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Review of Picture of death  
Review by Kalai
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well written mystery. With few characters you have successfully written a story full of suspense. The description of a morning on the hill side is breathtaking. You have not missed not even a minute detail to bring the picture of nature before the eyes of a reader. The story flows on smoothly with suspense hanging behind. You have unfolded the suspense with an ease and that makes you to be a perfect writer of mysteries. Keep it up.
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Review by Kalai
Rated: E | (4.5)
The flow of thought that runs through each line of the poem will definitely catch the reader's attention. I read through the poem again and again to feel the warmth of love for a long lost dear soul. Yearning for the return of someone you love is something that a love stricken heart can feel. Beautiful. I can feel the smooth caress of love in the words of your poem and it made me think about my friend who left me two decades ago.
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Review of Darksome  
Review by Kalai
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well written. There is a smooth flow in the story. With very few characters you have succeeded in writing a good story. Suspense in the story makes the reader to read to find out what will happen next. Expecting to read the next chapter of this series. What will happen to Melbus? Could not wait to read the next chapter.
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Review of Reality of "Love"  
Review by Kalai
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Beautiful to read through your poem. There is a flow of thought in every stanza that is connected well with one another. Yet, I feel the poem looks like a prose line split into various lines. Word choice is perfect as the words convey your message to the reader with a vigor. I can feel the power of your love. Keep writing.
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Review by Kalai
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
I have to read more than two times to understand the poem. It really requires some skills to understand the underlying thread of thought in the poem. The words chosen perfectly conveys what the writer wants the reader to understand. The qualities that a muse looks for in a person who has the potential to become a master of words is something that I have never thought of. Your insight is completely different from the usual. Keep writing.
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Review by Kalai
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A heart moving story which highlights how some people's lives are shredded into pieces because of the strong fate line. Tears welled up my eyes after I finished reading the story. Who is to blame for whatever happened? Unfortunately an innocent child has to bear the burden of fate. The narration takes the story with a smooth flow. The tragic end of the story shows how the child got relieved from pain but who will take charge for the life she missed as a child. Touching. Keep writing.
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Review of Awakening  
Review by Kalai
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! What an experience to narrate! Beautiful! I felt as if I am standing on the shores of Mexico and enjoying the soft touch of the waves and the evening breeze. Perfect in describing everything around you and here from Chennai, India, I can feel what you enjoyed there. I would love to be there with a friend like you who feels the soul of nature and be one with nature. Keep writing. Expecting to read your next article.
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Review of Smothered Dreams  
Review by Kalai
Rated: E | (4.5)
True. A beautiful reflection of my dreams too. They are smothered and craving to be alive once again. Beautiful narration. A reader will definitely understand the state of mind of the poet. The flow of thought that moves down the poem caught my attention and a sigh of unfulfilled dreams escaped. Waiting to read your next poem.
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Review of What If  
Review by Kalai
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great imagination. I would really enjoy life if I have the power to redo everything. Your poem caught my attention and made me read it again and again. Simple and well written. The poem conveys a complex thought in a simple manner so that a reader can relate to the position discussed in the poem. Flowing thought is taken along with the free flow of simple words. Keep writing.
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Review by Kalai
Rated: E | (4.5)
Flow of thought is there in the poem. You have brought out the in depth feelings of a soul in a place where every thing seems to be not yours. Solitude can be a blessing only on very few occasions. The words you have chosen to convey the message strongly takes its place. Fiery hot summer reminds me of the dry heat of the loneliness that makes your skin shrink with pain.
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Review of One More Round  
Review by Kalai
Rated: E | (5.0)
Highly inspiring! Well done! I can feel the energy in the flow of thought that becomes perfect with your word choice. To-day morning I was feeling low, and your poem inspired me to face my troubles with an iron hand. It gave such an uplift to my heart. This poem is a timely occurrence that really gave me the emotional support that I badly need at this moment. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. Keep writing.
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Review by Kalai
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Your poem beautifully speaks out the request to people to love as you are and never compare with anything. True. I can feel the pain. The speaker of the poem is mature enough to ignore those comments and live as a human being. This will teach others to learn how to respect others without hurting them.

Some of the words vehemently thrashes against hurting comments made by others. If you could substitute those words with some other words, they will make your poem more polite and at the same time will send your message to others strongly.
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Review of Dreaming of You  
Review by Kalai
Rated: E | (4.5)
The thoughts flow through with ease and leaves the reader with a smile. You have conveyed beautifully to the world what you want to tell. Good work. Keep writing. Writing more poems will help you to present your ideas impressively.
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Review of Powerless Power  
Review by Kalai
Rated: E | (3.0)
Good narration. Nature has its own power that could not be controlled by man. Your poem conveys this message. I can also interpret this poem in this way. A person who struggles hard to stand against fate. Fate is mightier than any weapon. Just like the wind snaps away the lone standing branch of the tree, the person also sways to the ways of the fate and finally succumbs to it. Flow of thoughts definetely will capture the reader's attention.
Title for the poem : Powerless power !
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