead? A good, enjoyable read.
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Review of Into The Dark  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Dark and moody. A nicely written piece. I would recommend adding some question marks in the beginning. There are three questions with no question marks. I can't tell if this was piece was written as part of a larger piece, or if it's a stand-alone bit of stream of consciousness writing, but either way. I like the darkness of it.
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Review of Salvation  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is great! I had never heard of a waltz poem before, it sounds like a neat form. I love the subject matter as well!
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I'm having so much fun with this contest! Thank you so much for taking the time to judge and moderate.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Beautiful imagery here! The language here is lovely. A nice poem.
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Review of The Accused  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Ooh, I loved the surprise ending. Very nice piece.
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Review of The Talent Pond  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I'm curious how to join this group? The intro said there was a survey somewhere? Anyway, I am interested in joining the gang. Just let me know what to do. Thanks!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A very concise, and informative write up about an important topic. I agree with your subject and feel that a registry for many medical procedures and devices is long overdue. Your technical writing skills are excellent. I'm not sure who this is written for, maybe a college assignment, or if you write this sort of thing for a living, but I found it informative and educated.
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