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This is brilliant storytelling in poetry form! Great job of word usage for the story/poem and it flowed really well. I enjoyed the telling of how one woman had to go through to get to Canada during a bad snow storm. I loved how the main character interacted with other characters. Well done!
This short story is very funny at the end. I love the cleverness about it and using the math for the address. I enjoyed it even if it is under 300 words which is sometimes a hard thing to do. But this took a lot of thought eve if it's a very simple story to tell. Great job!
This is pretty good for a 7 line poem. I really liked the usage of words to describe the latest royal wedding, which I give it five years, ha ha ha. I was just kidding about that. This is well written and the poetry flowed and the rhythm was good for this type of poem.
This is really a great flash fiction story. I enjoy the character and her point of view. Great story telling and I can see this is happening. Brilliant work. I hope you keep this up. Great usage of past tense and words usage. Great interaction with the characters.
This is a great poem of a past lover. Usage of words is really clever, especially when you used your screen name in the last verse. Using rhyme with almost in every verse is clever too. It didn't have to rhyme and when I read it out loud, it sounded different which I like a lot. Keep it up.
This is a great poem that looks like a song. I loved the choice of words you used in this poem and the rhythm flows nicely. It reminds me of the book The Secret and this helps people who are going through a lot. It's like you are talking to a person with poetry. Very good job.
This is a very clever way to do a short story using a news report as a tone of voice. There are some stories that are true to this and there are no dress codes for having jeans below butt length, which should stop because I don't want to see anyone's underwear. Great job.
A simple but descriptive short story of one man's survival that turns into spending the rest of eternity in hell, repeating the same thing over and over again. Brilliantly done and the grammar is good. It doesn't matter who the person is, it's what he's going through that gives this story some edge. Great job.
This is a great short story and it sounds like something Stephen King would write. You had written a really excellent piece with good grammar and perfect style of your own. I can picture this small town really going belly up due to environmental problems in the water or the plastic. Good job and keep going!
Once again, great story! The last survivor of an apocalypse who tells the story about what had happened that caused this event and what happens afterwards. The main protagonist accepts their own fate inside where it's safe and tries to maintain sanity.
This is a great short story that doesn't need any supporting characters! Excellent work!
Normally I don't review poetry but this is very deep! I love the poem as if it was telling me a story of a woman who had a past history of substance abuse, who people thought was beautiful is no longer in the present time.
I enjoyed the rhythm of the poem and with the good choice of words. Good job!
Normally I'm not into poetry but that is the most clever and cutest thing I had ever read in a long time! Reading this made my day! Great choice of words and the flow is perfect. Very clever work using suspense only to lead into something unexpected!
I love dark stories about a ghostly figure demanding what they want and ending up killing Othmund. This short story had great descriptions of the characters and the actions. I enjoyed what was happening even if it's a prologue to something that you are currently working on if I'm correct!
This story about a boy's first experience of a dragon was very good in the details and the excellence of the use of words. For a short story, it has the potential of a book.
Only one thing: "Aaron was captivated, sister forgot for a moment, by the beauty of this creature." Maybe it's me but this sentence sounds a little awkward. But I could be wrong.
This is a brilliant story of events keep repeating itself, even in death. I love the way the story of the main character seeing people that he used to know in life who had died, sending a message that he wasn't supposed to be in "the land of the dead.
This is like a great Twilight Zone episode and the title of your short story is perfect.
For a minute, I thought I was reading something that Dexter if you had seen that show, would do but the killer prefers what he likes in his female victims. Very good description of the actions and thoughts of the killer and what he's going to do with his female victims. Great uses of words and grammar, in my opinion.
At the end, I thought that the killer would turn victim, however, I like the ending instead of the switch anyway and makes more room for what will the killer do next. Great job!
The rhythm of this poem is very smooth and flowing. It sounds like a person struggling with her own demons, she saw a ghost that struggles to communicate with her or a person who is afraid and has mental or physical restraints against her will. That's what I'm getting at with your work. Great job!
This is a pretty good story seeing the thoughts of the main character. I love the twist at the end. I like the description of the characters and their actions. The story is something like if you're desperate for help, be careful what you ask or wish for because you never know what you're going to get. Good job.
This is great poetry with history and maybe, and correct me if I'm wrong, with mythology. This is very inspirational to other writers wanting to learn about strong Celtic women and their culture. I really enjoyed this piece of art! It really gives a good structure without rhymes. Keep it up!
I enjoy this poem very much. I love to read nature poetry! It gives the reader a chance to understand how life is through the eyes of a tree or an animal. Or when a person suffers watching an old family tree get cut down or when a family adopts a pet! This is brilliantly written and the detail is excellent!
I'm part Italian and where I'm from eggplant parmigiana goes with anything that involves pasta, mozzarella, ricotta and tomato sauce! My family's recipe has been passed down from generation to generation. From my mother, and her mother, and so on. This is very educational for future and present chefs!
I like a story in a poem like Jaberwocky. This is really good story telling in verse and prose!
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